WILL READ NOW!

I like this.

The characterization is true to their respective cannons, as is the information regarding the Sunny's lion head.

The layout however is a bit blocky, you are using a new line for each differing speaker, but there are no visible paragraphs, which I believe would make it easier on the Eye.

The chapter naming style is also very true and awesome. I hope this Fic gets alot more views, it deserves them.

I need another chapter

GIVE US MORE. this is awsome

Awesome. A One Piece mix and interesting.

Hurry up and release another chapter

EPIC! SO EPIC!

A very good start.

Make more!!

Not bad...

you have my thumbs up, fave and interest. continue

Why is it that this site has all the One Piece crossovers. Love it. Needs more.

Well, that sucks. Glad to see you were able to recover the rest of it.

I love Brook

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>>886094886094

Yohoho, as do I!

You want scary? FIND ZORO

Zoro should of been a griffon or a diamond dog he is to serios to be a pony.

So who's going to be the villain? Come on, we all know how the Straw Hats adventures usually go

-Find an amazing land beyond imagination

-Enjoy said land and make new friends

-Something bad occurs and the Straw Hats are usually hunted down for whatever reason

-Eventually the main villain appears and starts making said land look more like hell.

-Luffy beats up the main villain as the others take on side villains

-They have a party ( THERE MUST ALWAYS BE A PARTY)

-They leave with tears

That's basically it in a nutshell.

I can only sit and look on in horror at the  thought of what the Franky centaur attack would look like in his new form.

My brain cannot contain the excitement and anticipation zoro's obviously superbly epic part. please. i beg you, make it perfect

This really needs spaced out

Gear cutie mark?

Gear...gear....gear....nope, can't think of anyone.

>>938089938089

I think they mean gear as in supplies and garb and stuff.....maybe.

>>938261938261

*facepalm* D'oh!

where's the chapter????????????

Sorry! I accidently added too many chapters and... somehow published the extra one. Unless you're having trouble with the 4th chapter, because I posted that one. The next chapter should be out soon.

are you thinking on incorporating how fluttershy's 'stare' is like the kings haki?

what the guy at the top said. but you have my attention :D

this story read i shall!

pweeeeese format your story? its just a solid wall of text right nao

This needed to be a crossover XD

format other than that great

Brook was only without his body for 1 year not 50 and is now 88

Eeyup...No meat.

Edit: And OH SHIT! The navy's here!

Poor Luffy. He's not going to enjoy his stay all that much. Unless he gets a chance to fight something. That should cheer him up.

Lmao poor Luffy

Heh Luffy with no meat should be interesting.

Space out your words instead of cramming them together!  IT'S BAD WRITING!  Otherwise still good story

Love how most of us already know what he was told

22 years ago roger's died pretime skip the 24

You should start a new line during conversations, as it gets hard to tell whos talking at points

I thought Rarity would be like 18 or something around that, basically being older, seeing that she has her own business and seems more mature than the rest of the Mane 6. The only age reference I know of them, though, is that Fluttershy is a year older than Pinkie Pie(reference from the episode with Gilda). 16-18 in human years seems logical for the Mane 6, but this is just what I thought was appropriate considering that most of them have jobs. Times like this is where I wish there were a (specific) bio for these characters.

THIS STORY NEEDS MORE ZORO ......... AND CHUCK NORRIS AND SPIKE AND BARLEY AND PICKLES (lol what the hell am I talking about)

>>10729331072933

Agreed.

Hell, Put Usopp and Franky with the CMC

WTF MAN THAT IS A TERRIBLE IDEA!!! YOU WANT TO RAZE PONYVILLE OR SOMETHING!?

Chill, I'm just saying....

>>10730221073022 Franky and Usopp would be the perfect people to watch out for the CMC. Those three fillies are so easily distracted that all that Usopp would have to is start telling them stories and then Franky can make sure they don't get into to much trouble when they make there inevitable trip to the Everfree Forest. Franky vs Forest? Franky wins.

>>10738221073822

Hah! I told you so!

....Fine. You win this one. *shudders* Cuti mark crusader weapons manufacturers...

Is this story ever going to be updated? If life is keeping you busy that's fine.  I'm just wondering if this story ever going to have a new chapter, because I really like to see more from this fanfic.

Well god dammit. You just did a huge spoiler for me. I've only seen up to season 1 episode 26. Now I find out that Shanks dies. Splendid, what a wonderful way to find out.

6 chapters of Strawhats in Equestria and nobody pwnt the manticore yet?

Usopps Rubber band attack!

MOAAAR

>>17914991791499 At least he still got ''Usopp Spe~ll'', ''Usopp Noise'' and ''Ketchup Boshi'' and not to mention ''Usopp AAaaaAAAaaaAA!'' (Grappling hook).

i forsee sanji being full on pissed  after all "a chef's hands are his most prized possessions"

and he gonna lose them. lol

huh.. sanji took the whole "no hands" thing a lot better than i thought he would.

>>14965861496586 reader beware lol

meanwhile at the legion of doom.

oh wait wrong series lol

Couldn't Usopp just use the dials he got from the sky island although i don't remember if he has them anymore