Twilight always knew AJ was a strong pony- she just never realized her strength was far more than physical.
Nice story. Very nice indeed.
You wrote the accent in very well. Many people can, but when they can't it's just awful. Good story and hardly any spelling errors.
Havent read it yet, but knowing you it will be great.
Edit: Good Job!
... Oh my God, I'm tearing up, and that's hard to do. This- It really fits AJs personality, to be honest. She always seems like there's something else in her head asides from what she's saying, you know? And this, well... It fits. And it made me shed a tear.
Bravo, my friend.
Wow, that's quite high praise, thank you!