Told you this story was weird and stupid.

The idea popped into my mind in the afternoon, and I decided to write it down.

Anyway, I hope you liked it. I apologize for having written another stupid story.

i like it but for some reason i keep imagining him/its name being jack o lantern

Yes! That's all I can say! It was funny, clever, and entertaining. The ending was predictable but fun nevertheless.

So...is Slenderman a brony then? Because the Brony's description matches his really well.

Was an interesting read, kind of funny. Aside for a chunk of grammatical errors that stick out, I'd say this is well worth a read. Good job.

>>872330872330 I'm not going to lie: I based the design of the "Brony" in Slender Man.

I even listened to his theme song while writing this.

>>872339872339 I'm really sorry about the grammatical errors.

I always try to check everything as best as I can before publishing, but I always miss some.

I Love it!

Also, will you make a sequel to this?

O_O, Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! I dont even, what? I, I, huh, interesting. I will give you a mustache for this.

Very entertaining fic. I find the thought of our fanbase being depicted as an eldritch abomination highly amusing.

*Shudders* Bronies are scary!

>>872635872635 Well it's true.

Reminds me of when I first heard of Slenderman.

Our monsters don't groom us. Ponies get such nice monsters.

>>872523872523 I haven't planned any, so probably not. Sorry.

>>872414872414 Nah, that's cool, we can't be perfect, that's why a lot of writers have other people do finishing edits. Speaking of, if you're ever looking for an editor, hit me up sometime

>>872907872907 Thanks for the offer I'll keep it in mind.

I love this story!

I love you.

I like the story, at first i thought u were ripping off my idea and title of my story "Legend of the Chosen Brony", but now i understand and like your story. ! and a half thumbs up! Keep writing more!

Another chapter. Come on, make another one!

Hello there, Twilight....Brushie Brushie

i have nothing to say. this is just that good of a story.

Great work! Very amusing.

Here's something that might help you down the road: punctuation at the end of a line of dialogue. You only ever want to have the punctuation inside the dialogue, but there are several cases where you have an exclamation point and a comma or a period and a comma. So here's some stuff that might help:

Statements: If you are explaining how a pony said something after they say it, you would put a comma inside the quotation marks. Here's an example: “Sorry, Dash, but I don’t believe any of it.”, declared Twilight. In this situation you would simply put a comma after 'it,' like this: “Sorry, Dash, but I don’t believe any of it," declared Twilight.

If you are simply ending the sentence with a line of dialogue, it is fine to use periods inside of quotation marks. Using the same example, you could say: Twilight shook her head, unfazed by Dash's story. “Sorry, Dash, but I don’t believe any of it.”

Exclamation points/question marks: This is pretty easy. If you have either of these at the end of your dialogue, you do NOT need a comma outside of the quotation marks. Take, for example, this sentence: “Are you serious?”, asked Twilight. Just remove the comma, like this: “Are you serious?” asked Twilight. Just remember that you must keep the first letter of the next word (in this case, 'asked') lowercase, unless you are starting a new sentence entirely.

Hope this helps, and again, good job!

Alucinante! te ganaste un Internet!

This was good! And your english is actually a lot better than a lot of writers around here  

Only thing that really stuck out was 'spitted' which should be 'spit.'

You have pretty great grammar-I didn't notice anything, but I wasn't looking either. Great job. That was pretty good, and the brush part? That was pure gold.

maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan, that was awesome

Take ALL of my Internets! this was pure gold!

please add more chapters! i want more Tales of the Brony!

Disliked on four different accounts, good luck getting featured. :)

>>872408872408

Most excellent, I also am a fan of his song.

>>873978873978

Congratulations. I hope you feel all warm inside now, kid.

its really a shame that i let rainbow dash get away from me that night. Oh i was going to have so much fun. well at least i now have twilight to play with...

And yet they do not know what happens if The Brony is angered.

>>873557873557 Thanks, your advices are really useful.

Since I'm not a native English Speaker, some punctuation and grammar rules are unknown to me. I'll try to not repeate the same mistakes again. Thanks!

>>873729873729 Sorry about that It has been corrected.

>>873332873332 I'm sorry that the titles are so similar, it has been a bad coincidence.

Don't worry, I would never rip off anybody, at least, not intentionally.

..............

What?

Hm, nice picture. Good job.

Image: http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/142/732/1309291821012.jpg

OH DEAR GOD

Put it here. It's perfect.

Very good. Thumbs up.

It's true!  I would do all of those things! I'm such a monster!

An utmost excellent read my good sir! I was sortof expecting the Brony to rape the ponies it captured, but somehow mane brushing and belly rubbing is even more hilarious and creepy.

>>875733875733 Are you sure? I didn't intend this story to be scary, just silly and weird. I don't think it would fit there.

>>875858875858 It's called a joke. And that site has lots of ridiculous stories that are meant to be stupid. Especially in the MLP category. Yes, they have on of those.

Haven't read it yet. Probably wont. If it has Slender Man NO! I wont read it. After playing that game I had nightmares for 6 fuckin' weeks because of that guy. And in every fuckin' nightmare I found 7/8 notes but he always got me. Then I wake up screaming bloody-fuckin'-murder.

>>875911875911

What game?! NAME it! Naow!!!

Well, she better teleport away before it starts giving her tummy rubbins!

Nice story, brony!

“They say the ponies who doesn’t believe in the Brony are the ones it will attack first!”

TRANSLATION

“They say the people who doesn’t believe in the Slenderman are the ones it will attack first!”

Como estas? This was a pretty good story

>>868047868047 Everyday I find awesome fics and this one tops the list for today at the very least. Fav for you sir and thanks for writing something that nearly made me lose it with laughter.

This story is like if Cthulhu's entire rule in Rl'yeh was exactly the same as Celestia's in Canterlot, but everyone treated him like he was actually Discord wearing a top hat and Groucho monocle.

This was terrible. You said it wasn't  gonna be funny!

False advertisement!

The image in the mirror should be reversed

ha this was pretty entertaining. I would like to see someone go off of this idea but for now I am quite satisfied. Thank you for the good story.

hhhhhhaaad 'cough'... dies.

>>873978873978  It's already featured.

Pretty good, gave me some nice laughs

>>875937875937 I know what game he's talking about its called slender, just type slender game on yutube and alot of video's with the link will show

>>876184876184 Thanks. It has been corrected.

>>876318876318

Thanks!

And I just finished story. Really funny and somehow seems logical.

The Brony is a collective unconsciousness of all fans that materialized (at least partially) in Equestria.

Seems legit.

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If only we could get a story where there are bronies in the Mlp world, they are known as monsters who can not really be seen in a proper way, just as faded shimmering shadows, and even if everypony is afraid of them they try to spent a little time with their favorite pony's even if they are not loved they love the pony's with all their hearth. They know they can't be friends with those pony's due to their appearance and the fear the pony's show towards the bronies..

They don't really mind after a while and keep trying to find a small nugget of happyness, forever trying, always trying,

Yup that would make an awesome story, too bad i suck at writing and every single time i have an idea i ruin it.

Feel free to use it as inspiration just message me if you make a story of this cause i would love to see one.

>>876388876388

Alright, I'll bite. HOW did you get your words like that and what are they called? Purely asking cause there's a few things I could do with that and I'd LOVE to know how to do it.

>>876457876457

honestly i found those two words on a youtube video and there is a site that does that but for the life of me i can't figure it out. my bro thuoght it was something like eemo.com but it isnt so if i figure it out i'll edit this comment with the name of the .com but its some type of text editor i know that for sure

well the site is http://eeemo.net/ so go ahead and

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>>876457876457

Z͚̗̪̫͍̻̓͐͑̏͗͝A̾̽̎̀̿̅̓̚̚͘҉̟͈L̟̟̟͔̱ͩ̋͑̅ͭ́̚͘G̾͏̨̦̭͔̤̤O̘͎̳͛͆ͨ͛̑̑̾ͤ

T̬̮̘͕̤͎͉̺͙̜̥͍̮͉͔̂̋ͧh̪̜̫̙͕̰͚̘̣̬̘̳̮̫͉̱͕̩̏̓ͪ̆̏̑̏͗̿͐ͅé̟̣̞͖̘̩̹͓̞̣̫̩͍̩̿̑͂̑ͦͥ̅ͨ̒̂̊̅̈́ͅ ͎͙͖͙̱̜̺͉̝͙̟͖͖̪̅ͥ̎ͣ́ͤ̈̓̌ͨͦ̔̅̉d͖̘̝̣̮͎̭̙̟̖̠̞̽̽̌̈̒̓̅̏̓͊̑͊̈ͮ͋̾̍a̯̱̫̜̣̟͉͍̩̘͍̰̥̞̜͉͇̘ͪͪ̉ͬ͒y̰̠̝̜͖̺̮̩̗͔̲̟̋ͬͩͦͨͅ ̦͖̺̰̝͍͇̲̎̾̌̎́w͖̠͍͖͇̜̫͍̤͉̯̫̣̩̝̮͓ͥ̄ͬ͂́ͬ̈͋̾̆̏ͯ̊ͦa̰̻͎̘̗̰͎͎̫̙̬͕̪ͥͧ̑̾̏ͤͬ̑̎͂̿s̲̪͈̦̦̗̱͍̪̯̰̣̰̻̞̞̗̹̘͒͑͊̋̾̉͛͆ͣ̇́ͤͯͪ̓ͨ̈́͌ ̰̘̥͙͕̣͔̯ͯ̏̍ͪͬ̔͒͆͊͋̽d͉̼̖ͧ̑̑̀ͬ̚ͅa̩͚̤̞̜̜̰̗̼̋ͭ͗͒ͦͨ̓̚r̰̯̭̩̥̤̗̩͎̖̲̩̉ͣͣ̿̇̊̊ͣ͌̿̎͋̉̔k͎̮̮̮͖͈̹̠̗͇̤̭̬̩̥̱͚ͩ̋̎̈́͐͛ͩ̂̚ ̟̫̜̈̈͌̾ͅa̭͚̠̲̙̼̝͊̂ͪͨn̫͉̬͇̫̘̬̅̂̈̊̓́ͮ̿ͧ͌̈̄̾̊d̺̦̖̟͍͉̙͙̞̘̮̥͇͉͚̎͌͑ͣ̒̋̌̅ͯ̿̚̚ͅ ̣̥̗̯̰͖̠̼̻̺̙̼̱̙̽̑̓͗͆̈̀̊d͉͔̞̞ͭ͆ͮ̑̏̄ͮ̀ǔ̜̩̟̯̹̞̞͍̼͓͔͕̄͆ͪ̃ͩͥ͗ͧͯ̓ͣͬ̚s͓̝̥͓͈̜͒ͧ͑̐̇̾ͩk̺̹͍̝̩͕̤̦̦͎̊͐̉͒ͩͭ͊̿ͬ͐̊ͩ͒͒ͅy̦̟̼͖̠͔̹̼̝͙̺̳͔̣̫̙̽ͩ̉ͨ̔̍̎ͭ ̞͕̪͈̺̘̝̾ͤ͛ͪ̎͐̒̽̊̌a̼͉͔̣̖̖͎͎̭̪͚̝̦̫͈̼ͮͣ͂̈ͪ̎s͍͓̖̰̟͕̩͚̬̬̣͚̗̖̻̞̞̘ͩ̄ͩ̔̓͒̽̽̾ͯ ͚͖̳̦͇͚̠̳͈̪̫̭̫̞̻̩̔̇ͥ͆ͬ͒̓̔̈ͪ̀͒̾ͯB͚̠̙͈̮̰̱͈̼͛̉ͩ̊̑̓̇ͪr̥̲̟̰̜̦̞̪̯̞̘̪̖͔͚̯ͭ̍ͣͣ̽̈́̾̇͒̇ȍ̟͎̠̼͕̳̝̂̒̿ͮ̇ͮn̝̩̰̳̖̞̗͎̺̮̥͖̤̒ͤ̑ͩ͌̓ͮ̅ͯ̔͋̋̐̒ͧͅͅͅy͉̲̙͙̪͉̤ͪ͗ͩ͆̎̈ͯ́ ̮̘̱͕̘͇̠̭͍͊̏ͯͥ̓ͪ͐̃̓r͙͚̤̜̟̦͎̣͔͎̺͔͇͉͕̪̣̈́̍ͯͅa̞̙̯̼̻͓̯̘̰̙͌ͯ̄͂̉̊͌̾̎̓ͦǹ̻̱̟̬͍̻̥̳͓͈͖̳̻͈͕̰̞͓́̆̿̊̓͑ͮ͗ͩͨ̎̊̌ͯ̎ͫ͛ ͙̥̗̩̹̠̙̹̱̯̱͇̖̱̱̮́̇͌ͤ̿͛ͯͣͦ̅ā̼̝̯͚̘͈̬͕̞̟̙̭͍̗̓̆ͥͯ̌͐̌ͅc̭͙̪͖͚̼̼̮͉͎͖͑ͬͨͧ̿̉ͩ̀ͣ͑̇ͦ͑͒͋̌ͭr̻̳̼̩̹̔̐ͧ͆͛ͪ̊̓̃ͤ͛ͫ͛͐͗ͫ̃ͬó̭̞̻̟̗̙̠̖̤̩ͩͨ̈͑͒ͣ̂̓s̪̠͍͇̦̜̠̼̪̮̰̙̣̲̟͙͌̿́̇ͦͬ̈͒ͧ́̎͐ͨ̆ͦ̽ͮ̚ŝ̼͎̘̥̖̆̈́͒ ̺͚̝̭̬͚͈͎̣͙̱̤̥̳̳̲̟̩̺ͩ͗̿͐ẗ̙̦͎̤̞̖̖̥̬̮̬̮̗̮̥͎̻̰͗ͥ͑̒̔̑̀͒h͍̜̪̙̥͎̟̦̣̪͎̞̥͕͓̒́̎ͧͧͤ̈́̊̈̌ͦ̇͊̌ͣ͂̀ͪe̬̖͚͖̳̗̯̹ͬ͂̄̆̅̂̄͐̓̑ ͓̮̲͈̼̻͇̩̙̘͎͗̽͛ͨ̅̀ͪ̏͑͊͑f͙͚̹̜̬͓̟̭̬̹͉̼̹̜̝ͣ͌͛̅̔̏ͦͧ͊̋ͣ͑̉̄̏͋ͥ̅ͬi͎̜̬͔̤̾ͤ̋̚e̙̻̮̣̹͉̪͙͓͖̳̎̒̈́̽͊l̥̲̲̝̝͚̳̹̼͖͉͉͂ͦ̆̉̀͂ͥ͆ͩ͐̑̂d̬͕̮̟̞̠͇̞̜̰͖̳͖͔̟̄̒̔̾ͦ̅̈͋̚s̝̜͚̘̿̊͌̀̎͆ͩ͊ͫ̑̏͗͑͗̇͑̚,̩̝͉̬̤͈̜̞͕͔̬̜̼̟̗̜̬̘̙͐̏͊ͧ͌͂ͥ̃̚ ̮̙̺̦̞̣͈̣̘̜͙̘̪̪̻̳̗͕̂͒̏ͣ̃̄̄̓̂̄̈̇̈́ͪͅv͔̗̝͚̙͍̭͕̹̝̠͛͗̂̃ͅi̺͕͎͖̺̞̮͖̭͓̗̣̠̐ͦ͂ͮc̪̤͕͈̭̝͖̳̠̞̮̩̥̦̦̪̖̓̏̄ͮt̹̞̹̭̙̜̫̳̯̗͈͉͈̆ͪͭ̾͂ͣ̏̓ͦ̈͊ͅi͕̞̟͙̼̬̘̪̞͖̊̽̆̌̚ṃ̭̣͖̥̎̉̉̾ͤ̑̑̉̑ ̦͕͇̞͔͙̣͈͍̟̻͔̝̂ͥ̄̍ͦ̈́ͅị͙̞̝̜̫ͦ̀ͬ̽̈̀͋͋̍ͤ̚n̜̲̫̮͚̝̻̗̜͕͎͚͕̣̫̹͋ͧͫ͒̈̑̋̋ͭ̅ ̩͚̼̦͚̻̼͖͖̳͍̱͇͉͍͔̙ͤ͆̔̌ͨ̉̏ͩ̃ͤ̍̂̊͌ͅḫ̟̖͇͎͓͐ͯ̏̒ͮ̍͛̒ͬ̓̌̑̆̌͒ͅͅa̳̰̖̳͙̬̱̼̹͔ͯ̋̏ͮ͒n̪̥̬̤͔ͬͮ́͒̊ͮ̊̒̌ͫ̇d̪̭̖̫̫̪̖̠̞͇̼̓̎ͥͨ̆̋̃̋̚ͅͅͅ.̗̥̤̪̙̝̟̹͍͉̻̦̗̱̑̀͋̓͛͗ͅ

>>876468876468>>876507876507

S̷̢̙̤̱̺̻̭̻͆͌͐̾e͇͓̞̩̝͋͂̄ͧ͗̿̈́̚͞e̯̻͚̤̼͍̩̐ͩͬ́ͨ͂̅ͅ,̢͙̜̜͎͉̻̳̥͂ͧͧ̑̄̄ ͤͨͫͧ̄ͥ҉̵͍̺͍̯̜̰́y̴̳̣̼̭͉͇̆͡ͅo͎̥͔͂̌͛͊ͮ͗͂ͬu̹͉̥͆̃̌̎͗͐ͅ ̷̨̭̫͉͎͔͓̝͂͆̏l̶̯͇̳̜̲̦̺͊ͅe̸̪̼̼̜̻̩̳͓̐̃͐ͯ͒ͬa̢̫͖̹͔̥̻̪̔̓͆ͅͅŕ̴̵͍̬̘̹̗̤̥̥̀ͅn̵̔ͭͧ͘͏͚͈ ̶̼͋ͩ̎ṣ̌̓͂o̵̭̖̯̲̖̘̊ͦͧͯ͑̿̽ͬm̪̟̠̹ͭ̈͑ͬ̅͆ͥ͟e̺̤ͫ̌̾̾ͬ͌͋ͧ͘̕t̷͇͓̖͇̯̟̎̈́̒ͩ̉̈́̌h̢͎̟̟͑ͨ͑͊ͯͥ̂ì̛͕̥̻̭̝̤͕̐͟n̡̘͉̗̠̪͉̱̊̆͘͝g̤̠̙̟͖ͯ̇ ̵͔̝̈́͡ȩ̖̱̙͎̳̱͆̿ͤ̏ͫͩ͘ṿ̮͇̭̬̯̜͑͒͋̆e͆̎̀̍̀̃̿͑́̀҉̲͎̮r̴͂ͬ҉͇͓̮͢ȳ̵̗͎̭̹͈̣̔d͖͎̩̤̟̃͐͜͡a̡͇̯͙̪̝̟͚͒̎ͭͭ̾̈͘͞y̡̨̞̪̭̝̠͚̙̝ͫ̽̈͘ͅ!̼̦ͬͥ͠

Thanks!

Slenderman is a brony...

I suppose he needs something to do when he's not scaring the everliving s-yay-t out of everyone...

Mabye that's why he stopped stalking me! he discovered the magic of friendship!

Well, as far as the bogeyman goes, the ponies are fairly lucky. At least their bogeyman just likes to brush their manes and rub their tummies.

Heh heh heh. Good job. xD The Brony is real, Twilight... there are actually millions of them. But you won't see more than one at any given time.

Also, there is something up with that mirror in the pic at the end. It must be the same mirror Twilight looked at in It's About Time to examine the papercut on her face.

This could make a really awesome Dark fic! Aside from that though, you should definitely make a sequel. With one of the princesses maybe?

M̶̛̪̝͎̜͎͇̘ͭ̄̊͑͟o̢͍̳̳̝̠̅ͫ̒̄ͮ̈́͒s͔͇̭͊̚t̢̳͕̮̏̌̄ ̓̔̄ͮ͛̈́͆͏̷̣̳̱h̵̷͔̦ͬͧͭ̔ͬ͟u̧̼̟̻̎͂̉ͣ͜m̸̱̥̲̳̺͖͚̩̮ͧ̓͒̑̓ͮ̽̀ọ̷̖̼̺̱̏̀͂̓ͫͯ͐̀͢͠r̛͖͚̲̥͔͓͓̫̅ͮǫ̲͐͞u̵̗͍̥̍͛ͪ̍̀ͯ̋ͤ̄́s̷͍̺͙͇̬̘͇̟̋̒ͦ̽̃ͩ̑̌̾

̴́̚͏̬̤̳̲͓͝Ǎ̡̙̬́͟n̮̘̱̝͇̼̪̩̏͗̉͗̍̉d̥̝̤̓ͤ̚͠ ̸͕̖̭͉̪̬̾̔̕n̶̲̬̻̣͔͚̈͜͜ͅo͇̞͕̮̤̝̣̔̿͆͡w̖̖̰̳͙͉̭̫ͨ̎ͪ̂̌ͮ ̜̜̯̀͗͂͘I̢̭̫͍͚̍̾̅͑͑ͣͬ͊'͎͍͇͈̱͈̻͓̳̐̐͌̍͛͟m̘̮̹̹̫̗͇̎͊̀͆͐͆ ̶ͯ͋̃̌ͣ̍͝͏̣̘̤g̺̪̰̰ͥǘ̸͖̬̻̮͚̱̙̖ͧͮͨ̄̚̕n͕͓͖̝͖ͪͨ̏ǹ̷̂҉̲͉͔͓̞̖̗͎͢à͕̆̋̃ͧ͐̿ͮ ̴̼͍̰͓̒ͫ͌ͦ̃̐ͪ͜ͅo͈̖̖̼̝̫̩͎̯͋ͬͤ̓͛ͣͦv̺̤̜͙̺͇̤̮ͧ̌̅͘͠͠ẻ̶̝̝͕̲͈̫̥ŕ̶̪̠͔̥̄̒̄́ ̩ͬ̌ͭ̈́̓͐̃̍̀u̠̜͚̗̗͛̍̈͝ͅs̯̥̱̲͈̯̰̰ͧ͊̍̎̑ͨͬ̀́̚̚ĕ̢ͭ͋ͬ͏̗͍̹ ̴̢͍̹̣͉̜̿͑ͪͩ̈́ť̜͙̗̪̔h̫̭̪ͭ̓̿͋͊̿̔ͤ͡i̸͍͙̱̻̝̫͂̆̀̔ş̶̠̝͔͛ͬ̆̇̇    

W͇̘̣͈͉͎̪̓̌͆̋̾ͥ̓͌̓͢͟h͛̇ͨ̆͋̈́̈҉͈̱̰i̼̝ͭͯͭ͡c͈͔̭̩̪̅ͣ̓̈ͭ͊̚͡h͖̹̗̼ͤ̾́ ̒̀ͬ̎͏̲͖̗̪̗͕̳d̅̊ͨ̽̍̍͢҉̗̩̦͔o͕̬͑ͧͦ́ ̖̦̗̩̭͕͊͋ͥ̃̓ͥͬ̕ỳ̷͍͈̅ͧ̽̏̊ͦ́ơ̖̙͉͕̯͕̗̍ͩ͢ṳ͎̦̠̣̲̈́̅ͭ̄̐͑ͮ́ͅͅ ̬͔̞̻͚̬͔͑͛̊̎ͮ̆̚͜ľͧ̚҉͖̹̗͝i̖̝̥̙͗͛ͨ͂͗́̔͜ǩ͉̼̥ḝ͚̻͕͎̞̪ͮ̂̅͡ ̠̖̫̘̝͚̉̆ͤ́́͝͞ͅb̞͕̬̈́̉͊͑̇̆̕ȩ̱̬͓̀t͍̝͔ͫ̈̏ͩͦ͛̿ͪt̘̮̫͖̣͍ͬ̏ͧ̅͐̓̓̅̕͘ĕ̷͔̟̟̥́̋r̵̢̢̝̬̭̘̰͕͎̼̆ͪ̓͊͋͊ͤ?̟͖͈̯͎͇͌̏͘       or

This was hilarious!!! :rainbow laugh: Truly hilarious. The Brony is truly a most sinister being!!!!

{Woooooooooo)

Thanks for this! :)

awesome story. great job.

and also...sequel, sequel, sequel

>>876869876869

Slenderman's already been done as a darkfic over and over and over. Slenderman as something light and humorous is refreshingly different. Well, not really Slenderman, but it's vaguely similar.

I fear no Brony. But that thing... it scares me.

Bricks were shat.

Awesome story, well written and cute. Loved it :)

>>873978873978

You do know that like 10 people liked this JUST to counter you right?

Thanks for giving it a better chance of getting featured (which it IS

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I actually have a different idea, about what to do with them, but belly rub is one of the priorities.

Weird enough to be featured mate. And in my opinion, well deserved.

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>>876915876915 Pinkie Smile is the better of the two.

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>>876423876423 Sounds like a good idea, but I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to write it. It has been a kinda downer year for me, and I prefer to write silly things to keep depression away. But maybe someone else could do it.

>>876587876587 Actually, it's the mirror from Bridle Gossip. I re-watched the episode to draw it, I even took a picture of it to use the same colours.

>>876915876915 Both of them. Pinkie is always cute.

So if you don't take steps to avoid it, you end up with a servant for life?

Seems like a good deal to me.

Pretty good fic, I'll give you a thumb for it.  It was an interesting story and the ending was a good horror movie-esque cliff hanger, but their were a few areas where the grammar wasn't quite write and the sentences didn't flow, not enough that I'd say I don't like it for them, but enough that you either need to get a pre-reader/editor, or replace the one you have if you do have one.

T̳̤͋̒̆̓ͪͩ̅h̘̪͉̯̮͍ͫͨ͑̅ͩͦ̚͟a̸̻̼̩͇̎̚ţ̃ͬ̾͆̅ͮ ̶͓̰̒̑͗̅w̞͓̗̃͌͗ͩ̃͑͝ḣ̟͖͐̊͠i̾̎̑c̹̫̖̝͔̙h̬̞̙͖̮͐ͭͨ̄ ͋͌̍̇ͩ͛i̡̱̝͕͔͂͊́̀̈ͅs̨̱̃ͨ̈́̂̈́ͣ ̥̯͎̋̉õ̰̳͊̆͛̆ͨn͕̹̺͓͎̋̄l͍̩̖̳̖̻̖ÿ͍͔̳̺͎̗̅̕ ̰̭̯͍̆͟s̳̜̍̂͋̔ͥ̃e̙ͭͬ̾ėn̫͍̖̲͓̳̬̅͟ ̺̹̼̠̐ͯͧä́̿͐̔̀ș͉̲̼̳̭̅ ̮͎͞ṡ̻͓̋ͪͨ̐̋̅h̟̪ͩa̗̩͈̱͚ͮd̷͈̙͚̩̱̜̒ͭ̑̌͐̑ͭͅỏ̟͐͂ͥͮw̤̼̭̲̬̒͂̍ͧ.̄̀

͈̹͇̺̤̫I̢͎̩̅ͤ̽t̳̼̠̯̜̤͇̑̔ͮ'̈́ͦͮͨ͘s͎͈̊ ̭̅͋̌f͞a͚̲̥ͥ̊̅̇̚c̝ͥ͆͝e̡͕̊̇ ̮̲̙̣̻̐̑͑̾̓̄u̶̳̗͈̠̖̼ͥ̐̓͋ͬ͑̚n̼̜͍̯̝̦̄ͦ̐̂̃k̠̋͋n̰̙͉̠̬̞͆̓͆̓ͬ̔ͭô̧̖̘̥͕̄ͩw̲̝̟̤̪̥͒̉̂ͭ̓nͫ ̪̻̋͗ͧ͠ͅt͓͓̻͚͓͘o͐̈̾̔͏̩̦̳ ̫̬͔͔̭͖ͥ͛͡ą͇͚ͮ̄ͤl͍̤̝̑͗̏̋̋ͩ̑l̜̟͗̉̔̇.̵̿ͣͫ͗̏ͪ̋

̢̙̹̃̋ͦͤͫͤA̢͍ ̱̦̱̮͍̻̱d͚̙̫̼̱͂á͈̞̲̬̾̚r̨͚̞̪̖̈́̋̊k̨̩̭͓͖̬̩̼n͔͚̳̦̳̯e͑sͬ̅͗ͩs͓̝͙̬̍ͯ̚ͅ ̧͓̬̱̟̪̣̆w̪̓h̞̺̟̳̣̒̈̕ͅḯ͕͔̠̩̣ͤ̒ͥ̓̈͞c͕̮̭͔̻̲̉ͯ̂ͤͫ̾ͮͅh̙̲̹̫͉̜͓̅ ͓̲͕̫̟ͫ͌́ͅf͇̫̹̘̠͖͒̌͆̇̋ͧ̍e̢̘̪̽́ͨ̀̆ͅa̙̤͖̞̬̤̋̍r̝ͬ̔ͪͪ͡s̴̤͚̦̤͓ͥ̎ͦ ̱̤͂ͤ̀̚n͛̐͛͊ǒ̶̱̒̋ͦt̖̕ ̹͎̥͖́ẗ̨ͭ̑̒h̫̝͕̹̼̓ͦ͐̐ͩ͂ȩ̫̀ͫ̉ ̢̤̓͐̏ͭ̆̚ͅl͈͙̓ì̗͊ͯͨ͠ĝ̛̻̠̀ͨ͆̄ͤͩh̰̟ͫt̳̘͚͈̦̀͗ͅͅ.̟̯̘̅ͬ͛͆

̫̲̲̙̺ͧͮ̐̓̉̌̉ͅͅJ̻̩̣̰͓ͫ͆͗ͥͅu͓̫͂ͩ́ͭ̒ͯ̏̀s̫̙̭͍ͭͅͅṯ͕͔̜̭́ ͍͔̭̥̓̋ͣ̂ͫͅb͓̳̺͒̒̔̅́̚eͮ̔ȳ͉̟̰̘͚̈̿ͯͧͯ̚ͅo͎͎̠̣͙̲̓͗ͬͥ̀n͚͔̩͍̯͇̖̈́ͦͫ̿̅ḋ̩͚̺̞̭͓̫̃ ̝ͤ̀ͭt̢̥̩̱̙̝ͥ̍̊̄ͅh̰̣̖̞͚̝͐ͩ͒ͣ̀̀ȩ̙ͧ͑͌̒̐̾̊ ̱͕̤̜͙͎ͩ͌̌̈̊k̛̠̠͈͆ͮ̾ͩ̚nͮ͌͑͗̊́ͬͅo̹ͯ̑̓͂̿ͪw͏͈͇̗͎͖̰͈n̴͙̠̥̖͉͚͂̊ͭ,͚̮̔ ̰̤ḟ̠̑ͤͬe̦̙͈̮͍ͯͥ̾ͮ̽̈à̵̙͈͉͎͈ͤͨ́̈́̈̊r͎̜̜̭͊̒ͤ͊̑ͅe̟̱̙̼͈͈͍ͭd͛ͦ̃̏͗ͫͧ҉̞͕̲̼̦ ̷̲̼͙̞͔̲̉b̈̽̽ͧý̪͕̼̟̩̠͍͛̾̓ͦ ̫̘̗̭ͩ̆t͇̤ͩ̏̐̇ͯ͊ͯh̫̟̲̘̮̎͆̊̊̚͢ơ̳̗̥ͪ̂͌͋̑ͥ̚s̹̿͗̃ͥ̍͊́ē̍͌̉͑ ͚͙̎͋͠w̸̥̙̣̺̤͇̄h̫̞̰̼̬͖̖̋̃ͯo͚͎̤͖̫̯͚ͥͬ̈ ̶̜͓̗̳̮̺̣t̶̑͆r̗̈́ỳ̥͙͍̲ͅͅ ̟̞̥̣̣ͥͧt̺̭ͨͬ̊͆͋o̠̥̗̰͍̲͓ ͚̝͚̳͎̌̍̈͊̀u̥̾͊̾ͮṇ̏̑͑̏d͓͒͆ͥ̏̾ē̲͇rͯ҉̼̺̖̥̘s̢̭͖̮̟̺̮̰ͭͧ̑͛t̳͍̫ͮ̃ͪ̾a̬̜͚͚̰̩̘̒̋̿̿ͥ̓̌́n̳͚͓̻̬̮d͋.̶̖̼͊ͧ͋̃ͪ̈́͋ͅ

̴͖̭͙̭̳͉̞̊ͣ́̉͗̂̄T̥̩̗̟͈̱̪ͤ͑͢ẖ̫̮̱̹̖͛̌ͯ͝é͉̩ͦ̿́͊͂͌ ̰̹̊̑́b̫̪̜̆͋͗a̯͍͖̟͖̜̜̎̓̊̉ṅ͓̗̯̗̫̎̽͘e̬̹̪̦̘̭̲ ̀̎ò̳̣͓͒̅̏ͣ̚f̀͞ ̸͚̼̟͙͍͇͂ͬw͏̩̘̘̲iͨͥͦ̉s̛͋̌̃͊ͤ̒̓d͎͍̰̩̣̲̊̄ͤ̊͛͋̆ô̬̥͍͋̎̍ͯͨ͊́m̼̼͇̥̭̜̦̀̋̄͛ͦ̈́,̙̹͇́͂̚ ͙̬̱̼̱̲̎͟o̪̪̺̗ͤ͐̑ͧ̀f͔̜ͣ̅ͮ̊̄ ̗̑̃̋̋̓̓̀r͔̫͍̈̽͟a̛̯͍ti̞̩̟͑͌̿͛o̟̭̺͌̉́̄n̘̲̿̈̓ͭ̌ͪ̈́ͅaͬ̉͐̈́l̬͉͇̞͕̝̪̆i͔̦̦̭̹̼̥ͪ͋̏̂͘t̯̩̰̺̓̎ͫͦ͂́y̼̪̍ͣ̇̃ͧ͋,͍̳̩̱ͫ̈̿ͯ̆ ̂ͪ̏ͥ̚͏̳̹o͕̙ͨ̐͗͋ͅf͔̪ͥ̾ ̨̙̺̭̐͂ͥ̋ͤ͂̉k̺̮̤̖̮̟̊ͯͤͫñ̘̥̳͙̯͆͌͐ͬ̐ő̴̯̤͎͔̹̤̀͂͑͆ẃ̥͇̹̩͇̗̯l̶̜͖͉ͩ̈́̓͆̚̚e̘ͦ̑ͬ̃͋̈́d̨͎̝̰͕̼̤͈ͣg͚̥͇̦͙͔ͥ̋ͮ͊̏e̛̲̮̳̹̅̊͒.̘̲̟ͣ̑̒͋̀ͨ͠

͙̗̟͖̹̻͔I͛̾͊ͧ̃҉t͇̩̺̻͖͆̚ͅ ̴̭͈͍̜̗̬̯̂ͣh͓̮̞̯̟͇̄̋u̮͙̥̻ͥ̿n̰t̖͉͎͇̗̙̖̅̋ͯͭ͑͟ŝ̖͉ͪ̕ ̶ͮͦͮ̐̄͗t҉̼̙̻͚͕͖ͅh̩̫̍͋͊ȏ͙̋̅̽s̯͍͚͚̫̣ͥ̕ȅ̜̳ͨ ̷̙̀̑͐͒̔̓͗wͦ̉ͯ̏̾h̼̝̞̳͔͉̄́̀̅ō̱̘̂͂̏ ̸͔̔ḑ̯͉̙̔̐ͣ̓́̑è̮̖̟̱̠͋ͭ͗̌͛̈́nͣͨ͜y͖͎̭̜̤͔̍̂ͦ̋ͪͪ͛ ̨̅̐̇͑̇͒ͅI͓̙͉̍͑̔̂̄̚͞t̴̝̗̞͎̎͑͒̋̓͑͊'̩ͥs̵͍͈̿̓ ̱͎̖̻̋̍͑ͫn̩͋̈ͧ̈͜ă͓͖̘̎̐͞m҉̲͈̮͍͈e͓̫͕̟͓̟͆ͧ̾̔́ͫͅ.̢̠̺̱͚̗͚̔͑̿̔ͪ̊

̡̙̭̘̯ͯI̾̃t̮̰ͮ̇͌̒ ̐̊ͬ̍̀w̶̖̲̦ͭͦ̈́ͦ̿ḫ̜̻͖͈̾ͫ̚i͉͇̠͍̻̐͆ͣ͗̌ĉ̤̔͆̆̏̅ͨ͟h̪̳̱̖̣̫̎̈ͧ̔͆ ͉̲̝͍͖̰̌̉i̦͖͜s̱̤̲̺̮̣̤͂́̏ ̡̹̑̉̉̊̔oͮͨ́ḽ̤̗͝d̢̏ͮ̋͒̒̆̃e͙̦̣͚̽͒͜ͅr̶̻̝̹͓͉̰̠̂̈ͣͥ ̺͖̦͙̳̦͚ͥtĥͥ̅͒̊ͫą͍͍͑ͣ͆͆̋n̒͗̑̐̌͂̊́ ̷̮̝͈͐̎̾̍t͙͙͈̖̺͖̂̅̚͝i͙͙͖̼̻̯͑ͬ͂͒̆ͧ̓m̜̈́e̹͚̦̮͇̱̯̊͂ͩ̍̓͡ ̯̳̗͍͙̲͇̌̑̉̆̓̂ͤi̳͔͞t̛͖̥͆ͧͨͨ͌̿ṣ̼̮̘̠͑̅̾͂̋ͅe̩͍̗̝̻̋̉͒ͅĺf̰͕͝,̈́̐̀ yͭ̉̓̈́ͮͪ̚e̼̙̩̰͖ͪ̉̑ͫ́t̡̏ ̥̘̬̝̝ͥͫ̾ͤ̋s̝̩̘̓̈́͞ẗ̮ͦ͋́̉͗͝il͠l̻̟ͭ ̴̩̠͇ͥͅa̛̦̓ ͇͍̪̄ͨ͛ͩc̭͖̘͙ͧ̿h̨̞̳̦̜̲͎̖͛ͣͫ̀̎̇̚i̠ͮ̿͊ͤͥ̈́l̵̻̣̰̍̌̓ͣͤḓ̘͇̦̦̫͐ͪ̆ ̳̦̞͍̓͐̀͘i̸̻͉̞n̥̮͋̐̋̏̒́ͤ ̻͓̮͈͎̳̑͗͐̐̌͆̿I̡̥̖͉͓͍t'̰͚̘̦̗̮̦ͭ̿͆̀s̱̞̥ ̧̼̘̤̫͇ͦ̌̊̐ͮͮͪȍ̻̭̜̯͛̌͑ͩ̊́͘w̧̲̬͍͓̱̏̓͌n͇̗̠̔̒̏ͬ̈́ ͎͇̩̩̞̣͊͢ͅeͮ̌̍ͫ̆̍ͬ͏̖ͅy̴̪̻̆̃e͎̱͙ͮ̄ͧ́s̐ͥͧ.̘͙̮̣̤ͭͨ̽ͥ

̵̭ͭ̏ͭB͔͕͓ͣ̾̊̆r̴̹̤͉̯̔ò͇̹̜̘͍ňͨͫͣ͑ͪy̬̆̈̌̍ͪ͠,̭̭̘̺̩̿ͣ̅̚ ̬̩̭̙̓̄͂̃ͨͨ̚͟T̟̮̱͚̹̍͜h͚̘͕͚̎̊ͪ̒̍̏͞e͉ͯ͋̔̄͗-͚̺̼̞ͅW͑̏̀ͅȧ͚͇͉͈͙͂̊̑ͦl̜̤̪̖͖̰̞k̒͋͒҉̺̱̣̗̯̗͖e̠̗̊̍ͤ̉͂̂̃̀r̼͈͍̊̂͛̐̂-͉̬ͯO̻͎̠̪̤̓ͦͣ̉ͣ́̅͟f̷̼ͯͬͤ̇̚-͍̪T͎͍̯̖͋̏ͣh̲̯̥̣̖̞ͩͣ̅ͣͭ̏̀e͒ͮ̿̓̂ͯͭ͠-̒͟S̴̤̤͕̪ͫh̛̳̹̼̱͕̻̠̎̋̍a̞̻̻̝̟̖d̶͖̮̩̬̏́o̷̜͋͗w̟͇͓̝͍͕̯͒ͫ̈́ș͎ͨ̌̌,̵̐ ̷̲̭̬͗t̡̫h̰͎̱̭̊̿eͭ ̟̜ͭ́̾Š̛͙̮͆͂h̦͔̜͎̊̅̀́i̟̯̪̜͆ͮ̊f̡̪ͩ̅̋̐̍̚ţ̻i̡̗̬̘͎̪n̤̬̙̘̱͍̓ͧ͊̊̿̀g͎͈̝͇̤̀̃ͤ͗͌ͩ͊-̺̟̝͚͍S̖ͮ̊̔̎ͨ̚k̨̾͋i̹̩̻͐̾ͫ̔ñ̫̗͔͕̺̱ͦ͊̌̍̾̚̕,͛̈̑̌̉͂ ̤̘̥̣̦̙̦͂̃ͯͧͫ̓Tͩ͡ḧ͔̟̹͈̻̻́͐̍ͅä̟̜̭́̒̋ͯ̒̃t̺̗̩̠̗̲͈͂ͦ̄̉ͤͫ͘-͖̳̰̻͎̹̔ͬ͗Ŵ̳͇̘͈͎̑ͪ͋̏͐͆̀ͅͅh͛ͤ̒̂ͭͪ͒į̜̦̹̟͎̔ć̨͕̩̭̝̝͓͋͛̒̊h̭̼̖̙̥͝-͔̫͈̪̱ͬ̃́̒͢I̙̙͊ͩ́ͧͣ̒s̢͈̺̤̱ͩ̌̏-̝̲̠̳̖̻̊ͨͥ̐ͯ͑̚ͅŸ̭̱́ͯͥė̓̃͡t̴ͦͭ̅-͎̞͙̾͌̒ͮ͐ͩ̾I͈̻͍̙͇̍ͥ͐͘s̞̠̖̜̠͙͒͑̋ņ̥̝͈̱̉̎̓'̝͚̘̇ṱ͚̮͟.̖̱͚̻̞̲ͦ̂̓̓̚͡

͓̮ͯ́I̤̞̊̋͌ͣ͆́t̠͖ ̵̖̱̤̪ͮͅẅ̧̩̬̠̮̤̊̆ͮ̐ͅa͎͈̼͔͋̈ṭ̙̞̰͔͕̝ͨ͂ͬ͗̈̽͠c̱̟̾͛ͩh͔̣̦͢ẽ̖ͯͯ́s̶̠ͯ.͓̰̣̗͕̪̏̾͌̂ͯ̉̇ ̖͉̰̗͖͎ͧ͆̈̋I̡͍͔̬̟͐̓͂ͤ̿̆̽t̜ͯ̑̚ ̙̻̲̖̺͗ͮͦͤ̒̓ͫ͢kͯ̐ͩͤṇ̵ͩ̈́ͭ̾͌o̥͈̜͕̤͍̕wͬ͌͑̇̓͆̒s̤̖͇̳̉̄̎ͧ̑̋ͣ.̮̃̚ ̗̯̾ͬ͝I͓̺̗̪ͥ̑́͘t̤̖̣̤̥͂̋̄ ̪̩͕̳̭̏͗ͮ͗ͅu̢̫͕͙̘ͤ͒ͩ́̀̍n͇̺̱̯͟ďͯͬͬ͑ͫͤë͍̝͖́͆r̗̳͚̗̎̆ͬs͈̜͓̍̐̉̏̕t̲̘̯̜̬͈̤̋ͣ̐à͚̙̜̻̾ͭ̂̌̔ͬ͜n̗͕̰̜̅̍̂ͨ̎d̨̩͔̰͓̩ͅs͎̖̮.͇͇͚̬̖͎̠͝

I̡̙̤̻̼̼̙̗̫̞̥̼͖ͧ̃͑̈͆͑̈̏̅̓ͮ̄̈͗͢T̥͉̘̳̥͉̯͚̥̲̲̜̘͍̽͂ͤͬ̓́̐̅̿͗͐͑̂͜͟͟͜͠ ̶̢͚̫̟̹͉͎͙͇͛͂̃͑̉̽͟͞W̵̴̲̜̹̰̥̳̙̲̬̩̻̯̜̠͆͑̏ͬ̓͂ͤ͌͂̔̉͛̄ͩͮ͐͘͞Ǎ̴̌̌̔̌ͫͨ͑͋̉ͥ͗ͭ͌͒̚҉̴҉̲̩̦͇̥̻̪̀T̵̖̦̹̫͉͚͔͕̤̯̦͙͋ͨ̿͒͒͋̓̍͂̄ͪ͝C͈̠̼̙̻͕̺͕̉̒̿͂̇̍̉̊̀̏̃̊̈ͬ̕͜H̵̞̲͕͔͓͉̻͓͈̼̜̹̜̼̽͒͊͗́̎͒͆̋̃̐̎͌ͫ̏͛͛̇͡E͋̽̍ͨ҉͏͇͙͙̘͍̘̳̞̳͎͉S̀ͥͤ̈̉ͫ̔̏̂̌ͩ̒͂̋ͧ͏̩͉̙͈͚̟̬͖̮͉̹̯͖͔͔̭̼̘͢.̵̛̛̭̪̘͕͓̳̰̲͍̹̩̦̣̲̻͓̠͐̽ͦ̒̂̄̽̓̒̒̏͞ ̀ͩ͊ͨͯ͂҉̡҉҉̶͙̪͎̣̺ͅÍ̧̨̳̱̤͚̆̑̋̓͐̐̾̊͆̕͡Tͩ̋̓̈̑́̕͏̧͙̹̜̯̘̰̱̜̠̥̼̫̖ͅ ̷̿ͥ̎̆̋̓̍̃ͦ̄ͤ҉̠͓͍̲͜͟K̴̬̲̱̘̯̭̗͓̤͔̭̣̳̮̿͛̋ͯ̑̆͆͐ͨ̂͟͞ͅŅ̷̸̛͎̻̝̫̳̯̝̣̱̦̝̞̝̖̲̖̼ͣ̈́͒͑̐̎Ö̵̝͎͓̲̖͕̜̐͒̈̉ͭ̈́̅̒̿ͫ̇͑ͪ͜͠W̨̧̡̱̗͙̮̘͔̠̼̼̃ͪͧͥͅS̙̖̥̮̪̰͓ͩ̽̈́͒ͬ̈́̚͘ͅ.̱̪̦͙̹̯̙̳̊ͨ͆͛ͪ́̂ͥ̆̏̐ͧͣ͛͢͞ ͍͔̘͓̣͔̻̻ͨͨͥ̎͒̂̈ͬ̏ͮ͐ͩ̀̕I̴͕̠̺͖̝̗̞̩̳̣̳͇͇̲͓͒͗̏̊̎͌͜͠ͅŢ̵̪̫̟̟̲̫̠̩͚̤̜̥͇͎͕͖̯̰͆ͪͨͨ͂̏ͮͪ̀͐͐̇͋ͣ̊͘͢ ̵̨̡̳͇͚̬̝̯̲̗ͪ̆͌̈́͟͜Ṷ̢̞̠͖̆̽͆͊ͭ̈́ͣ͞N̴̄͆̈̓ͩ͞҉̨͎̩̤̬̣̮̦͓͔͠D͑ͣͦ͂ͣ͛ͫ́̏̄͏̨͚͇̻E̸̲̥̼̖̰̳͙̘͐͑ͣ̑̌̚̚ͅͅR͗͂ͩ̎ͩ͑̇̃ͨͪ̌̾̔͐ͨ̇͏̢̨̛͏̖͇̫͙͎͔S̸̴̭̭͕̹̤̲̫̱̞͕ͦ̽ͪ̓͌̌ͦͯ͂́̋̔̏̚͘͘͜T̸̢̢̧̳̝̯̱͎̺̙̙̖ͩͤ͌͛͒ͭͨ͆̚Ą̵̷̛̭͚̝̙͈͇͍͎̣̤̰̿ͧͣ͌͗̑̍ͯ͒̇ͤ͡Ņ̨̩̳̰͙̖͎̬̣̻̫̫̱̙͙͙̣̦̻̃͋ͩ̂̀͘͢ͅD̾ͪ̍͆͐̏҉̙͍̗̣͈͙S̴͎̜̤͈̤̞̬͎̖̥̹̋̍̒ͦ́̔ͪ̀ͪͨ̔̈̊̚͞͞͡.̨̯̙̮̻̗̯̥̯͎̦̲͇̪̰̬̔ͧ̽̒̓ͯ͛̒ͫ͊͂ͨͥ̏̓ͫ͞͠

Okay that really was a funn and good fic you made.  Here's a mistake you made here:

“From where did it came? What is it, exactly? There is no answer for those questions, the nature of that monster is surrounded in mystery. The only thing we know for sure is that it is always watching. It watches the fillies as they play in the schoolyard, it watches the unsuspecting ponies as they walk through the market in an apparently nice and normal morning, it watches all of us, even when we thing we are completely alone and safe in our houses. The Brony is always watching, for it likes ponies. Oh, it likes them very much...”

>“From where did it came? What is it, exactly? There is no answer for those questions, the nature of that monster is surrounded in mystery. The only thing we know for sure is that it is always watching. It watches the fillies as they play in the schoolyard, it watches the unsuspecting ponies as they walk through the market in an apparently nice and normal morning, it watches all of us, even when we think we are completely alone and safe in our houses. The Brony is always watching, for it likes ponies. Oh, it likes them very much...”

- You kind of mixed up "thing" and "think" right there. ^^;

I must admit that I was laughing very hard with this story, until I got to the end. I never read a story like this, so I hope that you can write more like this style.

>MFW

Image: http://twilight.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/134083367564.png

So what, is the brony fixing to molest them?

That was a cute and funny story, in my opinion.  two thumbs up.

>>877581877581 what I meant is, the reflection is flipped and it shouldn't be. :0

>>877874877874 God, how did I miss that?

Thanks, it has been corrected. Sorry for such huge mistake.

>>878177878177 Do you mean, the old picture? Because someone told me that the reflection should have been reversed, so I changed the image to the actual one.

This is getting confusing. Better to not draw mirrors ever again.

>>878274878274 yeah, I meant the old picture. Never mind. <3

This story was very cute and fun, I liked it and your idea was very original. keep it up!