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I have a crush on Pinkie Pie.

Don't laugh.

First Published
16th Feb 2017
Last Modified
16th Feb 2017
#1 · 2d, 23h ago · 2 · ·

I guess you can say this fic is...raw cringe.

#2 · 2d, 23h ago · 3 · ·

Wow, this fic was amazing, deep and complex. I applaud you, Raw Cringe. 10/1

Pls help Cringe kidnapped me and is forcing me to write good reviews of his story

#4 · 2d, 22h ago · · ·

Great work.

#5 · 2d, 21h ago · · ·

>>7953377 I guess you can say your kidnapping was...Shameless.

#6 · 2d, 20h ago · · ·

oh damn, i thought this was incomplete. was getting bretty interesting

oh yeah i loved your oldfic btw

#7 · 2d, 20h ago · · ·

>>7953603

The original ending I was going to see Pinkie talk to another boy and i would get so mad I would punch the universe out of existence

However i thought it would be more surprising not to have a surprise for once, plus it feels nice to write a positive story

#8 · 2d, 20h ago · · ·

>>7953626

yeah theres nothing wrong with writing a nice story. I think what jarred me is all the character development you gave to pinkie and the world with the whole "barely any christians" thing and with how keen she was to read the bible with someone else. that gives you a lot of territory to explore (this pinkies obviously different from the one we all know, same goes for the world) but the fic sorta just ended

#9 · 2d, 19h ago · · ·

>>7953520 That doesn't even make sense

#10 · 2d, 15h ago · · ·

I have a crush on Pinkie Pie. Don't laugh.

You don't quite understand reverse psychology, do you?

#11 · 2d, 15h ago · · ·

Well, then. I admit, I was a bit turned off by the religion thing, *also, making Pinkie religious, interesting* however, it is an interesting one

#12 · 2d, 15h ago · 1 · 1 ·

>>7954214

no one with over 200 followers is allowed to have an opinion on my stories

get the fuck out normie

#13 · 2d, 13h ago · · ·

>>7954332 i assure you I am far from normal, my good sir or madam. Also, I thought the story was alright, but since the opinion doesn't matter...well, just stick a rod up my backside until it brushes against my teeth, right?

#14 · 1d, 14h ago · · ·

well... it's different and not that bad of a start. I will just say, one of the last paragraphs, the dialogue between pinkie and RC was in one. When someone else starts talking, it's time to start a new paragraph. And Pinkie being catholic...interesting premise. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

#15 · 1d, 14h ago · · ·

>>7956701

The story's already complete, man. =/ Kind of a low key ending I know.

I know about "new speaker new paragraph" I was just doing a little experiment with that one paragraph. Thanks for looking out for me though.

#16 · 1d, 14h ago · · ·

Woah, my dude, how many levels of irony are you on?

#17 · 1d, 13h ago · · ·

>>7956744

I have lost the count years ago

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