I am a student who lives in San Jose, Ca. My favorite mlp character is Discord. My favorite type of stories are comedies. My favorite stories by far is Bride and Daughter Of Discord by DisneyFanatic23
Four years after King Sombra's death, Twilight and her allies had just found out that the former ruler of the Crystal Empire had a son. His name was Darko. He looked like and was about as powerful as his father. Will the Mane 6, Starlight, and Princess Celestia be able to stop him before Equestria is doomed, or will Darko fulfill is destiny?
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Why did you say the mane 8 in this chapter and mane 7 in the previous one? Also can you make the following chapters longer it doesn't even take a minute to read all of it. Other then that this story has caught my interest good luck with it
This is fine, considering it's your first fic. Let me give you a suggestion though, find an editor. They would help remove mistakes, make the grammar and spelling correct, and make the story flow better! I'm not trying to be harsh, I'm trying to help you.
Last time I checked King Sombra was a unicorn, so there's no reason for his son to be an alicorn.
And why would Drako leave his personal diary in a library, rather than in someplace hidden?
It looks like another poorly written fanfic with an edgy, black and red alicorn MC.
7934588 This. I could offer advice on not writing a shitfic, but I'll just leave a down-vote instead.
*snif snif* Do I smell an edgelord red and black OC?
I take it you've only just started your writing hobby? If so, then I've some advice I'd like to share—provided, of course, you'd like and be willing to hear it.
Tfw someone makes a Linkin park joke before you.
this is too edgy. I didn't know people created these stories unironically
This is great! I sincerely cannot stop laughing. Keep it up!
I can't tell if this is satire or not. I really can't.
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I would happy to have you as an editor!