Twilight breaks into Starlight’s room to figure out why she locked it.
Now she’s in, and regretting every second of it.
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Majin Syeekoh
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Majin Syeekoh
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Umm wow
was a very good read 
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For such a...disturbing, shall we say premise, it's very funny and rather well done.
This was absolutely hilarious
7974016 Thanks!
7974026 Funny how Equestria works, isn’t it?
7974049 Not an unexpected reaction, to be honest.
7974052 Again, compliments are appreciated.
7974071 And thank you, as well!
7974076 wow, that's a quick response
and Your welcome
7974082 I get super nervous whenever I post a story.
7974084
Why would you be nervous? (I mean, I get the same way, but your stories are always awesome<3)
7974113 Habit, I guess.
Hard to break ingrained habits.
That was awesome.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
7974116 Glad to hear that.
It's stupid but not a bad stupid. It's a good stupid. It made me crack a smile and it was entertaining. Good job
7974133 Smiles are always a goal I strive for.
I am greatly amused!
7974142 Good to hear.
Haha, you perfectly captured Spike's naivety.
7974170 Yeah, Spike was super fun to write in this story.
Extreme tendencies of love expression.
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7974245 Isn’t it sweet?
7974314 Yeah p much
7974314
Appropriate avatar.
Crazy minds think alike, I suppose. I'm glad Spike has someone who openly appreciates him. His fragile ego could use it.
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You start a sentence with the word "now" three times in four paragraphs. Might wanna work on that.
7974367 It’s literally three different characters saying that, but I understand how that can seem repetitive in prose.
I’ll make sure to watch out for that in the future. Thank you for pointing out something that I can work on concerning my writing. I certainly appreciate that you took time out of your day to read through my story and point out something I can improve upon out of what I assume was an honest desire to help me.
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GlimSpike hinting? Yeah, I'll ship it.
Um. Excuse me for a second.
Freaking what?!
7974384 I’ll let you believe what you wish; it doesn’t affect the story either way.
7974404 It’s exactly what it looks like.
7974318 By sweet you mean dangerously pursuing the person thy love via perverted means then yes it's sweet.
7974424 I completely agree with the sentiment you just expressed.
7974467 I’m glad you enjoyed it for what it was.
And yes, my inclination is far more towards the making people laugh hemisphere, and failing that making them question my sanity.
Well, thanks. Now my dog is pissed at me cause I woke him up laughing.
7974510 Can’t please everyone, I guess.
Glad you enjoyed it, though!
I laughed, and it's very much in line with the way you depict these characters and this world, and I absolutely love sociopathic Starlight when you write her that way, but...
All I could think of while reading this was that episode of Dif'rent Strokes with the bicycle man.
7974599 I will fully admit to coming up to within a nanometer of that line when writing this story.
I’m glad you were still able to find it humorous, though.
I'm calling the police.
I laughed because I'm a bad person.
I'm also slightly uncomfortable with myself for finding this hilarious.
That's good, so kudos.
7974663 I think Neil Gaiman once said something along the lines of we’re all horrible people pretending to be good people, so I assure you that you’re in good company.
Not what I expected.... It's better!
...So does Starlight make collages of ALL her friends?
7974806
Starlight's just lucky Twilight didn't see her collage... that's why it was placed in the closet.
This is soooo meta, it's like Twilight is looking at bronies and find them weird, but at the same time, they're not that weird, damn that sooo deep.
I also laughed. I don't know why but I laughed. Good job.
That's too much informations, I don't want to hear more, plz have mercy.
7974666
Except for the ones of us that don't pretend...
Sanity questioned. But, is it my sanity or yours?
*hugs tight* Fantastic one shot Syeek!
I can't even
...!
7974026 Also, she just entered a locked room which she was asked not to enter.
Here I thought Glimglam was gonna chew Twilight out for breaking into her room and -that- was the boundary being broken.
I was wrong.
7975246 Was seriously expecting the same.
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Goddamn it, Majin.