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One day Rainbow Dash goes missing. Twilight, Pinkie, Applejack, Fluttershy and Rarity soon discovered that Dash has been taken to 'the other side' a parallel universe much like their own, only with slight differences in society and their own alternate selves; where some may have never met because the Rainbow Dash on the other side didn't exist to create the Sonic Rainboom.

Later on, if you read on, a war develops between the two parallel universes. Can either universe survive? Or will both worlds perish?

This will be a crossover with the TV series Fringe on FOX. Also the picture is how Twilight would look like on the other side.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 22 )

From what I can see, it's been written pretty good so far, try to make the updates longer.

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Yeah, it's going to get longer. This chapter is like a prologue that's why it's shorter.

awww yeahh Fringe is awesome :twilightsmile:

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i know, it's so awesome :rainbowkiss:

I wonder, if only two ponies can travel to parallel at once and Twilight and Applejack go together and they will find Rainbow Dash... Doesn't that make three of them? :twilightoops::applejackconfused::rainbowhuh:

Are you planning to follow through with the entire season 2 and 3 story arc with this? It looks interesting, but I'm worried that the lack of a Peter/Bolivia aspect (please, please don't try) or contrast between the "Walters" weakens it. Otherwise seems to be very interesting, best of luck with it.

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Yea basically it'll follow the main idea of season 3, with changes ofcourse. I'll have other conflicts to keep it interesting.

Nice chapter, I really enjoyed the reading, though sudden changes from past tense to present tense were a little bit confusing. Oh, and I think I saw a thypo. When Fluttershy said: Of course, no I can, but back then I couldn't You meant now, right?

have to say, this was more than a little difficult and painful to read. storyline was great. but oh dear sweet Celestia your phrasing and spelling broke my brain.

i truly hope that this is only a partial draft and that there will be more to come for this chapter. ..a mere 407 words? the reader barely gets to taste the story being told, much less sink their mental teeth in and feel the story unfold. please, please tell me there is more?

Wow, that was short. :derpyderp1: I really hope that there gonna be more, because this chapter (or at least the part which you published) looks very interesting. Please, say there will be more. :fluttercry:

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Of course there will be more. This is just a little teaser for what is to come. :twilightblush:

Didn't you say in previous chapters that in the alternative world the Wonderbolts did not exist?

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Yeah, I gotta change that in the previous chapter, I don't know why on Earth I forgot I wrote that. School is messing with my memories. :pinkiecrazy:

Oh, and BTW, description said there was gonna be a war. Is this upcoming?

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