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When Derpy's quest to show Fluttershy how she feels ends in tragedy, how far must she go to make things right?

Thanks to Thanqol for his awesome pirate song, set to the tune of Aether Shanty

Also look at the other great art and songs made for the prelude:
Wolves of the Sea by furor1
Captain Dash by JimFaindel
Day 205 by Thanqol

A Pony's Life For Me by ShadowySilence

Also on: Deviant Art

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 28 )

FlutterDerp? never seen one of those.

865678 You haven't? I've seen several, one of them named "Letter to a Mail-Mare". Though, it was more of a sex fic than this :ajsmug:

Anyways, very nice fic you got here, and I can't wait for more.:trollestia:

865686 hmm. I'll have to check it out, I like this ship.

865686 do you have the actual link?

The pirate party... they were really in synch there, or they had all prepared themselves quite a bit.:rainbowlaugh:

Oh my, this done gone mythical! (I like Prince Terra, as OC alicorns go)

865832

Thanks. Alicorns are always tricky to do

" And who else has an eye on everypony's favorite yellow pegasus?"

*Checks characters*

Fluttershy, Derpy and...DINKY

Uhh...:derpyderp2:

871303

Not Dinky, don't worry :derpytongue2: Maybe I should change the description, it isn't the best

I had a pirate party for my ninth birthday. Ah, the memories.

D'aww, Dinky gets her cutie mark!
PLEASE update soon!
I think this story should be featured!

Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free! Yar-har fiddle-dee-dee!

878451

Thanks :twilightsmile: I'm working on it, can't say how long it'll take but hopefully not too long

ITS GETTIN GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It moved on a little quickly in this chapter and the part, where Dinky comes and saves Derpy seems a little weird...
But in any case, this chapter was still amazing :twilightsmile:

After waiting for weeks, I was ecstatic to see the final chapter up.
I read it, and found nothing bad to say. No grammar problems, no spelling problems, (from what I could see) the story progressed smoothly without any useless information or missing points.
I don't care what others might say. I LOVE this.

Would you like my full review? I don't need to, but I'd love reading this again. :heart:
Thanks for making my day!

943031

You're welcome :pinkiehappy: I'm pretty happy to have it finally done, too.

If you like to give a review, go ahead. I always like hearing what others think.

I have a deep respect for pony fics that approaches myth and fairy tale; somehow that feels like a grown-up version of the show. Thanks for writing one of those fics.

Never accept plants from strangers, I got so high that one day... So yeah, don't accept plants from stranger.

Wow, good story and all, but, you are really trying to force the story into pirates aren't you?

great fic, amazing even, but............

when i started reading, i was expecting this amazing epic fic where derpy saves fluttershy and they do the impossible act of defying death! Terra would get what he deserved for cheating his way to fluttershy, and things would be awsome!...not so, depressing :fluttercry:

still an amazing fic, a like-able one, but...i cant give a favorite to this.

Really liking the story so far. This line was particularly beautiful:

Luna's eyes were like diamonds—harder than steel yet shining with the brilliance of a million stars.

Bucksome

I just... how...? ...gah. A work of genius.

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