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WIL_I_ZIN 315283

Joined March 2012
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    WIL_I_ZIN's Stories (3)

    • Cheating Death Act II: Five of a Kind and One Joker
      After the events of 'Cheating Death', Felix must now deal with the concequences of being the first representative of his species to Equestria. With Death as a 'chaperone' how badly could he screw this up? Short answer? A lot.

      21,492 words · 4,367 views · 752 likes · 21 dislikes
    • Cheating Death
      Literally cheating Death to achieve a goal, can make it even harder to accomplish.
      30,488 words · 7,743 views · 924 likes · 42 dislikes
    • Through the Storm and Glass
      Having bad luck is one thing, but having bad luck with ponies is hilarious
      3,819 words · 395 views · 23 likes · 2 dislikes
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    Revised as of 06/06/2013

    Felix Jackson died saving a little girl from a train. Fortunately, it wasn't his time to go and Death was just about to send him back. But Felix pulls a fast one and tricks Death into sending him to Equestria. And Death is none to pleased about this. It's tough enough to avoid death on earth; but when you're the only human in a world of miniature technicolor ponies, hiding becomes all but impossible.

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    Revision editing done by HoovesMcCoy, AuthorGenesis, and Anonymous

    Pre-reading done by Hortense, Wazaga, Fantoche the 13th, Sallythemanatee, and munomana.

    First Published
    5th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    6th Jun 2013

    Comments ( 367 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I've cheated death before!:ajsmug:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · 2 · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    i keeped laughing my ass off, please make more of these:twilightsmile:  

    with that humor you won my thumbs up and a follow!:pinkiesmile:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · 8 · ·
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    >>859080   me too all I had to do was beat him in a game of limbo and now he is my best friend

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Who would have known death is a brony. Now i feel a bit better when i die :pinkiesad2:

    But anyways, the main character is hilarious, death was hilarious, the story its self is hilarious, so god sir, keep it up :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Dear Felix Jackson,

           HELL YEAH!!!

               - FlowerGirl3765

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · 2 · ·
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    >>859382

    Hey if you had to handle all the deaths of multiple dimensions you would definitely pick favorites. XD

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    #9 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Excellent story. Kinda reminds me of Final Destination.

    Nice reference to Don't Fear The Reaper.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>860128

    HA! Someone got the band reference! Excellent my good man.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh wow this is actually very hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Can't wait my man! I though hope that it isn't final destination like. With threats at every turn. :flutterrage:  

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    MOAR!!! AMAZING STORY SO FAR! KEEP IT UP

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So far it's excellent :pinkiehappy:

    Favourited and liked.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    “Whaaaaat? Sorry I can’t here you over all the fucks that I give.”

    That immediately reminded me of both of these memes...

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    was it worth it, living a life time in equestria, the price being eternal torment when you die? oh hell yes it was totally worth that shit.

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · 5 · 2 ·
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    FUUUUUCK YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAH:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    Great chapter there dude and or dudete keep it up!!!

    - FIRST

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Please update this as fast as you can. I'm enjoying it greatly.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Omg finally! Ive been waiting forever for this to update! Keep up teh good workz:pinkiehappy:

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    sounds like accidentally dieing was worth it:scootangel:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Lol.  I just found this story now.  This is awesome.

    It's like... Yu Yu Hakusho meets Final Destination, with a side order of Bill and Ted... only with ponies too.  What could be better?

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · 3 · ·
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    ... I'm just waiting for him to get overeager, and come across as a bipedal Molestia with no magic or inhibitions. :pinkiecrazy::rainbowkiss:

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I LOVE THIS xD

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Found a typo:

    ...The way Death refused to use contractions was starting to get to me.

    “Well everyone sees my office a little differently, its usually a representation of the persons soul...."

    Its, in this case is a contraction between it and is.

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    MooooooooooOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaar!

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Man, this is some final destination crap we got here.  Hopefully it won't end so predictably.:trixieshiftright:

    I like the cartoony elements you kept though, keep it up.

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
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    I really feel bad for Death. Imagine that you were just about to bring a guy back to life, and he pretty much spits on you, and acts like a complete selfish jackass.

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>960337

    HA! I love that interpretation of events! Good point sir.

    >>959291

    DOH. Thank you for pointing that out, I have fixed it now. ^^

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>960594 That's kinda interesting, because Hades was my favorite Greek god. The richest of them all.

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well this isn't Hades actually, Death in this story is moreso a modern interpretation of the grim-reaper. Cloak, scythe, snark, the usual.

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 10h ago · · ·
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    make it so that when he finaly berfriends a pony he chokes on some stupid food then turn this story in to yuyu hakusho

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 3h ago · · ·
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    You also had another mistake.

    'The current was quite strong and I found myself moving more to the side then to the shore'

    If i'm reading this correctly, you're saying that you went to the side, more than you did to  the shore. If you did, then that would mean that you meant to say than, not then.

    I forgive you though, as not only is that one of the most common grammatical mistakes in the entire english language, i also didn't see any other spelling, grammer, or punctual errors.


    I also liked this read. Keep it up :twilightblush:

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ha! Screw you, Death!  Felix (that is his name, right?): 2 Death: 0

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Good chapter. My favorite by far ! :pinkiehappy:

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    lol poor death he just got flipped a bird by a mortal

    #37 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · · ·
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    inb4 subtle Yusuke Urameshii cameo.

    #38 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · 3 · ·
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    I was amazed at what I was watching; it was like if National Geographic teamed up with the Sci Fi channel to deliver a mythical version of Deadliest Warrior.

    That was the greatest line ever.

    #39 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Awesome story bro. :rainbowkiss:

    I love it.

    #40 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Seriously, I want to see that now.

    Manticore Vs. Dire Wolves,  Eastern Dragon Vs. Western Dragon, Kracken Vs. Megalodon, T-Rex vs Sphynix, Medusa Vs The Bull of Heaven...

    WHO IS DEADLIEST?

    Okay, about the actual story: Really intrested, our leading man is reacting in a pretty helariusly realistic manner. Also getting a huge kick out of the Final Destination feel of Death trying to get him back. Will be looking forward to this continuing, especially since he doesn't operate on cartoon physics, so getting tackled by (say) :rainbowdetermined2: could kill him, and Death is kinda out to get him...

    #41 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1051894

    Actually, I can't help but feel it was less Deadliest Warrior and more Jurassic Park :)

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    #43 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I like this, but i have to wonder... shall Felix ever meet ponies?

    #44 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    When I read the last line of the previous chapter, I knew that this was going to happen :fluttercry:

    #45 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    LOL id do the exact same thing befor i die just yell out THIS IS BUUUUUUUUUULSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT

    wouldnt rather it any other way

    #46 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I DEMAND MORE

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    #48 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I knew that was going to happen when the accident came. Poor Felix... Poor Sophie... :ajsleepy:

    #49 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    ...

    Damn.

    Anyway, this story has an interesting execution - Death reminds me of the way he's portrayed on Family Guy.

    Have a fave, good sir.

    #50 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    MOAR:flutterrage:

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