So one day I watched all the ponies. Then I came up with over 9000 ideas for pony fics. The end.
When Bon-Bon's house is broken into and stolen from, only one mare has the intelligence, gusto and profession to solve the case. Along with her assistant/sidekick, Scootaloo, Detecive Ditzy Doo will solve any crime that comes her way!
Take everything you think you know about Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves. Now erase all of it that isn't canon. Go into this fic with an open mind, and have fun.
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A meddling mare with the word 'Doo' in her name? If it's her surname, one could make a case for a male ancestor who hung out with four other meddling foals as they traveled Equestria facing off against ponies in rubber masks.
Wouldn't that make Ditzy part dog?
There is a reference, but no. Scooby Doo is not Ditzy Doo's ancestor.
Serious kudos for this one. Seeing Ditzy portrayed in a different light was certainly refreshing.
Would you believe this was rejected from ED? I don't get it.
So guys, you know how at the end I'm all like "I'm not doing any more of this"?
Guess what, I'm doing a prequel! Uh...oops.
I like this.
Also nice to see a fic about Ditzy that isn't "MUFFINSMAILDINKYMYLITTLEMUFFIN"
This was great. The flow felt just perfect to me, and you did a great job of weaving different fanon ideas into the story and meshing them with the personality you envisioned for Ditzy. For some reason, her inability to properly recall names made me laugh more than it should, but even without that this fiction would still be an amusing read without going out of its way to make jokes. I believe this subtler humor is a result of the interaction between her quiet personality and all the usually outgoing ponies.
I can hardly believe this was rejected by ED. Did they give you any reasons for not accepting this story?
I do have two minor nitpicks:
“D’aallo,” The colt said in an odd, nasally voice that he must have gotten from his mother. - I do believe it should be "odd, nasal voice", or "oddly nasal voice".
“Theif.” Ditzy said. - A simple matter of a typo, I guess.
Now, I need to watch you in case you do write any other stories about Detective Doo.
I'm thinking of doing a remake of this.
1091 what was their reason?
derpy without muffins or mail routes? must read this!
oh, granny smith's saggy old hip.. how i love when that line makes a comeback
rockin job, man. love what you did with derpy. i suspect that trixie went to jail for so long because of her obviously pedophilic relationship with snips n snails (she hid under snails' bed like michael jackson hid under mine at camp). and i wish ud keep writing, i wanna see derpy take out all the rejects who try to avenge themselves on her. 
and oh, i loved your explanation of her cutie mark.
Why does Inspector Gadget come to mind at the end?
"I'll get you next time next time Ditzy!" - Dr. Trixie
Curse you for getting that song stuck in my head again!
Doo doo doo doo doo Inspector Gadget...
was wondering I also had an idea for a derpy detective story would it be considered biting if I did a different take on it?