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BarbarianBrony


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Buckler was just a recruit in the Royal Guard Academy who is attending his graduation when he receives the shock of his life. He has become a full fledged member of the guard but is not assigned to any unit. How could his life get any worse? Follow him on his quest of self discovery and learning that sometimes being a guard is not all it is cracked up to be.

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Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )

A surprisingly well constructed beginning to what looks to be a remarkable story if it continues. Good use of the internal confusion and dialogue instead of just glossing it over with narative.

Please continue, my man. This is getting good

Nice, very nice. Is Ace really going to be the cocky character of the story, or is it just me? :rainbowlaugh:

938452 I think he is more of the comedic relief or sarcastic older brother lol.:pinkiehappy:

Ahhhh I see. Since the story name is "The Three Guards", I wanna know who it is...This "third guard" has to make his/her appearance in Chapter 2 or 3. I can't wait lol:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I made a story myself just today. It's status says processing, so once it's done, I'd love to have somepony look at it :pinkiesad2:

938601 Ah but that would be telling, I wouldn't want to ruin all the surprises I have in store. After all it's no fun if you already know what is going to happen.:twilightsmile:

True, very true. Can't wait lol

Nice chapter...again. Looking forward to the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

1001172 Glad to hear that you liked it. Honestly this chapter had me worried more than was probably needed, but what can I do other than wait and see.:pinkiehappy:

If you need some one to help out. I can do that. in return you can read my missing pieces fan fic :pinkiehappy:

1001245 Thank you for the offer but I am afraid I have to decline at the moment. I already have two pre-readers and my story isn't quite in need of a third just yet. :twilightblush: But if I ever do look for another pre-reader I will keep you in mind. I would though be glad to look at your Missing Pieces. :twilightsmile:

Yes the next chapter. I was going to think you gave up on the story and leave your readers with a sad look on their faces :applejackunsure:

1148055 If I ever decided to put this on hold or stop all together I would post that. I am not though I just had a lot going on and was unable to put any effort into it. Next Chapter is where Luna makes her grand return:yay: and I cannot wait to get it written.

Great I can't wait then:pinkiehappy:

well I know its late (works been hell these last few months) but I'm liking this :pinkiehappy:

so as I do for all writers who's stories I love reading

:scootangel:
Here have a Scootaloo
For luck
:rainbowdetermined2:

:pinkiegasp:Wow this is brilliant why it took me this long to read it .... Please forgive my lateness, I shall taze myself as punishment ... "Arghhhhh!!!" wow those things pack a punch .... I'm going to pass out know.

Can't.. Wait.. For...... more.................... thud

Its aliiiiiiiiiive!

Is Lunar Guard really good?:rainbowhuh: Dude your fanfic is epic:pinkiehappy:

4004104 Lots of rl drama taking me away. But I decided that I was tired of putting it off and sat down and got the job done. lol
4004127 Thank you so much it's great to see that people are enjoying my story.

..You know, i just had the weirdest idea..

A guard whom perfers to use his hooves (Or fists..for some reason, i imagine a griffon) rather than a weapon..

He/she would be a former professional fighter..and would know how to fight smart..with distraction...Very strong..and fast..

..Just tossing it at ya.

... Colonel is lower ranking than :Lieutenant? That's... bizarre.

4004791 I know it's strange but the only rank in Equestria mentioned is Captain so I made my own ranks and positions. I have considered redoing that aspect.

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