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Twilight Sparkle has been studying the magic of friendship in Ponyville for just over a year, and she’s come to the inescapable conclusion that she and Rainbow Dash became friends as a prelude to something much greater. But will the pegasus agree? When Rainbow Dash accepts Twilight’s invitation to a slumber party, she has no idea what she’s getting herself into.
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Double Reaction
I've seen some dark stuff come out of MLP fan fiction, but that was BEYOND THE LINE!!
This is like it was written by someone who barely watched an episode. You do know that Twilight has done magic bubble shields before, right?
These OOC "let me make people offended for attention" style "dark" fics are always the worst.
Your use of WW2 ingredients is disgusting, to say the least. It really wasn't believable to me. I do have a friend who is not a fan of, shall he really be called, Hitler, but does know a LOT about him. He would be disgusted.
Second off, like Alpha said, beyond the line.
Welp, no complaints here since it was well written. Not promoting, or condoning it.
Well, you've done it. You are the first person to write a fanfic that has officially made me sick to my stomach and/or managed to creep me the buck out (and I've read Cupcakes, Sweet Apple Massacre, Rainbow Factory, and everything by mrhappyface). It was well written; I'll give you that much credit. Now, I despise Nazis with a passion - no matter what anyone says, but I tolerate them because they are people, too. In summary: the writing was good, the premise was unsettling and pretty bucking creepy.
Hmm... despite the general opposition to this story I found it interesting. A well written work I must say. If this is a troll fic you failed in making me rage. In fact, I really enjoyed it. Good job. This story deserves more credit than the it's given. BECAUSE IT'S A FANFICTION. A WORK OF FICTION, but not everyone can appreciate a good fictional tale. Some just take it too seriously.
Oh yeah, and, HEIL SPARKLER!
Not sure if liked or disliked, so I disliked.
This thing just polarised all the critics!
Great skill at writing.
Terrible choice of subject
You kids are all just too prissy and ignorant to see a good fanfic when you find one
As I myself am of mixed-German descent, I may be biased, but what the hell.
Heil Sparkler!
I am shocked and appalled and torn.
First, obligatory moral condemnation.
But also, I found it quite funny at times and well written. Definitely not going to vote on this one... but still... as butterflyslushie said,
Heil Sparkler!
You have great writing-really. It's perfect.
You managed to bring a dark tone to a story, and make it just dark enough to completely creep people out, but not cross to Mature.
The Sweetie Belle Scootaloo thing? That was terrible. But a very good point.
The Rarity Fluttershy thing? Wasn't nearly as bad for something.
And the way you let Rainbow Dash give in to Twilight? A bit out of character, but since she's the element of loyalty, kind of fitting. In an odd, distorted way. I imagined her fighting a bit more.
You should've put in a bit more emotion with Dash-it was a bit too fast to make you sad.
Overall, have an up thumb, because it is beautifully written, despite the creepy subject.
Heil Sparkler!
I feel bad for Trixie, though :(
Good writing.
But the premise didn't work for me.
Oh yeah, AND YOU TURNED MY WAIFU INTO THAT- THAT- THING
!!
i have....nothing to say here.....
Of course, we all know how Hitlight will come to her end. We must have revenge for
and 
! For the Pegasi! 
This was bad with a capital B A and D.. and a few ! on the end. I couldn't even finish reading it. I first thought it would be some joke as rainbow did but then it just got SO bad I couldn't even think to finish maybe it was better in the end than I think it was going to go but yeah.. not finishing it.
this is amazing heil the master race!
You'll get a like for this one.
And what are the others talking about in the comments? This wasn't too dark. Seriously can't people even take this? Anyway, I liked it and it was very well written too!
Oh, and Heil Sparkler!
Very well done.
*hits with roll of newspaper* bad Canterlot Voice! bad! don't you ever do such a thing again!
seriously, the crimes against mankind were bad enough, we don't have to poniefy it, be it for a laugh, or to shock the crowd, or whatnot.
ThunderCrash is disappoint
bleh bleh bleh how dare you talk about nazis on a site that archives stories about old men raping babbies with broken bottles bleh bleh bleh how dare you mention hitler on the same site as a story where some guy rapes rainbow dash for 10 chapters of 10,000 words each bleh bleh bleh how dare you make fun of the holocaust on the site where i posted my fic making fun of burn-scarred aids-ridden herpes-diseased orphan prostitutes bleh bleh bleh i'm so mad i'm going to go complain to al sharpton and sue you for 100 billion dollars for defacing my literary feces bleh bleh bleh this makes me so angry even though i'm so jaded that putting an iron spike through your ass and having it come out your mouth wouldn't bother me in the slightest bleh bleh bleh why don't you go suck a cock bleh bleh bleh my name is moralfag notanon and i am very offended by anything related to nazis bleh bleh bleh i rage over it while i jack off to loli porn and cp bleh bleh bleh i am a stupid newfag and cannot see the genius behind this artwork bleh bleh bleh hitler bleh bleh bleh stalin bleh bleh bleh james earl ray bleh bleh bleh mrhappyface bleh bleh bleh dongs bleh bleh bleh the irony of israeli-made uzi weapons carried by neo-nazis bleh bleh bleh thistlefuck bleh bleh bleh i am so high right now bleh bleh bleh bon bon bon bon bon bon bon bon bleh bleh bleh drew pickles bleh bleh bleh
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Good story, there should be a sequel or something.
*BARF*
man that was sick!!
won't down vote based on topic but...
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utterly stupid
As far as excuse-for-torture stories go, it's not bad, but I like "Cupcakes" better. I think Hitler-Twilight was both scary and strangely fitting.
The brainwashing part, however, made me want Twilight's head. Prepare the guillotine.