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supersaiyanmikito 3151

Joined September 2011
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    Heavy Rain Crossover

    After an argument with Twilight, Spike is kidnapped by an unknown pony. Twilight soon discovers that she can save him, but is she willing to give up everything she cares for? How far will Twilight go to save Spike? Your choice...

    At the end of each chapter, you will be given a choice. If the next chapter is up, you will go to it following whatever choice you chose to do.

    This is another story I've been working on next to "My Little Duel Monsters."

    First Published
    4th Dec 2011
    Last Modified
    4th Dec 2011

    Comments ( 13 )

    #1 · 76w, 13h ago · · ·
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    go after spike geez

    #2 · 76w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Go in the field, of course.

    #3 · 76w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Go in..

    #4 · 76w, 9h ago · · ·
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    It may seem easy to make a choice but don't think that's all. It might not be so easy later down the road.

    Alright, let me explain to you how this works. Now that the Prologue has been uploaded. The next time I upload, it will be 2 chapters instead. Chapter 1A and Chapter 1B. Each chapter will represent your choice. It will continue like this until the very end. The story is planned to have about 4-5 chapters, so its pretty short, but as a whole its quite huge. Over 70 chapters total.

    #5 · 76w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Go in.

    not to sound like an idiot but couldn't she levitate something along her sides to keep from being cut?

    #6 · 76w, 4h ago · · ·
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    go after spike

    #7 · 75w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>51780

    nope remember no cheating levitating over the it is techically cheating. aside from that this seems like a sweet story.

    #8 · 75w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Dont rush into it without thinking about the situation first. Look around.

    #9 · 75w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>53325

    You've got the right idea.

    Trust me, the choices I'm going to throw at you in later will REALLY make you think. The first challenge is pretty easy but the other 2... Not so much...

    #10 · 75w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>53890

    This sort of thing reminds me of those graphic adventures in which the forum users make choices and the author chooses one of them and draws it, to make the story progress.

    #11 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Before I start reading, I can already tell you  are a genius... Now if this a flop or not, we shall see.

    #12 · 69w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm not sure if this would be allowed or not, but why not go down the coward path, see whats there, and if it's not something useful, go through the thorn bushes?

    I mean, the best choice for finding Spike would be to go through the thorn bushes, but I'm not sure if I could truly bring myself to do it at first. The coward path would be easy, but then you will most likely miss the clue that is in the clearing.

    Why doesn't she levitate herself over the bushes into the clearing? The rules say you cannot cheat by using a tracker/tracing spell, but levitation is neither.

    Definatly tracking:twilightblush:this story.

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