I have no idea how it happened, but there are ponies in my house. Am I going insane?
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Jojenga
Just a simple brony who happens to have a knack for NEVER FINISHING ANY FANFIC EVER. I hope to change this soon.
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of course the camera picked it up, because it did.
moar is needed for proper review though
HOLY SHIT PONIES
so far so good didn't see any thing wrong with it but you shouldn't be listening to me i try to spell any as eny
WE WANT MOAR
More material needed for review. Hurry up and make another part.
I noticed you sometimes change from 3rd person narrative to 1st person narrative. Other than that, great work! I bet that everyone in the internet will be wondering how Jo made those ponies look so realistic.
That's some pretty good video editing. The ponies look like they actually belong there.
(Interesting story concept. I'll be watching.)
The idea for the story is interesting.
WOW your not insane, uhhhh I hope Twilight doesn't get ruined by the computer. How did they get their?
(well its MUCH better than most story's I have seen, so this is in the 10%)
Go for it dude! As an author, I can tell this is going to be good.
are you going to have sex with any of them? (if you are, give pinkie a good slap on the flank for me ;D)
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No xD I've tried writing normal lemons and they turn out bad, why would a clopfic be any better? xD
Also, no, because that'd be pedophilia AND bestiality, and eh...not too big on that. (I say pedophilia because I'm only 16 and Pinkie is like...23-ish iirc. 'sides, I'm more of a colt-cuddler :U)
Hah, I actually laughed throughout the whole story!
Hitler requests MAOR!
FAGGETLAIN, FAGGETLAIN FAGGETLAIN!
STEINER! MOAR!
Uh, unless it's some kinda case of mass hysteria, then no, dude, you ain't going loco in the coco.
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(Okay, actual review time. The ponies are more or less in character, they're well described and they're cute. Really, the only complaint I have was that it was somewhat short and needs some details, both of which can be remedied with another chapter.
TL;DR, You have my attention, let's see if you can keep it.
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Oh, thank the gods above! I'll get to making another video soon, I'm glad I'm not batshit insane.
(Sorry for a short chapter though, but I'd been thinking of this story for like 3 or so days now, and finally decided to write a chapter of it...30 minutes before I had to leave for school. I promise the next one will be much, MUCH longer.)
I've seen a few shops in my day....
You really need more. Really! We can't really give a proper review when we have almost nothing to work with!
47318 it wouldn't be pedophilia unless were you live the legal is not 16
now GIVE US MOAR!!!
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Writing chappy 2 now, good god I now notice what you mean. It's gonna be a pain getting used to using the term "Jo" a bit more than "I". xD
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
It's an interesting concept.
Am I the only pony wondering HOW Rainbow and AJ are holding the Wiimotes?
47540 IT'S MAGIC! I DON'T HAVE TO EXPLAIN SHIT
Im interested in whether or not that was real or all in that guy's head.
It's fun so far. I once saw something similar on Youtube where they pasted the cartoon characters into a video recording of this one person's house. I've also watched about a dozen Gary's Mod videos involving them, including one where Ellis hugs Rarity and tells her he loves her.
LOL welcome to my watch list jo
Those ponies look shopped. I can tell from some of the pixels and from seeing quite a few shops in my time.
Also the main storyline seems to be okay so far. Although considering the story so far is "Suddenly ponies" and I think everyone would be fine with that. I sign for moar.
Don't worry, Pinkie, i would go to your parties!
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Great update! Keep them coming!
Is it just me, or did Celestia go all
Trollololololol, ololol.
47974 Maybe.
I'm liking the one called Fluttershy. Cute.
the funny thing is, if the ponies somehow appeared to me IRL, this would probably be how it would go.
Keep up the good work, i'm trackin this.
Oh please. Explaining to fictional characters how they're suddenly in the real world isn't that hard. All you have to do is explain to them multiversal theory, citing Back to the Future Part 2 as possibly the best and most easily understood example and then assert that they were from a universe we simply have the ability to peer into through storytelling.
...I have thought WAY too much about this.
fantastic
Oh Twilight, our human sub-culture has already begun to corrupt your innocent mind, I grow ashamed
Nice choice in literature though
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No, that is not odd in the slightest, that is actually a feat to be proud off, you are a very brave soul my friend ^^
I can already tell this shit is gonna get crazy.
At some point you should somehow describe Jo, his house, and just where the flip he lives.
Crazy Doom Reader CRAVES MOAR STORY! GIVE ME MOAR!!! AND I MEAN RIGHT NOW DAMNIT!!!!
Wow, nice special effects! That was really impressive when the dog showed up. It looked so real!
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Oh my Celestia, I fell out of my chair laughing when Twilight was reading Princess Molestia. Continue to update this awesome story!
I wonder how they would react to reading some of the sicker fanfics
I have been reading the comments, but can't seem to see any of the videos. Where are the links?
The story is good. Trollestia seems to be at it again.
48129 indeed. The show is actually a window to another world. Very intriguing.
Indeed. The show is actually a window. Intriguing.
Can you support my new story YouTube Vlogs: Equestria? I kinda had that idea when I was checking on other stories about YouTube, including yours. I already had the idea for my OC before I had the idea, however.