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  • 6w, 1d
    10/10/2014: Collaboration Sneak Peek!

    So, the outlining withe Timaeus is done, clocking in at over 100,000 words, and work has begun on the actual writing. We're very excited to bring this to Fimfiction, and to see what our combimed efforts can do. It'll be hosted HERE instead of one either of out profiles, to emphasize the fact that this was a team effort.

    Sneak peak after the break.


    Twilight snorted and shook her head, making the corner of Rainbow’s mouth twitch. “You’d get any mare in Equestria to fall in love with you? For a bet?” A combination of disbelief and bewilderment coloured her features. “Rainbow, are you seriously willing to go that far for a silly dare?”

    “Uh, yeah?” Rainbow responded blankly. She cocked a smile and waved her head confidently as she started trotting down the road with an added swing to her hips. “I can’t have you walkin’ around, trashing my good name. I’m the one true ladies’ mare, and I’m gonna prove it.”

    “Hmph. So, what? I just point out a mare and you’re going to capture her heart?” Twilight asked as she caught up to Rainbow. “Just like that?”

    “Yup,” Rainbow said with confidence, encouraged by the glint of determination that sparked again in Twilight’s eyes and showed in her smirk. Rainbow decided it was a good look on her. “Any mare, and I’ll show you. One day, bed, and one week, love. Nothin’ to it!”

    “Really?” Twilight asked in a sickly-sweet voice. “Any mare at all?”

    “That’s what I said.” Rainbow held her head high, oblivious to the devilish edge to Twilight’s grin. “You point, I seduce.”

    “Even one of our friends?”

    We hope to have this fic completely done in just a few weeks. Bare with us as we write the estimated 200k in that time.

    EDIT:

    Oops. Looks like I accidentally put ".com" in the url in lieu of ".net." Rest assured the link is correct now, and the story will be on this site.

    8 comments · 81 views
  • 7w, 3d
    10/01/2014: This Collab's getting out of hoof...

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  • 12w, 3d
    8/27/2014: A Little Challenge...

    That was fun, but I feel I should have used more than two bags of ice; it was hardly cold at all compared to February's Cold Water Rescue training. Happy, Vert?

    3 comments · 70 views
  • 14w, 3d
    8/13/2014, Obligatory, "I'm Not Dead... Yet" Post

    4 comments · 105 views
  • 32w, 5d
    4/7/2014, When it rains, it pours...

    Remember all tha crap I complained about a few weeks ago? Yeah, lets add "utterly screwed" to that list.

    All the unfinished/fully fleshed out/partial ideas I had were on my laptop. Literally dozens of ideas—maybe even hundreds—just went up in smoke. That's right, on top of everything else, my HDD just up and quit on me. It's fried; the data's completely unrecoverable and I'm out my laptop.

    As I type this on my phone, I can't help but apprecaite the irony of the timing: My friends are all abandoning me; I'd just managed to download the latest MLP episodes; I was starting to get back into my groove; my farher finally was 't stealing money from me anymore... Now, this happens. I know   if there's a God is sitting up there in heaven, he's laughing his metaphysical ass off right now. "Happy birthday, motherfucker!" he's probably managing between his giggle fits.

    Looks like I won't be writing for a while; sorry to disappoint you all. Writing for this fandom has been such an honor, and I want to keep going, but now I can't and it sucks. This was literally the only thing I had left—this, and my filriends in the TwiDash Skype chat who I'll no longer be able to converse with.

    Man, this is depressing...

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When Twilight springs some great news on her friends, she didn't seem to notice that Rainbow was less than ecstatic. In fact, it was all the pegasus could do to not pin her down and force her to take it back! Now, time is running out, and Rainbow Dash has to make a decision. Should she take a chance? Nothing is worse than the road not traveled, right?

Wrong.

First Published
7th Jul 2012
Last Modified
7th Jul 2012
#1 · 124w, 10h ago · · ·

Yay! It's here! I always look forward to your Twidashes. They're always heartwarming.

#2 · 124w, 10h ago · · ·

Well, that was cute.

I had to smile at "Marizona," though. You should feel bad for that pun. It was too obvious.

#3 · 124w, 10h ago · · ·

I liked it. A lot :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

#4 · 124w, 9h ago · · ·

DAYUM That was good.

#6 · 124w, 9h ago · · ·

Twidash for the win! :twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

Rainbow Dash felt a deep melancholy begin to fill her as she walked Twilight down the isle... of seats. I love this!

#7 · 124w, 9h ago · · ·

"The middle-aged mare with the newspaper leaned in close to the young earth pony in the seat next to her. “It's so nice to see young love blooming in these trying times,” she said. The earth pony nodded her head and adjusted her the bow in her hoof. She thought about a certain brazen deejay she was going to pay a visit to as soon as she arrived at her destination."

I see what you did there.

#8 · 124w, 5h ago · · ·

Ahhhhh. I love a nice, refreshing shipping fic.:twilightsmile:

#9 · 124w, 5h ago · · ·

>>872081 It was funny!

#10 · 124w, 5h ago · · ·

>>873258

It was. That's why I smiled.

It's no better than the puns that they make in the actual show, though.:rainbowwild:

#11 · 124w, 4h ago · · ·

A :moustache: for a splended story indeed.

#12 · 124w, 4h ago · · ·

Amazing story! It's so good! :twilightsmile: :heart: :rainbowkiss:

Please, do a sequel. It would be awesome! :pinkiehappy:

#13 · 124w, 3h ago · · ·

This was such a cute story. I really liked it. :twilightsmile:

#14 · 124w, 3h ago · · ·

EPIC WIN. :moustache:

#15 · 124w, 2h ago · · ·

Are we going to get a sequel?:twilightsmile:

#16 · 124w, 2h ago · · ·

This was a very adorable story. I loved how you portrayed Rainbow Dash - she seemed very in character, and the attitude was spot-on :twilightsmile:

#18 · 124w, 15m ago · · ·

That was so CUTE! :rainbowkiss: I'd love a follow up to that story so much. There were a few spelling mistakes, but nothing that took away from the main story which was well put together and kept me very involved throughout. Overall, I loved it! And I really hope as an author you keep contributing, be it similar stories or something new entirely.

#20 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

>>872081

Fillies and gentlecolts, might I call your attention to Manehattan and Fillydelphia?

#21 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

>>872081

I could have said "Neighbraska," "Neighvada," "Fillynois," or "Mane." :pinkiecrazy:

>>872230

I was waiting for someone to say that! Here, have a 'stache! :moustache:

>>873541

>>873904

If there is significant enough demand for one, yes, I have a sequel idea that's ready to go.

>>874311

Why thank you! :pinkiehappy: If you enjoyed that, allow me to point you to my other works: http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=5882

>>874341

Dat pic... :applejackconfused:

Thank you all for your favorites and comments!

#22 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

>>874507 Thanking you kindly, good sir! I shall endeavour to check all your stories out in due time.. :twilightsmile:

#23 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

A meme making the rounds these days:  "I hate being bipolar.  It's awesome."

I thought of that while watching Dash polish off that drink she hates so much she had eight of them.  Still, that's the sort of thing she does, and really, no example of shipping is successful unless you can believe it.  I believed every word of this one.

#24 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

I DEMAND A SEQUEL TO THIS!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

#25 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

>>874507

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#26 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

Twilight's a bitch in the beggining.

Anyways, this story is amazing! Can you do a followup for hearth's warming eve?

AUTHOR: This is definitely going to get featured, I know it.

#27 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

epic story, would love to see a squeal... if thats ok with you :fluttershyouch:

#28 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

>>874507

After this story I can't live, not knowing how things will work out for them! :rainbowwild:

>>874567

>>875501

Very good! We need more demands for a sequel! Especially significant ones! :pinkiehappy:

If there is enough demands we will get a sequel.  :twilightsmile:

#29 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

That was a very nice story. :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

#30 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

>>875501 wouldn't you rather HEAR a squeal?

#31 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

fml... i was drinking last night and misspelled sequel :P

#32 · 123w, 6d ago · · ·

I think this definitely deserves a sequel. That and I really want to see what you do with their date. Great job on this.

#33 · 123w, 5d ago · · ·

This story needs a sequel so bad.  So bad that I'm now going to follow you.  Because not only do I want a sequel, but this was so nice and heartwarming.

Edit: Okay, Now I definitely need to watch you.  Just looked at your stories and saw you did one of my favorite TwiDash's, "Trust".

#34 · 123w, 5d ago · · ·

>>880584

I like "Trust" a lot! That's why I began watching The_Incredible_Blunderbolt in the first place. :twilightsmile:

And now we have another great TwiDash story. And it definitely needs a sequel! :pinkiehappy:

#37 · 122w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Wow... I usually hate shipping, but I found this incredibly emotionally compelling. Your characterization of Rainbow Dash was awesome! You kept her in character, but added a completely believable lovesick side to her.  I think everyone has felt something like that at one point in time so it felt both sypathizable and realistic. It added an emotional connection and that's why even a grimdark addict like myself was able to understand what Rainbow Dash was going through.

Again I hate shipping and you got me to care/d'aaawwww through the whole thing.

+1 thumb. Very impressive.

#38 · 121w, 3d ago · · ·

Wow, I'm impressed. Great writing, great pacing, great story.

And so many feels!

#39 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

Excellent. That's the only word capable of describing this.

#40 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

This story where amazing!

Please make a sequel to it i must know if it works out for them!

#41 · 118w, 23h ago · · ·

I think I can safely say the demand is sufficient! Sequel! If you don't I'll... I'll.. I'll scream! :fluttershbad:

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

#42 · 118w, 10h ago · · ·

Wow that was great! I enjoyed it very much. Great writing too. Ahhh, TwilightxRainbow is always the best, apart from TwilightxLuna of course. xD

:coolphoto:

#43 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

I hate how Twilight treat Rainbow Dash is the beginning, but I'm glad that her friends disaprove her attitude at the train station. Also, I like the ending, it's realistic and cute :twilightsmile:

#44 · 116w, 4d ago · · ·

This is the first truly good story I've read lately. Very well written! :twilightsmile:

#45 · 116w, 4d ago · · ·

I shall ask nicely for a sequel, here goes:

#46 · 115w, 4d ago · · ·

<33

#47 · 103w, 3d ago · · ·

Congrats on EqD! :twilightsmile:

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2012/11/story-last-chance.html

I've had this on my read later list for months... gah, now I really have to read it!

#48 · 103w, 3d ago · · ·

"A train traveling sixty miles per hour leaves the train station. Ten minutes later, a pegasus pony traveling up to Mach five starts chasing it." How awesome is that?

#49 · 103w, 3d ago · · ·

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. However, I would remove the comedy tag.

#50 · 103w, 3d ago · · ·

You should definitely write about what happens on Hearth's Warming Eve.

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