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  • 1w, 5d
    Hal-Con Update

    So I just got out of the panel hosted by the NSBronies group and I got to admit that it was pretty good. The only downside being how much time that they had been given, though at the end I went up and shook hands with them and talked for a minute or two. Great job guys!

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  • 2w, 10h
    A song to go with Celestia's Story Part Four

    A reviewer over on FF.Net pointed out that this song was playing in his head while he was reading the new chapter. After listening to it, I could not help but feel that it really does fit this chapter, but also the war between Celestia and the nobles. I just had to share it.

    Said war was only the start of what I like to call the "Century of Strife" which also included the civil unrest and uprisings/rebellions of the non-noble classes. Which were due to the aftershocks from Luna's fall and banishment as well as the war between Celestia and the nobles.

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  • 2w, 3d
    Looking forward to this year's Hal-Con

    Another year, another chance to go to Hal-Con! Hopefully this year though they won't close down early because they fit too many people into the building (this year shouldn't have that problem though, not least because they're using all the levels of the convention center). Personally, I'm hoping to go to the Nova Scotia Bronies meeting and meeting some of them in person. Not to mention getting a lot of swag there! So any Nova Scotian Bronies that here this, I hope to see you there!

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  • 54w, 20h
    Heading to Hal-Con

    So, I'll be heading to Hal-Con this weekend and I am pretty excited as I finally managed to get this weekend off. I want to see the FiM panel especially. I would like to know what other events for FiM might be happening around the Con though. Hopefully I'll be grabbing some nice swag there.

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  • 65w, 1d
    Widening the Lens

    Now, people have been asking me about when I am going to post a new chapter of Widening the Lens. Now I am happy to report that I am putting together the new chapter and it should be up in the next two weeks if everything works out as I am hoping. On that bit, we'll be seeing things get a bit closer to the events at Hippocampus being resolved.

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  • ...

While he has returned from being absorbed into Unit-01, Shinji finds himself in an odd situation. Now, in a body that looks nothing like a human's and with a snarky roommate in his head, he has to deal with new powers and abilities while those around him shift.

And he thought that fighting Angels was weird...

First Published
7th Jul 2012
Last Modified
26th Jun 2014
#1 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Haven't seen this for month's, done with planning it out on spacebattles?

#2 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


For now. Still working on it but putting together the next two chapters.

#3 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This... this has potential :trixieshiftright: It will interesting to see how well you draw that potential out. :moustache:

#4 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

...Holy crap dude. Between this and the Harry Potter cross, you've caused me to LIKE Nightmare Moon. It's like the Loki Redemption fics that came out after Avengers was released. If done right, you can like the villain.

#5 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Hm... Very interesting.  Is his color scheme more akin to Nightmare Moon or Luna?  :ajsmug:

I have only one nitpick with this, and that's... Rei's sudden overprotectiveness in relation to canon.  Still, it's your story, and thus whatever happens is up to you.  Also read that HP fic on  Liked that one so much. :rainbowlaugh:

And with a faving, I say unto thee:  "THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!"

#6 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


His coloring is basically Nightmare's with his normal brown hair as a mane.

#7 · 123w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Ah... that somehow makes me laugh.

#8 · 123w, 5d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

And the award for most awkward moment goes to Shinji getting a wingboner from sleeping with Rei.:facehoof:

#9 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Oh... it's pretty funny. Of course... some might take his looks the wrong way...:raritywink:

#10 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Not sure I get what you mean on that...  :applejackunsure:

#11 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Ok, pump the brakes here. There is a major flaw in your description, you failed to specify whether your crossing over with the manga or the anime!:pinkiegasp:

#12 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


He looks like a male Nightmare Moon, now who might have some issues with his appearence at first...


I'm going with the original anime.

#13 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Ah, I see.  Makes sense.

#14 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>872560 Excellent! TO THE REFRESHER CAVE ROBIN, AWAY!!:pinkiecrazy:

#15 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


It's not Shinji without him getting uncomfortable...


*Grins widely*

#16 · 123w, 5d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Quick question that didn't come up on Spacebattle, does Shinji being 'reformated' with NMM's appearance include getting her cutie mark?  Or are you saving one coming in to give Ritsuko fresh fits? :pinkiegasp:  Bonus points if it coming in is captured on video.

#17 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Going to wait to give him one. Just to see Ritsuko once more lose it.:rainbowlaugh:

#18 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Using your author powers to torture Rits for our amusement?

#19 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


This is me that we're talking about after all.:raritywink:

#20 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I'm following this on Spacebattles but I'm just lurking there so let me tell you here that I absolutely love this story. :twilightsmile:

#22 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Decided on a whim to read this when I saw it in the latest stories list.  Get as far as the key to thoughts and speech thinking they are done in a fairly familiar way, check the author's other works only to find a very familar HP/MLP cross I had been tracking for some time on FFnet.  This discovery has led me to have some fairly high expectations for the story, and if the first chapter is any indication they will more then sufficiently met. :twilightsmile:

#23 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

after reading this i can say only this.......

PONY SHINJI IS BEST SHINJI!:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

#24 · 123w, 5d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Nice to see this gathered together, I think this copy needs a divider after Yui's thought. It seems to be the only scene change that doesn't have one. It might be nice to have a better description of the lab (cell?) that Shinji's being held/staying in.

#25 · 123w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


If you're talking about the lab where Rits was examining him after he returned, then it's the normal medical lab shown in the series/in Real Life. As for where he's currently staying, it's just a one room apartment with the bedroom, kitchen, and living room all sharing the same space. He gets no privacy outside the bathroom (and even there considering that this is NERV...).

#26 · 123w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


I figured it would be simple (and for some reason I was under the impression he was shackled to something), but all my knowledge bar a few clips comes from fanfiction : )

#27 · 123w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Ah, the only shackles there were was at the very beginning and that was his legs shacked together to prevent him from running.

#28 · 123w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

I saw a really cute pic of Luna and Shinji on Deviantart awhile ago, and considering their similarities in personalities i figured it was just a question of time before a fic about the two of them were written, but i have to be honest, i never expected it to be written like this.

#29 · 123w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


I've seen that pic too and it was part of the inspiration for this. And how did you expect it to be written?

#30 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Well, something with Luna getting to earth, kinda like your HP/MLP fic or Shinji getting to equestria.

#31 · 123w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


Who said anything about him not going to Equestria at some point?:raritywink:

#32 · 123w, 16h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I meant in human form, Shinji transforminf into a Alicorn was something i did not see comming.

#34 · 122w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I don't know why I follow this here, I'm following it on SB. Still good though.

#35 · 122w, 5d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

We need a pic of Shinji's new form.

#36 · 122w, 5d ago · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·


EDIT: Or fourh I guess...

It could use up some explanations or descriptions at times. You assume your readers know everything about the series you cross over with and that is bad

#37 · 122w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

this story just keeps getting better:twilightsmile:

#38 · 122w, 5d ago · 2 · · Chapter 2 ·

Shinji's gonna wake up in bed with a man and the man will see Shinji in pony form... yup! Not awkward at all! :pinkiehappy:

#39 · 121w, 4d ago · 2 · · Chapter 3 ·

Brushie, brushie, brushie!

#40 · 121w, 4d ago · · · Omake #1 ·

Still as funny as when I saw it on SB!

#42 · 121w, 4d ago · 1 · · Omake #1 ·

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:shinji's mom is gonna slap a bitch :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#43 · 121w, 4d ago · · · Omake #1 ·

Hahaahaaa!!!  Arguing Evas is always a classic:yay::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

#44 · 121w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


Did Luna put on weight?

#45 · 121w, 4d ago · · · Omake #1 ·

>>955538 nah her butts always been big:rainbowlaugh:

#46 · 121w, 4d ago · · · Omake #1 ·

:rainbowlaugh:  What the frig did I just read hahaha

#48 · 121w, 3d ago · 1 · · Omake #1 ·



#50 · 120w, 5d ago · 2 · · Chapter 3 ·

>>955538 she put on adorable

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