Incest is for the better?

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

This story name is already taken, but meh.

incest? BRING IT ON.

>>877257877257

It always is

>>877284877284 Yes, I saw.  I eventually decided that a <1500 word story with 500 views wasn't pause enough to keep me from using the title.  It hasn't been used in a clopfic yet (for some reason).

>>877330877330

Actually, I think the fic that took this name already was Joke-fic #5192398 that was in the feature box for like two weeks.

you know there's a r34 of that picture....google images shows you so many thing you don't want to see

moar? perhaps a last farewell kind of deal before his wedding this candace?

>>877387877387 Yup, Of course my image has to be SFW on this site, so I used the edit

>>877392877392 It shall be considered.  (No, really, I do like that idea!)

Well written clopfics are the best things on the internet. I have been waiting for Twi/SA fic that wasn't rapey or had Twilight being all seductive.

This was adorable, even though society frowns upon it.

>>877410877410 Thank you!

Very, very good. Especially for a clopfic. Compelling imagery and cute, believable characterization.

Liked it!

Amazing win.

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And yet another MLP going into heat bullshit story.

perhaps for the better.

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But, what do you expect from someone who wrote Hormones?

>>877498877498

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Also, for those concerned, this is NOT a going into heat story.

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Pretty good story. Favorited.

interesting to say the least

My fellow MN brony...I am jelly of all of your fics. Your writing style is phenomenal!

Well, I'm not a big fan of clopfics, let alone ones involving incest...But I'll give this one a look.

WINCEST

Loved it.

i enjoyed that way more then i should of.

I saw this and said O.K. why not?

*After Reading*

...THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!

>>877498877498 i have to say this. Statutory Rape involves an adult and someone who is past the age of puberty. if Twilight's age is the same as her as a filly in the show, this would be considered child molestation. yes i realize i am a very technical person/pony-thing.

Oh, that crackfic where Twilight and Shining Armor are peas got updated? Cool.

*Reads description*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1Idf6_x3cA

Twilicious.

Does anyone else think this is a very emotional journey?

Got any other good incest fics?

This is well written, though incredibly messed up lol, still deserves a thumbs up though.

>>877257877257

Incest IS wincest after all...

>>877257877257

Incest IS wincest after all...

That was interesting to say the least. Very well written, actually one of the best clopfic's I've ever read including non-pony. Now that I'm actually thinking about it that's insane!

D'awwwwww for incest. WTF I can't believe I said that.

*raptor purr*

bravo sir

you make incest seem ... awesome

wish i coulda clopped, but i was recording this:

http://youtu.be/9isMpx4tVIc

>>881608881608 Jeez! Already??    Awesome!  I'll listen when it finishes processing.

>>881620881620 wow. you responded quickly

>>881641881641 Yeah. Just 3:24AM, no biggie   (Listening now)

>>881651881651 you live in new york or something? it's 1:30 here in califonia

>>881659881659 Nah, New York is Eastern Time, I'm in Central.  But I was just out that way for Bronycon :3

>>881665881665 aww lucky :( im only 14 and i cant fly out there

>>881674881674 Aww, hopefully I didn't scar you for life.

Bravo good sir for such a creation and making me feel bad for enjoying it so much.

I now have a second scare in my mentality.

>>881682881682 so, what did you think?

>>881793881793 Just finished.   Awesome!  You read very well!  Your vocab is pretty damn good and I found myself laughing at bits.

Excellent read. I love the way you write. I found one small error where you accidentally a word:

"The incredible feel of her velvety walls squeezing me like a glove made my whole body relax."

Should be:

"The incredible feel of her velvety walls squeezed me like a glove and made my whole body relax."

or:

The incredible feel of her velvety walls squeezed me like a glove as it made my whole body relax.

But otherwise, excellent job.

My first clopfic, and what a clopfic!

You handled the characters very well, and brought upon the encounter in a much more believable way than most incest stories ^_^

“Twiley.  It’s a cock, not a flying machine.  Just call it a cock… and these are my balls, okay?”

That cracked me up.

I am sorry Flutterwhy4. I am still watching you and all. It's just, I don't do the incest fanfics.

So I disliked.

I didn't even read the thing. Not one word. It's just not my preference.

I'm still watching you. Just wanted you to know. I hope you understand. After all I don't wanna be like this guy >>877498877498 and be rude to you, insult your stories and generally hate just because he doesn't like the concept. Tsk Tsk.

Oh yeah, Natural Glitch, I'm talking to you now.

I'm Super Soni-Chaos Kinesis Gaia and I remember it so YOU don't have to. Peace.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                         -SuperChaosKG

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Since this writer mainly  does rape, I would assume that's what you're into, and since this is a type of rape, I don't see the difference.

But whatever.

>>882806882806

I don't quite think i understand so have a Trixie.

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>>882826882826 WHY? WHY DOES THAT TURN ME ON???

>>882797882797 I guess.  I don't see the need to dislike if you're not even gonna read one word though   It's not even rapey... more emotional, but oh well.  I still love you!

>>877330877330  Thanks, that made me feel soooo much better and helped my self-esteem.   

Nah, just kidding!   Loved your story, especially that "Not a flying machine!" line! It was a really good clopfic!

I liked it. Not badly written at all. The emotional weight and cuteness of it makes up for the subject matter, and I'm not particularly bothered by it.

You deserve a like and a pat on the back.

Oh Boy!

Later:

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Goddamn it. I'm here again, reading incest fics, even after knowing that I shouldn't like it. I give up.

I solemnly swear that I am a fucking weirdo.

Ridiculously well written and hot as always .  Truly another gem by FW4.  I don't rightly enjoy "cutesy-ness" all that much but in this case I found it actually added to the steamy clop scenes, something that never occurs to me.  Shining and Twilight here were both nuanced perfectly to their show characters which was something I didn't expect to find to such an outstanding degree.  Can't wait until your next one!

Ya know I feel guilty enough about liking clopfics in the first place.

*clicks fav*

Another guilty plessure I guess...-_-'

>>887193887193 Don't despair. We are all fucking weirdos.

And I came.

Excellent.

Although the concept of wincest can be a bit , I think you pulled it off brilliantly.

>>890376890376 Always happy to hear, thank you!

"When I was just a filly, I tried to suck his willie.

He told me it was really wrong to eat his meat.

I tried to shun incest, but as I grew older it seemed best.

Shining's member will make my life complete.

He's the one colt I'll spread my bum for,

I wish that he would cum on me.

My big brother, best wincest ever.

Like two peas in a pod, we did everything together." -Twilight Sparkle.

Source: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/33213/13/Adventures-of-a-Teenage-Foalsitter/B.B.B.W.E.

But seriously, you wrote a great clopfic here. I loved the buildup to the intimacy. To paraphrase sexpot Mae West, I like a clopfic writer what takes their time.

"Birds and Bees" and "Hearth's Warming Indeed" are two of my all-time favorite stories on this site. Keep doing what you're doing.

WINCEST! GOOD JOB! ALL CAPS BRAVO!

It seems so wrong, but feels so right. Darn you, author, time to add another fetish to the list.

Amazing.

Simply amazing.

Liked, faved, ect.

It's kinda sad how many people here don't like it cause they say it's 'rape' or because it's incest. For one, read the bucking description, and two, yes it's a clopfic, but personally I saw more than that. I really enjoyed the story and thought the emotion throughout was very well done. It is a very bittersweet story and I loved it. I teared up a bit, I'll admit, at some of the sweet parts. In conclusion, thank you for writing this. As mention in a comment earlier, there isn't many good TwixShining Armor clopfics. I will certainly favorite and look at your other stories. Bye for now.

~Grey

not even gonna read this. come on, man, you can be so much better than that.

And just for shits and giggles, Twilight Sparkles eyes turn emerald green and Shining Armor is face to face with a changeling.

That would have been priceless.

>>892772892772 Oh neat, I know who you are as well.  I came to Taming of the Screw a couple days ago, haven't gotten back to reading the rest yet, but the premise made me have to take a look.  Thanks for the compliment, yo.  I appreciate it. :3

>>893983893983 Thanks a lot!  I'm glad you enjoyed it and yeah, I tried to infuse the story with an emotional current that I really thought made the whole thing pop.

>>894160894160   So much better than whu??

Twilight: My kitty is itchy

Me: e_e

I think that was the "wake the fuck up" slap of the century

I enjoyed this.

Thank you very much.

>>904966904966 No, thank you!  

Strangely, my problems with this do not emerge from it being incest, but from the terrible plot.

Heh.

>>909532909532

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Dude.  Filly Twi does not have a terrible plot.  Why would you make her cry like that?  Poor girl.

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I had my trepadations about reading this, however I didn't mind it. A solid one-shot.

>>910335910335 By that he means this:

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Yeah. That kind. Insert overly sarcastic voice.

This is far too overly relevant for me to not post it:

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I know I wasn't the only one that clopped to this.

Right?

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THAT WAS...........AWESOME

......Probably one of my fav clopfics to date.  Well done sir   Why is incest such a turn on?

Well, I can say the character buildup and actual emotions made this infinitely better then most story like this.

Twi shifted on the bed in front of me.  I looked down at her.  She smiled back with a glazed look of happiness, like a dog waiting for a ball to be thrown.

“So can I do you?”

*Spits out the fanta he was drinking*

Jesus. xDDD

That was a really cute, very emotional and with good clop included clopfic. I d´aaawww´d more than i was turned on.

Filly Twi´s really the sweetest thing ever in MLP and her big bro agrees, he tasted her after all.

Hope you´ll make more of them for example a threesome with Cadence since she´s the alicorn of love and noticed whats going on between her husband and her new sister.

>>880321880321 I do

I almost clop

Anyway great story i'm waitin  for more

>>880321880321 Magic *snort* *snotr*

Apparently, her kitty was very itchy.

Now I feel really dirty.