Well. Here I am, a Chaos embedded Earth Pony Filly which have unpredictable powers like that jigsaw guy. Well, can you believe that I was a human boy before I died in an unoriginal way? No? Then good, we'll stay that way, cause I will tell you about my story of... a massive randomfest I've been through.
Seriously, just read about my time in 'Equestria'.
God... what a stupid name.
Character tags will be added and removed during the following chapters.
Warning: Contains swearing, sexual references, random things, Fourth-wall breaking and some other stuff. And also human turned filly.
Chapters (1)
Loving the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great story, love leafwood!
Leafwood or rarity hmmmm. I cant help but think leafwood is rarity but discorded.hmmmm.
Be it or not. IS IT POSSIBLE to love a story and wants a full storyline with a sequel at first read.
Random: It seems I am not the only Chaos God here.
Well, let's see where this- TEAPOT!!
Oh boy, another human who turns into a pony and doesn't even blink, because he's such a special snowflake that his ordinary hijinks are way wackier than this. Oh look, interrupting the plot to make snarky fourth wall references, because that's a good idea to include in your story ever.
I should make a Screwball story. Got a good one in mind, and nobody ever seems to write it! It's like authors don't have psychic powers or something!
But seriously this does have potential, just... let the Screw flow naturally, rather than feeling obliged to sprinkle lolrandomness in.
No they didn't.
Okay, who white washed the timber wolves?
Mystery solved!
Oh, is it Tuesday already?
Careful Screwball. If he has the Bearers, then he's also got Discord's magic. Which is your magic.
I'm sorry, but i do not like this. It feels to quick and have the time doesn't really make sense.
On Top of that, something that was REALLY throwing me of was the amount of "then"s you put in in here. Barely a single sentece changes without "then" being there and it was really off putting.
i know, having screwball as a main character, gives one the excuse to be random, i've done the same... but there's random and then there's just... whatever, that doesn't even work in writing.
i will be keeping this in my Meh. sorry
so.... whents the next chapter
Whens the next ch great so far
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