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This is a shipping fic between Rainbow Dash and G1 Starscream... I kid you not and no I was not drunk when I thought this up. Its a shipping fic but they spend most of the time yelling at each other and trying to destroy each other. If your expecting a sappy love story that involves a lot of kissing and hugs then you'd be mistaken, it was a love doomed to fail from the start, if you'd call two beings trying to destroy each other love that is... Inspired by the Death Battle where Dash fought Starscream and beat him. Originally was going to be a one shot but ended up being longer.

First Published
5th Jul 2012
Last Modified
5th Jul 2012
#1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

So you came over here, eh Mutt? Hope your story gets some attention, and much better attention than mine did :V.

Good luck, bud.

#2 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Mad-mutt you did it again. Very excellent story, there are many mistakes, but you nailed both characters well, with starscream, and his arrogance, and overly stuck up pride, to rainbow dash, and her self pride as well. The plot of the story you made is very interesting, and how you detail, much of the parts of the story, but not to much, to lose interest within the story, and with the parts, of you always leaving the reader thinking what will  happen next is particularly well executed including the progression of the story too, all in all good job, and Well done, mad-mutt, another exceptional story created, don't stop writing, and keep moving forward.

#3 · 128w, 19h ago · · ·

did you get this idea from death battles?

#4 · 128w, 10h ago · · ·

>>860667

Yes I did, I mentioned that in the story's description.

>>858410

Thanks a lot, I like comments like these that show support but also point out the mistakes I've made so I can hopefully improve on them. I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far.

#5 · 127w, 6d ago · · ·

This is awesome! My two favourite characters from Transformers and MLP being in a ship-fic. Keep going with this idea!

#6 · 102w, 6d ago · · ·

:pinkiehappy: I loved it. I hope there's more.

#7 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

I love this story man, it was the inspiration for a fic that Im working on. Please update it I want to know what happens next!

#8 · 92w, 10h ago · · ·

keep going awsome

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