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neutralmilk


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Meet Diamond Tiara. She’s a stuck up earth pony who’s been given whatever she’s wanted whenever she’s wanted it. Her life has everything: riches, luxury, ease, and most of all, her best friend Silver Spoon. With the school year over it seems like Diamond Tiara is set for the best summer ever! Of course, that is, until her big sister comes for a nice, long visit to Ponyville…

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Finally, a new fic. Sorry for it taking so long to write one. Went through a brief "OHJEEZIHATEWRITINGHNNNNNNGH" type phase. While it's not my best work (or maybe it is, I don;t know) I'm definitely proud of it. I loved the picture and I'm happy to be writing a fic with two underused characters from the show. :moustache:
Your comments, thumbs and faves are very appreciated :pinkiehappy:
Special thanks to ProjectFailSing, the awesome creator of the Pony Spotlight video series for inspiring me to write this. Send him some love. Or the story. OR BOTH :eeyup:

Needless to say, this is gonna be GOOD. :yay::yay::yay::yay:

I love how you let me read your stories early. :moustache: Thanks again, and this is pure WIN. How did I not notice how similar they look until now!!?!?!?!?!?!?? :twilightangry2:

981369 Glad you liked it! And it's only cause you're so specialkpogdfjiogdjfklghjndokfjsdlbjhsfogjskldldfkjgsfkldkglnsrklha <= poorly written baby talk. :eeyup:

I think I love you. :moustache: Please continue. And make more Bill Cosby!


Il fave it just to see whee it goes. This should prove to be awesome:moustache:

That last paragraph....
"Hey Lil Sis!"

MY reaction?

"Oh dear god..." and a bit of "Holy crap, this is gonna be friggin AWESOME..."

This seems really familiar.

Oh it's time for DT to face the music.

Head Canon. TO make you feel better, i hardly ever ever ever lever never dever let anyone else's ideas become headcanon. this is genius. continue

979843 If the name of this fic is after the name of her 'big sister' than I must say, you are mistaken
Her name is Screw Ball (fangiven). Screw Loose is the one in the hospital in 'read it and weep'

First off I love The Brak Show, reference. Second that ending :rainbowlaugh: , It was like "Oh, shit it's Screwball the sister that everyone actually likes."
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I look forward to seeing where this goes.

I smell a future featured story

why does my brain want to replace screw balls regular beanie with a tall red and white horizontally striped top hat?

L4

:heart:

I wonder if Twilight remember seeing screwballl in the sky denying logic XD

anyway Can't wait for an update... Screwball has to be my favorite character every second to Derpy/Dizty...

This is gonna be good :pinkiehappy:

Commenting, because I know this will help it get featured.

...right?

This is golden.

I have a feeling that Screw Ball and Pinkie Pie know each other...Just a guess. I shall await more!

Oh Hell Yeah!!

I can tell already this is gonna be a heck of a story :eeyup:

1059063 Ha I hope! Thanks man! :moustache:
1059252 .....Have you access to my story bible?! MOTHER OF GOD.
1058382 Holy God, someone else who watched the Brak Show???? I can die in peace :pinkiehappy:
1058334 I know her name is Screwball. I just felt naming the story Screwball would sound kinda weird :derpytongue2:
1058407 Sheesh, I hope! I need people to spread the story on the web and whatnot
1058315 Hahah, thanks! Ever since I saw the picture it became head cannon to me too :derpytongue2:

Dear Mr.Neutralmilk,
I have kidnapped your family, your friends, your pet dog, and that one distant friend that you barely talk to (But you still keep him on your Skype so that he doesn't feel bad). For every day this is not updated, I will be sawing off ten limbs.

With love :heart:,
Your fan

1059493 But... But... IM THE ONLY ONE I HAVE :pinkiegasp: If this story gets featured, I'll have a new chapter done pretty soon. Otherwise, I'll take my time to make sure I don't lose interest in it. It won't be that long though! So keep that saw off of them... Except Carl. He deserves it. Still owes me a potato salad sandwhich.

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Hey I was right! :yay: Congrats!
And check out my story please if you have the time...

1059524 Thanks! And sure! Send me a link so I'll remember :derpytongue2:

Diamond Tiara stopped in her tracks and eyed the heaping pile of toys, board games, and My Little Human dolls that stared back at her.

:rainbowderp: Has anypony told Lyra about these?

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Undoubtedly. She's probably a broman.

It's the one I've been waiting for...now if only I had time to read it...:ajsleepy:

I'll be back...

Trackity trackity track track. :pinkiehappy: Cool Story

1059516 Not only will I give you a thumb up and tracking, but a virtual potato salad sandwich as well.

I remember seeing the picture on derpibooru, and then somebody commenting that there should be a fic based on that picture. I agreed with him, and it seems our wish have come true. :pinkiehappy:

“Your Daddy taught you to insult other ponies?” silver Spoon stopped in her tracks, a confused look on her face.

And by the way, I believe that s should be capitalized.

It's a good premise. Ever since I first saw that picture some months back, I've always approved of the idea of Screwball being Diamond's sister. This could be interesting depending on where you go with it.

1059516 You won't update as fast if it's not featured? :fluttershysad: Looks like I have to make a hundred different accounts to upvote this then :fluttershbad: There go my plans for this week

You have more than 80 Thumbs up and not a single one down. just keep the work crisp and neat and catchy, and it'll make the box in no time!:derpytongue2:

1063184 Eh, I'll update it as frequently as possible. I'm notorious for taking a looooong time. But, I am surprisingly almost done with Chapter 2 :pinkiehappy:
1073052 I hope when I update it it manages to catch the last three slots section :moustache:

I love it already! Of course, I loved it when you first had me look it over. But still. :twilightsmile:

I already love it.

I wish Screwball could be my babysitter... :fluttercry:

Aaaaaand here it is. The semi long awaited Chapter II to Screw Loose. Quite a lot of this is different from my original plan, namely the inclusion of them going to Gustave's Sugar Shack. IT originally ended with them having some sort of epic couch cushion fight over something minor. While I loved the idea, this just fit the story MUCH better. :eeyup:
Now let's just hope that this story remains with 100% thumbs up after the inclusion of a chapter with ACTUAL story...
For those counting, here's a scoreboard:
97 likes
0 dislikes
166 faves
500% swag. :moustache:

:pinkiehappy: This can only end SO well.

107 likes? No dislikes?

Impossibru! This story must be made of pure win to achieve such awesomeness!

Ahem I apologies in advance:pinkiesad2:
Screw loose kick off your Sunday hooves
Oki doke kick off my haunch
Apple jack Get back before we crack
Lose your scoots:scootangel: everypony get screw loose
:facehoof:wtf happend to my life I was once a comic book artist

by the moon... this is not going to end well for diamond.

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She might be lucky that her sanity would be left intact...

who is crazier pinkie or screwy? Tune in next time and find out

120 likes and no dislikes. But a long waiting period...
Ill check next month on the progress, and see 500% swag:moustache:

So Pinkie's in some place called Gustave's. Cool.

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Ponies happened. Embrace it!

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