Hmm pretty good so far, interested to see where this goes!

My take on that last bit?

'Tomorrow. Tomorrow, I figure out this crazy shit.'

Interesting. And I love the picture you chose. It's just adorable on so many levels. Even seen one with Fry from Futurama under it saying "Shut up and take my money anyways."

Favorited.

Because any story with the Mane 6 as foals is worth watching.

Instant thumbs up and fave, looking forward to more of this

>>870929870929 That's how I originally discovered it, actually.

Meinos Kaen

Oh no. Brony. Mane 6 arrive in a box. Tell me this isn't going to end up like My Little Dashie. I don't need more manly tears.

AJ proud poop killed me....

>>871214871214 Of course not. What kind of author writes a story just because he wants to get to the same finale of another one? ZING!

Meinos Kaen

>>871227871227 And half the ecosystem of the garden it was buried in. But that's another story.

Meinos Kaen

Epic story is epic, so tracking this!

Can't wait for next chapter x)

The only complains I had were that some of the sentences were a bit hard to understand until you read the whole part, but other than that, it is great x)

When is this talking place anyways?

>>871648871648 What do you mean, when?

Meinos Kaen

>>871702871702

Things such as

"Dinner and the ring had cost him a whole paycheck, but had it been worth it. Also, long overdue. Six years together. He sighed, reminiscing miscellaneous events as he took his shower and rinsed his hair. As he removed his bathrobe, the phone started ringing. He looked at the call ID and smiled. "I have to warn you, miss. I'm engaged."

I had no idea what the dinner and ring was supposed to mean, I didn't even know he was engaged at this point, only vague hints.

>>872356872356 Aaaaaand that's the point?

Meinos Kaen

>>872364872364

Yeah I dunno, it might just be me being retarded, but it just seems off, that he talks about a dinner and a ring that no one knows about. It made me go back in the text to check if I had missed something.

""Honey, I'm home!" He shouted out loud, the words echoing in the room, receiving no answer. There was no one to reply, after all. 'Have to practice, though.'" Made me think he was single at first, and he was just "practicing" for when he wouldn't be single anymore (for some reason, for the lulz and irony i guess).

It generally would've been better if we knew he was engaged, or in some kind of relationship, or at least have some knowledge of when/how he proposed, before that sentence appeared.

But again, that's just my opinion I guess, hope you aren't taking this the wrong way, love the story x)

Ah i forgot about something really important.

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We need a babyfying category

So much D'awwww... And also blarg.

Rainbow Dash so much D'AAAAAWWWWW

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*eyetwitch* Guh, I just came down from a sugar rush caused by the sweetness of this fic.

Holy crap, and I mean that literally in AJ's case

Lol at the mad scientist/evil mastermind bit, guess the squeal of a male fanboy/brony wasn't too wise a choice for a weakness.

And, say, are you the same Meinos Kaen I've seen on ff.net before? No wonder I love this fic, you were always RD-awesome in my book.

>>884565884565 Yup, it'sa me! I mostly lurk here and on my blog, now.

Meinos Kaen

I DEMAND MOAR!  

...I..If you...umm..don't mind... that...is

I like the story, but I'd highly suggest going back and rereading this. There were a few parts where I had to go back and reread parts because they didn't make sense to me, not to mention there were quite a few grammatical errors. Good story though.

>>873120873120 Damn i dunno what i was about to write XD Maybe this

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Yep for sure it was this.

The d'aww is strong in this chapter.

(reaction to cover image)

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

-gasp-

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

what happened to you?

>>20107502010750 Work. Exams. A mixture of other things.

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cutness OVERLOAD!

Good, good.

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I can see them all now....

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Incoming cute storm

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HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG

the only way one can describe this....

>>20205782020578 ... *groan* There's my ear-bug for the next two weeks... THANK YOU OH SO MUCH!

MK

MOAR

>>Drawdex  Oh my....HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!

“Yes, yes she does.” He was enjoying himself. Maybe too much. It was already 11 am. He had to start researching this, didn't he? Applejack and Fluttershy were currently occupied with an old basketball he had recovered from his room, Rarity was seemingly fascinated with his curtains, and Fluttershy was just being... Fluttershy. Sitting in a corner, observing and not participating. It there was going to be any moment... “Hey, Twilight. Do you want to try?”

I assume that AJ was playing with Pinkie?

Cute as buck as always. I noticed moment ago that you posted new chapter a while ago ;]

Update soon! I really want to see that dinner. :)