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Please comment If you do not like please let me know why only way I will improve in writing I have actually had all these chapters written since the Beginning of the year about half way through January. I have been refining and tweaking the story chapters cross checking with Fallout Equestria by Kkat things I caught Almost right off the bat I am trying to keep events that Happened During The time that Littlepip is out helping the wasteland as wrot but things will differ slightly From time to time Its in the timeframe that Littlepip has been about a week out of the stable shortly after her assault on Old Appleloosa an her rescue of Silver Bell I hope you enjoy this story.
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Take these down and reupload chapter by chapter, posting two a week. You'll get more attention that way.
The general should recruit moon Lilly's town or wherever she came from as it seems like a sound idea and would fill those suits of power armor also bat ponys worship luna so they would be pretty loyal
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I have been toying with that Idea for some time IT WILL HAPPEN Plus I have plans things will come to a head plus plot thickens not to mention there are going to be plots coming up will be on the line in more ways than one
Use PERIODS. Please use proper sentences for the love of God. Love the story idea and I'd hate to see it got to waste.
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I am currently looking for an editor to help me with spelling punctuations and sentence structure. Have yet to find one.
Just started reading it. The story is great... After you get by the non use of proper sentences. It just makes it hard to read you know? You dont know where to stop and think or go onto the next topic, Some serious editing needs to be done here to be readable, hell i bet those dislikes are just because of not using proper punctuation
So once again it looks like a great story, I say look as it is really hard to read but also understand.
Having big blocks of text with no punctuation in it, just becomes really hard to undertsand what is going on.
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Sorry about that I'm looking for an editor to assist in this but not the easy part at times.
When can we expect the next chapter to be out
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I'm working on it but hitting a bit of writer's block will hopefully have it finished this month if not early next month.
Plz don’t be dead
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Nooooo it's not dead I am working on part 2. It is just taking longer than I wish to get it out due to issues with family and other things. Not to mention pc issues can't do this very well off my phone.
Good story! Looking forward to some more.
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Thanks kind of in a little writers block on the story at the moment have to read foe again as well to keep it within the timeline of the original considering that it's taking place within FoE main story but as a side story within the timeline. Research can be a pain but worth it in the long run.
Update
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In the works
Reread, still enjoyed the story. Hope all is well. Looking forward to seeing an update.
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Working on next chapter also rereading original to get information that is needed to keep inline with the events of the original story witch this is story that goes along side it but is a side story told from a different point of view. Still needs to be accurate to the original story well as long as they events timeline though it does have a what if scenario supposedly going to be able to tie into what happened to Rainbow Dash the only one that we do not know what happened to her we know what happened to Rarity Pinkie Pie Fluttershy Twilight
I missed this update! Great read as usual. Looking forward to seeing more. Hope all is well.
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Yeah everything is alright just dreaded writers block still working on next chapter.
I hope that you're still writing this
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Yes yes I am tough spot trying to keep as much of FoE main story in line is not an easy thing to do of course had to add a few thing for when my oc's interaction with little pip and her group..
ok just take your time and not rush it
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Don't plan on rushing it wish to provide a good story not rushing it would just cause problem and issues to appear.
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How's it going
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Slowly I'll be skipping some of the events of FoE oh I'll be making references to the timeline in story but other then that it's not truly following little pips adventures getting the recruiting and other thing finding how to fit things into the story that fits and works with the story isn't easy.
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Got it thanks
just checking in how is it going?
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With everything that's been happening lately, I'm having a hard time getting time to write plus trying to stay as close to FoE by Kkat is hard need to keep timeline events in the story so it link's up, so been popping over and reading the story over and over to get the key hard points in Fallout Equestria to line up with points in this story. My plan for the story was to have it follow as closely to the little pips story as possible. I know I will need to split off from the main story to tell CJ's story here and the whole dash leaving little hints here and there that she's out there somewhere even in Kkats story there is a video log of Rainbow wanting to meet this Little Pip. That was part of my inspiration for this story With a little twist.
It's a new chapter let's celebrate
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Lol yeah sorry for the wait been dealing with a lot of personal shit next chapter is about 25% complete. Going to be a bigger chapter as well.
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Got it 👍