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Scootaloo stood in the dressing room of Carousel Boutique. She never thought she'd find herself wearing a dress, but this was a special occasion. It had been 15 years since she was first taken in by the Dash family. It felt odd that she was about to change her last name for the third time in her life, but it felt right. Like the day she first picked up a guitar. Her career in music had propelled her into a household name in Equestria. At least among the homes of ponies who enjoyed hard rock. Sweetie Belle still held the spotlight over Scoot, but that was to be expected. The lead singer always gets the attention over the other band members. Iron Pony. Initially just a joke among the band members (They had all watched the Iron Pony Competition between Rainbow Dash and Applejack) it had become their official name after receiving their record label. Applebloom was their head stage engineer. She set up all their sets and props since their first show back in Ponyville. Both her and Sweetie Belle earned their cutie marks that day, ending the "secret society" known to all as the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
"Scootaloo, this is not the time to get lost in thought."
"Sorry Rarity. It's just been a wild ride, you know?"
"Yes, I do. Are you nervous?"
"No, actually. I'm excited. This is the start of a new life for me. I can't wait to walk down that aisle."
"I'm almost sad that I have to hand you over today. At least you found yourself a good stallion." Rainbow chimed in. Scootaloo had asked Rainbow to hand her off to her fiance because Rainbow had always played more of the 'father figure' role in Scootaloo's life after she moved in with the Dash family.
"Look at you. All grown up on your wedding day. I can't wait to see the look on his face when he sees you up there." Spitfire was near to tears from the joy filling her heart. She had never expected to watch her daughter get married before taking Scootaloo in. She and Rainbow had never made any plans to adopt before they found her. It was then that Sweetie Belle walked in.
"Wow Scoot, you look amazing!"
"Thanks Sweetie Belle."
"Nervous?"
"Nah. I'm going to be married after this. No matter what goes wrong out there today, I'll still be married to him tonight."
"The night after the wedding is the fun part. Frankly I wouldn't have minded skipping the ceremony and going straight for that." Rainbow chimed in.
"Yeah, frankly the whole wedding thing is sweet, but in the end I had a lot more fun tasting the-"
"Mom, sorry to cut you off, but I don't really want to hear about you guys' sexual endeavors." Scootaloo loved her parents deeply, but she wouldn't have minded if they were a little more reserved about their bedroom life.
"Anyway, I came in hear to fulfill my duty as Mare of Honor and tell you that you need to get your flank out there because everypony is waiting on you to start." Sweetie Belle had always been very direct.
"Well Scoot, I'm about to complete my final duty as your mom." Rainbow offered a foreleg. "Shall we?" Scootaloo wrapped her foreleg around her mother's. They stepped outside into the Ponyville town square. Despite her fame, Scootaloo and the band had always been able to find peace and privacy in the small town. It's why they continued to live there after they began raking in bits for their music. Scootaloo walked down the aisle and stood in front of her fiance. This was where her life had taken her. This is where it would begin anew. Fluttershy had her birds singing beautifully. She had become better at arranging music with them since she married Soarin'. But Scootaloo didn't hear it. As far as she was concerned the world was empty save for her and her fiance. This was where her life would truly begin. Everything she had endured to this point had made her the mare she was. Made her the mare that the stallion in front of her had fallen in love with. In this moment, she knew that her life was complete.
Author's note:
I never expected to have this much fun writing a fanfic. I was expecting that I would start it, get poor reviews, and scrap the idea. If it weren't for all of you who read this and kept wanting more I wouldn't have saw the project through. I want to thank all of you for coming with me on this ride. And I want to ask you to stay tuned to find out what happens in between the last two chapters. I will be releasing two sequels to Family Mares that will fill the void. I would also like to ask for some assistance. I am no artist. If somepony would like to draw me some cover art for my next two stories, please send me a private message to my account here on FIMfiction.net
With Love and Tolerance
Dylan Kern
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Sooo, two more chapters and it's done for this one? I'd be mad, but you promised two sequels, so I'll let it slide, THIS time. 
Nice, chapter two, though skipping ahead like that kinda made my head hurt bit imagining what happened in the middle. You'd better make the last chapters great! After what I've read, I want to see you end this with style! Thanks for this story, and I will DEFINITELY check out the sequels. I was never much for stories like this, but you really caught my eye with this one, primal. Keep up the amazing work!
Bravo!!! it was an amazing fic you should be very proud 
its sad that the story ended but look at the bright side
you..for the lack of better words "evolved" into a great author, i still remember the first chapter that was a little rushed and some textual errors but as you progressed, your style and your creativity were better and more interesting to see and read 
i hope you make others stories, 'cause this one was just incredible
keep writing 
bravo my good brony
Ahahahahaha! Weddings are great!
I don't really have anything to say except for all the crap I commented on in the last chapter. Go look at that, Corny! It'll be worth your while, trust me.
Thanks for leaving that note at the end, I feel honored to get recognized as a fan by you. It's really great to know that you enjoyed doing this. Dear Celestia, I love the brony community so much. 
Honestly, reading your comment at the end made me want to say this: I'm a crappy writer myself, I'm pretty good a critiquing and enjoying other peoples' fics, but even though I've been trying to write one myself it's not coming out so hot. So even though I'm not an expert who can claim to be above you, it was really special for me to watch you go from a decent author at the beginning, who honestly wasn't a very good author, to someone I think is a really amazing writer. You went through a transformation and produced this beautiful story. . . . and I feel really proud of you. Really proud. Which is weird because I didn't really influence you that much. I got a warm feeling in my body right now! 
Let's be friends! I'm definitely following you!
Wow, definitely lied about that second part (Hopefully you're not complaining! 
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Love you, Corny!
I CAN'T HELP IT! 
Image: http://images.hollywood.com/site/agent_smith.jpgprimalcorn1 - "Trust me, it's not over"
Wow, you have one of the best fics I have ever read... bravo very well done
when I saw that this fic was over it felt like a little bit of me died inside. But, then I read the authors note and i'm happy now
If every writer held their story to the standard you have set on your's... my life would be complete
a song for the end
FOOLY COOLY !
♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦
"Ride on Shooting Star",.
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Slide of an orange reflects in the sky
Hanging the pride of a sponge
Spider
No need to hide
the premonition of life captured
it is like a colored dream
Ride on shooting star
I continued singing
like a shotgun with all my heart
A grunged hamster becomes more mature
and is accompanied by a lobster of revenge
Sniper
What do you say that
you can see in that framed world?
I want to touch it before you aim
Ride on shooting star
I'm looking for you and I'm having withdrawal symptoms
I lied to you
Ride on shooting star
I continued singing
like a shotgun with all my heart
Very nice story overall, man, and your writing has gotten at least 100 times better than it was at the start. I still have some issues with the story, like Celestia's about face from lawful stupid to 'oh wait, I make the rules!' which is just, ugh. That aside, love it and I will be waiting for the follow-ups.
Wow, here we are, we have reached the end...
I'm just going to say that this story really came together great. You have great potential and astounding ability.
I would say more, but >>75659 took pretty much all that I would say. Go read their comments and all the praise they hold.
You deserve it
Shhhh... there is two sequels. There is still time, justice may still be served.
This was one of the best fanfic stories I have encountered. Chapters one through 16 were read in a single night. My eyes teared up when it seemed Scoot was going to end it. 
Man, that was a rough cliff hanger.
Ever so slight disappointment that Twilight didn't get to rage against her Princess more. Or bring up the idea of 'well if you can't take my word, then why didn't you question the hospital?' Maybe I'm Luna biased, but Celestia always comes off so arrogant that it shocks me that Twilight stays devoted.
Definitely on board for the sequels. Scootaloo has grown on me. 
Omg lol I read the first two chapters when they first came out, but the story totally took a different turn also I'm impressed at how quickly you if finished all of this... I read the originals Only about a month ago... I just read this all in one sitting lol so good...
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