Dammit, Scotch... I'm in the middle of a different fic! To quote the Terminator: "I'll be bach."

..... first?

Butterscotch fic here as well!

Oh yay, this is on FiMFiction now~  Tracking. <3

It is here!

Omfg you uploaded this story here. I love you even more now.

GET YOUR INSULIN, EVERYPONY!

Pros: A fic referencing a classic play. Being the insufferably huge English Renaissance Drama dork that I am (Just look at "The Equestrian Resident" and "The Unsuitable") this is a big thing. Mega dork points for me And, you have a following, so you're doing something right to be sure.

Cons: A personal thing here- Really? Another Twilestia fic? Does Celestia really have nothing better to do than play out another creepy case of Wife Husbandry (She's been in a guardianship position over Twilight for years, this is not even a very not-creepy case of Wife Husbandry which actually can exist, because it feels more like a Jail Bait Wait than Wife Husbandry) with her student? Or is it another "powerful mentor/close guardian absorbing misplaced feelings of reverence and awe from a young charge" Twilight story? Not as creepy, but can be if Twilight goes all Fatal Attraction or Basic Instinct on her. So, is it tender-meat-sheparding, filly-hungry Celestia or bunny-boiling, hair-sniffing Twilight?

I'm enjoying the story so far, but if it weren't for the slow ass pacing I would be enjoying it far more.

Damn it, I was just about to go to bed before I saw this pop up... Mind you, I'm not complaining, it was quite the enjoyable read.

Really looking forward to the next one, including whatever crazy antics Luna might have in store. XD

High tea... Oh come on! There are puns and then then there are painful puns, and that was a particularly fine example of the latter. High tea indeed, I don't know....

Thumbs up!

“Oh, just leave that to me, Twilight!” said Pinkie Pie, clopping her forehooves together in excitement. “I’m completely competent at controlling any kind of crazy cantankerous contraption!”

Damn, this chapter has some clunky dialog.

Man.... I hate it when i see a great fic, then remember i was cought up on another site... :( I still wait!

I was very hesitant about this story but i'm glad i read it

Your George W. reference just about killed me.

You've got great flow and an impressive ability to convey emotion. I'm glad you're writing for us!

/sigh.... Shipping

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>Twilestia fic

>Starts with Rarijack

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“I’m completely competent at controlling any kind of crazy cantankerous contraption!”

Say that ten times fast.

Were you going to update this soon?

OMG butterscotch! i love your work! ive been on your deviant art page almost everyday i will make sure that i read every single fanfic you write.

i love this fic! 5 stars for you

I'm at how this started...Let's see how this plays out...

>>119440119440

If anything, That's a damn good example of Onomatopoeia (which just took me 4 times to spell right).

when will the next chapter will be out?

YES.

YES.

YES.

I <3 you butterscotch

Love it, nice, slow and full of d'aww. Just the way I like it.

I see what Luna did there.

nice chapter :)

When will the next one be up?

Woot! It updated!

>>196068196068  Ahhh... little big there with the image.  I adblocked that one instance of it for now, but it's quite a nuisance for most people I'd imagine, what with it being five times the length of the page.

Reading hurts... I couldn't stop laughing neither stop trying to suffer severe head trauma...

But we never got to find out where Pinkie Pie's dream was going!

Ohgodohgodohgodohgod

Good stuff.

Looking forward to the next one. =3

Yay! It updated. I loved this chapter. I'm looking forward for more!

>>196175196175

Unable to resist the stallion's overwhelming charm and physical attractiveness, Pinkie throws herself upon him and they engage in a night of passionate intercourse. She "awakens" the next morning to find that he's gone, but he's left her a note telling her that he's left to return to his quest to avenge the murder of his parents. He also reveals in the letter that he's half demon, and that there is an ancient prophecy saying that their child will either save the world or destroy it. Apparently he sought her out because he believed that she was the only mother who could instill such joy into her child's heart that he would be certain to make the right decision. Pinkie awakens (for real this time) in a cold sweat, but quickly realizes that it was all just a dream and returns to life as normal. Lately, though, she's been putting on a little weight, and wanting peanut butter and pickle sandwiches at the oddest hours...

Happy now?

>>196553196553

Have you been reading Beating the Heat?

>>196668196668

Off and on, I've read the first two chapters so far.

That was a funny chapter and I loved it. I don't have many spedific comments because... well I just don't know what to say

Great as always Butters.

Finally a new chapter!

ARGH!  She teases us!

I hope that Alicorn, Pinkie was dreaming about is real xD

I'm impressed, this story was on my "it's ok" scale when I read the first 2 chapters. However in the latest 2 it has grown on me significantly. Add me to the list of people eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

>>196155196155

My predictions?

Apart from the two obvious pairs of x and x

But also x Luna (We need a face for her...)

Now here is where it's more complicated.

Perhaps x

That or x Spitfire and x

I vote Pinkie and Spike will get shipped with sweets rather than each other.

Some seem to over look the subtle hints at FlutterDash in favor of LunaShy.

Huh. I just found out that I'm not tracking this story yet.

How is that?

*tracks, rates*

Excellent work, Butterscotch.

It's about Celestia damned time!

However, I have a few complaints. Most notably, the chapter didn't feel at all like a next chapter in a Celestia/Twilight story. There was little to no romantic development on their part, but rather just a huge (and, I'm sorry to say, needlessly drawn-out) dinner party. I still like this story, I just hope the next chapter will be more Celestia/Twilighty.

On a more technical note, there were a few awkward word choices here and there along with some grammar issues, such as "Princess's" instead of "Princess'". And, "hugely" might be a word, but that doesn't mean it doesn't sound really weird to use, "largely" probably would've been better, or rearranging the sentence to use "huge" instead of "hugely". Or "widely" or just don't use a size descriptor at all, "grinned" implies a large smile.

Looking forward to the next chapter.  

~Rabbidfangirl

>>198071198071 Ship ALL the ponies!

>>197708197708 In regards to Spike Pie (x) Butterscotch already did a clop of those two in "Heres to you Miss. Pinke Pie". Though as far as continuity goes, its independent of this one that continues off of the RariJack (x) story that has a name reminescent of "Brokeback Mountain", Im blanking on the name. Everytime I see the description I think Brokeback Mountain because of this simple equation: Applejack(cowboy(girl)) + camping + mountain + gay romance blossiming during camping + post camp secret = Brokeback Mountain.

Admittedly havent read the fic (sorry Butters, I'll resolve that soon) or watched the movie.

HUZZAH!! (We really need a Luna emoticon in here) An update on Butterschotch's Twilestia!!

Possible return of Ms. Sundae's take on Spikie Pie?

Hinting of a Luna Shy and a SpitDash(Oh my God, that is incredibly dirty sounding, that should probably be reserved as their clop name)?

Im liking the developments Butterscotch!!

ONE MORE CHAPTER CLOSER TO A TWILESTIA MAKE OUT!! +=

Im all about the gigantic alicorn tounge probing around in a tiny unicorn's mouth

There's only one thing I can say about Luna...

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Great work butterscocth looking forward to more x

Looking forward to the next update!

>>198071198071

Sorry for the wait, Thecrazyrabbidfangirl! I'm a teacher by occupation, and the school year has just started here in Australia so things are pretty crazily busy.

Glad to hear you're enjoying the story! It IS a rather talky part, and if I was given this story to edit I would have to say "Too much talky, not enough story progress-y!" and demand it be cut - but since I'm a writing fanfiction and am therefore free of the all-seeing critical eye of such an editor I'm afraid I can't resist luxuriating in some pure character-driven theatre.

However! I must disagree with your opinion regarding the grammar 'issues'.

First, using the apostrophe 's' after a plural may not be common, but it is used. I personally feel that the 's' adds much needed clarification - we do say something like "princessesez after all, so the 's' is doing a job representing a sound there.

Second, the collocation of "grinned hugely" garners me 42,000 hits on google, while "grinned largely" produces 6,000. I think it's quite clear that the first is therefore the more natural expression, although I do take your point that "grinning" is tautological - but then, how do we describe one of the insanely large smiles that cartoon-characters are capable of? I guess I could use the cliche "grinned ear to ear"!

Thanks for reading!

Of course theres only a smidgit of Celestia/Twilight.

Less Applejack/Rarity planning on Rainbow/Twilight abnd more Celestia/Twilight waifu faggatory.

Omigosh! I'm the first comment on a butterscotch sundae story?!? THIS IS THE GREATEST DAY EVER!!!!!!!! oh and nice story by the way

I noticed that before Rainbow Dash flies off to help the Wonderbolts, she says 'Ditzy Doo' when she had been saying 'Derpy'. Otherwise, excellent chapter, I hope we get to see more soon!

>>Evil Paladin

Swayback Mountain I do believe, which I assumed to be part of this fanon, but I didn't even realise

Here's to You was by Butterscotch!

Oh mighty Scotch, please forgive this wayward son!

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>>196553196553 Type the rest of that shit out. Now. Sir you just stumbled upon a possible 5 star idea.

>>204240204240

But I already have a satire...

...I'll think about it.

another good chapter butterscotch cant wait for the next one

honestly looking forward to more x and x luna

NO, not SpitDash, RAINBOWFIRE!

Sounds sooooo cool.

You did it again 'scotch.

soo much

awsome story cant wate for the next update which is sure to contain tons of lulushy,and twilestia and a lil rarijack plus Rainbowfire this ia gonna be awsome hope i'm ready for the party.  i wonder how twilight'll deal with celestias mutual feelings since hse technically has known celestia most of her life.

to get a few of the shippings read SwayBack Mt and The Night Fluttershy Exploded. plus luna is awsome.

you young mare have made a work of art.

It's about time I started a new Butterscotch fic, especially considering how much I loved The Party Hasn't Ended. And lo and behold, I am not disappointed. It's light-hearted, in character and most of all, it's really sweet. In other words, so far it's exactly what I was hoping it would be.

I look forward to reading more! Keep up the great work!

I couldn't help but giggle when I read about Twilight spying on Celestia. Yes, she was spying, she knows better than that.

curse this, I should have be doing a paper due in 2 days not reading all of this story on one breath! now I'll put my sorry ass back to work, only dropping my appreciation here ;D

Soarin ate forty pies. That's as many as four tens. And that's just terrible.

Can't wait for next one

Wow, I love this so much!  A great many brohoofs  from me!

I had the most genuine *wtf* expression on me while reading the last part. Didn't see that coming by a long stretch.

Can't say I didn't enjoy it but still you got me good with that .

First line.... HEAD -------> DESK

Wait wait, did her friends already know that she liked mares? because when she was explaining what she wanted she said "she has to be graceful"

How come that didn't suprise anypony??

i absolutly love those of your stories that i've read, and this is no exception, so awesome! the only problem is the usual one: I WANT MORE!

i was going crazy with rarity and AJ trying to match twi and dash together, but they finally seemed to give up at last. now twi and celestia can finally get some time together!

>>123148123148

Agreed.

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The scene in which Celestia taught Twilight the importance of old memories was pretty awesome. I got a little misty-eyed there .

Wow, the sexual tension is just pulsing here.

Agree with KaiCalimatinus' shipping predictions except that I think both Pinkie and Spike are going to be too busy looking like this: to be shipped at all. Dashie will be with Spitfire.

Next chapter, please! And quickly!

...you really should write a story about how Rarijack came to be

>>336512336512

It's called Swayback Mountain, and you can read it here on FimFiction.net!

>>197708197708

Why not a triangle?

x Sweets x x !

When will you release the next chapter?

>>336591336591

You're gonna make moar chapters?

I'm pretty sure i already said it on your DA but to reiterate: moremoremoremoremore. And marry me.

S'also a thing

You should do...

Y U CAPITALIZE RANDOM WORDS?!

"but If she tried to concentrate on it"

"and the Library looks horribly cluttered"

"Twilight made her way back to the Library"

"rebounded off the helm of a Pegasus guard"

"sunshine sparkling off the Lake and the river"

"eastern window of the Royal Kitchens"

"send her back to Magic Kindergarten"

"Oh Sister, Luna giggled"

Also, "ricocheted of the south-western tower" - I think you meant to put off

This line appears to be incomplete:

"Oh, I just knew there was a romantic heart struggling to get out of that earthy exterior," murmured Rarity and

"the Spring Moon Festival isn' a big formal event" -

"shone so brightly that it had been if they’d stepped into" - Miss a word?

"I have seen it in the stars that Nightmare Moon will soon  return" - Double space!

"<i>But then why does the thought of marriage fill me with such dread?</i>" - Yo dawg, FiMFiction doesn't let people use HTML tags

"Below them they could see the great range of the Canterlot  Mountains" - Another double space!

"“’Romantical’?” frowned Twilight." - One of your quotation marks needs to be fixed

"The unicorn  grimaced" - Oh noes! A double space!

"After all the terrible things he’d done,Darkmane" - Oh noes! No space!

"He had these marking on his face like a wolf’s" - Did you mean markings?

>>196553196553 Reminds me of a book I read once, although I forget what it's called...

>>377241377241

Thanks for the proofing, iloveportalz. But I'd appreciate it if you sent these to me as a message rather than filling up the comments and making me all excited that someone wants to say something about my story!

>>377311377311 Okay

I LIKE THIS STORY

I see good Twilestia. Good, unfinished Twilestia. There is not enough Twilestia. Thus, there can be only one response.

*clears throat*

IN THE NAME OF HIS UNHOLINESS, CTHULHU...

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...THOU SHALT CONTINUE THIS OR THY PLANET SHALL BE DEVOURED. CTHULHU FHTAGN.

I need more of this

Can't wait for the next Chapter

:)

um, could you finish another chapter of this story please?...

uhm, if that's okay with you... eep

Edit: and then i noticed the blog update... yay

Luna, you damned troll!

Damn your cliffhangers. I'm going to go cry myself to sleep because I can't read any more of this.

"For more than just a second I'm afraid, darling," replied Rarity kindly. "But I think I may have come up with the answer of what's bothering you. It just occurred to me that you seem to be pining for somepony."

I may have been watching too much Monty Python (yeah, I know, no such animal), but I almost expected you to write "Pining for the fjords" here.

first

Why do I think this is going to end with fluttershy trying to kiss Luna's disguise