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Syn3rgy 97054

Joined May 2012
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    Syn3rgy's Stories (9)

    • The Life and Death of a DJ
      So how did Vinyl become... Vinyl?

      50,241 words · 2,642 views · 383 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Awoken
      The Semi-official sequel to AuroraDawn's 'Rainbow factory'
      10,555 words · 7,003 views · 156 likes · 3 dislikes
    • A Portrait of Hope
      1000 words to describe a picture.
      0 words · 813 views · 69 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Falling, Not Flying
      It's Hearth's Warming Eve and Rainbow Dash is falling, not flying.
      1,525 words · 385 views · 52 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Equinox
      4,973 words · 320 views · 36 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Novus Initium
      2,739 words · 328 views · 36 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Finding Avalon
      10,539 words · 91 views · 14 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Ode To Celestia: On Living Long
      1,578 words · 130 views · 21 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Harmony Almanac
      6,019 words · 60 views · 8 likes · 2 dislikes
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    My life has run its course; I’ve planted my hooves firmly on the ground and ridden the ups and downs to my greatest potential. I’ve loved, I’ve hated, I’ve cried, I’ve laughed… but most importantly I’ve overcome.

    Overcome my upbringing, my sorrows, my regrets, my downfalls, my losses and my failures. I’m complete, or almost complete.

    All that’s left is the smooth keys in front of me and a final wish. I could do it; I would call her to me and see her for a final time.

    Taking a deep meditative breath I brought my left hoof down on a key. It gave off a pure sound, one that rung out crisply and reverberated pleasantly; I could feel the bass undertone rattle deep in my chest. An electric blue light had flashed before my eyes; a mere spark, or a compound that, when combined with another, would begin to manifest.

    A brief smile tweaked the corners of my muzzle.

    I still had it in me.

    I played a second note, and the blazing red spark elicited rose to accommodate the blue one. Together they danced momentarily before combining together as a crackling blue and red orb.

    I played a fourth, fifth, sixth, and seventh.

    The new colors began to combine with the orb, circling it, changing it, becoming a backdrop for a picture. The scene began to unfold before my very eyes.

    I would call her back… even if it killed me.

    Comments ( 13 )

    #1 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Woah, good hook :pinkiehappy:

    #2 · 46w, 7h ago · · ·
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    I like it. =)

    Just a little nitpick:

    'in the process of doing so.' is redundant.

    Here are two better endings to the sentence:

    ...even if doing so killed me.

    ...even if I were killed in the process.

    I hope that helps.

    #3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    not quite sure what i just read...

    #4 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Wow... Very well done!

    #5 · 36w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ummmmm....... What did I just read?:rainbowhuh:

    #6 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    whats happening?

    #7 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1382889 keep reading and find out:ajbemused:

    #8 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Holy shit, Best hook ever! :twilightsheepish:

    #9 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You got me.:moustache:

    #10 · 26w, 23h ago · · ·
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    and already hit the feels for me.... sometimes the description just reminds ya of the personal things in your life.

    #11 · 10w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1382889 pinkie pie is mafia!!!!! :pinkiegasp: :rainbowlaugh:

    #12 · 9w, 1d ago · · ·
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    A story that gained my like with less than 500 words?  Well then.:pinkiehappy:

    #13 · 7w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Interesting Beginning, leaves a lot of questions, which I suppose is good. Not much learned except that Vinyl longs for someone, and has a piano-like instrument that summons colors. Count me interested.

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