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Wonderful! I think you did a great job explaining where Rarity got her dignified behavior, understanding of style and perfectionism. Also, right in the feels. That youthful ignorance is a surefire way to hit those heartstrings, and you excelled at portraying Rarity's. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
This is oh so very touching to the heart and soul!! I COULDN'T STOP CRYING FOR 10 MINUTES!!!!
You are a great writer! SHINE ON!!Also, don't forget the Alternate Universe tag for this story...
Wow, that was...sad.
I've been through what Rarity's been through, so this really spoke to me. Very sad, but I'm glad she was able to move on with her life.
Just amazing. It's great to read more about Rarity and part of what drives her to be the best designer she can.
Now if you'll excuse me, I must cry some more. ![]()
A very beautiful and emotional piece of writing! This piece pulled at my heartstrings in a way very few other fanfics can
. I'de love to see this featured!
I can't wait to read your other works - bravo!
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Holy crow that was close! I was about to click favorite, and I hit Dislike by mistake!![]()
SO glad I fixed that. Like and favorite from me.
There is no way this wasn't featured upon being published, seriously. Please let that be true.
I didn't cry a river, I cried an entire ocean
. This was too good, reminded me of my grandfather
, may he rest in peace
. Keep up the exponential work!







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