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Razor Blade the Unicron


No longer writing here.

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This story is a sequel to The First Pony to Time Travel Without a Spell


Rainbow Dash has become an alicorn Princess, but there's still so much that she needs to do. A cutie-mark-removing unicorn, out of control vines that even Discord can't stop, and a power-hungry centaur are just the start. Plus, a certain entity just doesn't seem to leave no matter what...

Starlight Glimmer is Rainbow's friend, and Rainbow gave her a promise. She needs to stop her world's Starlight from going down the same path of revenge as her friend. But it's hard to explain this to somepony that you see in so many different lights. Especially since her world's Starlight doesn't believe in the multiverse.

And Discord is going to be in so much trouble by the time this is all done.


"Twilight, for the third time, I'm sorry I stole your alicorn-ness! ... What do you mean you don't mind? Then why have you been complaining about it?!?"


This is the third story in the Shadow-Dashverse. Reading the previous two stories are highly recommended for better comprehension.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 76 )

Yes! I'm going to be watching this really closely. :pinkiehappy: Will this be longer or shorter than the previous story?

7956970 I'm not sure how long this is going to be. All I know is what I want to write, and I have no idea how many chapters that'll be.

Please update this soon, sugar! If you have the time to.

7994229 yay. :yay:

And what's up with the coverart? Do we find out later?

7994244 Okay, maybe find something more relevant to avoid confusion, though :)

Very awesome so far~
Excited for the next chapter.

7994695 Now that fits perfect!! Shows the main character, their main characteristic, and doesn't possibly mislead about the story! :yay:

Daww :3

Does PRD have a castle? Can we see it? :rainbowwild:

And here we go! Pinkie Party Time!

I love this story so much :raritystarry::heart::pinkiehappy::scootangel:

Winter Moon Festival, sounds nice.

8009386 In case you were wondering, the topic of the Winter Moon Festival was briefly discussed between Rainbow and Luna in chapter seven of the previous story.

YAY! Friendship saves the day! Way to go Princess Dashie!

I still love how Rainbow isn't a powerful magical alicorn just because she's an alicorn. She still an amazing flier.

The potion should be white, not bright purple, sugarcube :ajsmug:

8018680 I think what NicLove means is that, if SPBA is set after SPGTMP, why is it not shown as a sequel?

8071685 Oh. It's because the Equestria Girls is a side story, so you don't really need to read it to understand what's happening in this story.

8071697 Yeah, don't worry, I thought that too

8162773 No, it's 'everybody' because Spike is also with them.

"Nopony expects the Dragon Inquisition!" yelled Pinkie.
A Monty Python reference huh?

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She's 1) capable of reaching transsonic speeds, 2) hyperintelligent, 3) an alicorn, 4) a princess (see 3 for prerequisite), 5) capable of space travel, 6) regularly dukes it out with the equivalent of a demon, would you like me to continue?

8296469 Well, she's not hyperintelligent, and just being a Princess doesn't make her powerful (just look at Prince Blueblood)

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Compared to the Rainbow we see in the show, and the populace in general? Yes, she is hyperintelligent. She accomplished space travel as a Pegasus by using more brain than braun. And she's an alicorn princess, so she has magical power and strength to spare in most cases. Being a princess, she has political power (whether she wants it or not).

I love the route this story has been taking.

I would love more, just to see how long it takes to see all of Shadow's plans and how they will be negated by Rainbow with the help of her friends.

"There can only be one princess in Equestria!" she cried, stamping her hooves on the ground and her horn flaring up. "And that princess..." She became engulfed in dark blue magic. "Will be me!"

Nightmare Moon appeared where Luna had been standing, and let out a cackle. Rainbow's eyes widened in shock, as the sun was covered by the moon in the sky.

Uhh you think you can beat Discord.

Good thing we usually have better safety protocols than the Princesses. Else we'd be leaving Plutonium in broom closets. Literally. Sigh.

Happy to see that this is still being updated :twilightsmile:

Picture link at the end is broken.

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Oh... Oh god... Oh that's ugly...

:pinkiesick:


(I hesitated to say anything, in case you like it, but, if you do, I have some resources to which I can direct you...)

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Shadow is supposed to look like an idiot. They're hyped up on a mixture of several different kinds of magic that should never mix, specifically Discord's and Sombra's. Since this chapter was majorly shortened down to what I originally wanted, in the concepts when encountering Shadow, Starlight was going to comment on how they looked like a idiot, with Rainbow pointing out how it doesn't matter because Shadow is a major threat.

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