Whatever in creation exists without my knowledge exists without my consent.
A 16 year old takes advantage of a loophole and enlists after Pearl Harbor. He learns the hard way that he is not invincible.
Imagine his surprise when he woke up in the wrong body and in another world, with a nice dose of PTSD to boot.
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Seems Decent enough.
I await the next update
Donny is that a referenc to the movie Pearl harbour?
I actually have a few problems with Sam Stone's death. First off any tank crewman with experience will never have their heads sticking out when there are infantry shooting at them. It may have been better if the Panzer's assistant driver was the one who shot Sam Stone. Second of all, at this point in the war the Tigers and Panthers hadn't been used against the Americans. The American's first battles against Tigers and Panthers took place after D-day. I find it extremely unlikely that a Panzer model made before the Tiger and Panther models would fight a group of soldiers by itself. Usually the older Panzers fought in groups so I would have expected to see at least ten Panzers.
Other than that I think the story is great and has a lot of potential. I would love to see what happens.
That is a fast way to Go.
7885774 maby its was a panzer 3
7885769 Donny Donowitz. Think Quentin Tarantino
Good writing, I'm enjoying the story.
7885774 Thank you for the feedback. My knowledge of the North African Campaign is lacking. I will keep this critique in mind for future chapters.
So Sam Stone is now an unicorn filly. Poor bastard, I feel sorry for him when Rarity gets a hold of him/her.
Erm... minor thing, but there was no such thing as Anger Management classes back then. If you got into fights, you were either paddled or expelled.
7887236 I know. I couldn't resist a reference to Two and a Half men, though.
Luna are midnight blue.
Eh hehejejeje.
The pink menace is rarely seen in the fiction world, although it is one of my favorite ways new humans view pinkie. Who wouldnt be scared shitless if a pretty pink pony could break the laws of physics and personal space?
Honorha- Grelod, you dirty whorse! Get back here, so I tear out your heart, and extend my Bloodlust! I didn't spend all this time becoming a Companion of the Inner Circle just to have you fuck it up! Nom nom nom!
Nice Skyrim referenc.
i find myself hoping sammy wont go for living with pinky
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Hello, Grelod.
I for some reason find that thought to be really really funny. And a chance for me to rip apart a cliche. Oh well. Hold my beer.
Do not doubt Uncle? Thats creepy.
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7986422 ha! LOL.
This is an incredibly stupid quibble, but I feel obligated to comment:
Almost nobody used sheetrock in the early 1940s.
The interior walls were done with plaster and lathe. Lathe being small slats of wood nailed between the wall studs (or later, they sometimes used metal lattice.) Then they'd put at least three coats of plaster on top. The process took DAYS. Especially if it was hot and humid.
Sheetrock existed, but wasn't in common use. Actually, the second world war really brought Sheetrock into mainstream use. The army had to set up tons of barracks. And had to do it fast. You couldn't wait days for layer after layer of plaster to dry. Sheetrock to the rescue! And it was so much faster and more convenient that everyone started using it during the post war housing boom.
So now you know! And as GI Joe once told me, knowing is half the battle! (The other half is not getting shot by a German Panzer while stupidly charging it with a grenade...)
You... You introduced an original character... With the same name as a main cast member? Why would you do that? Making sure your characters are easily distinguishable in a story is like, writing 101! Even if that character never shows up again, it was still a bad idea!
7996771 I honestly thought you were referring to Sam for a minute there. Thank you for the feedback though, I don't often get such critiques but they help tons.
~~this is great this is so great i Love it very very muuuuucccchhhh!!~~
But what about spiders?
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Whenever you walk into a spider web, just pretend you're crossing the finish line of a race you didn't even know you entered. It's hard to throw up from fear when you're busy being a legend.
8008650 and snakes?
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Then you set everything on fire. Everything. Including yourself.
8029578 But what about Tom's ex-wife?
8029644 You leave her for Justice Guy to take care of. Like when a wife leaves her husband with three kids and no job to run off to friggin' Hawaii with some Doctor named Bob.
I really hate to be the nit picker in these comments but transistor radios did not appear until 1955
Maybe it's just me, but Discord would die for his contemptible behavior, Rarity be killed on principle (don't have a keep a promise to a dead mare), Princess Luna knows too much, and is the most likely cause for my current mindraping, those Doctors would be executed for painful incompetence, and Pinkie would never have gotten me to sign. Of course, that might just be me, making certain I could possess a network of information (orphans can be easy to turn your way, should you know how, and some might end up in places of value and import). Might kill Twilight, for attempting to strongarm me into being adopted. Maybe I'd just break Pinkie, RD, and Fluttershy, so their Elements could never be used against me. Tip my hand to AJ, at just the right time, so that I sabotage her reputation and business, ruining her, as well. Not sure what I'd do about Celly, Cady, or Shiny... probably kill the last two in their sleep, and manipulate the first into seeing an ongoing conspiracy against her, as the ones who did the awful stuff I did, so I could direct her away from me.
After all, who suspects a child of being the horrible monster, who had ponies killed, tortured, raped (and the rapists tortured to death on principle; even I have morals, as broken, bent, and busted as they are), stollen from, and conned everypony he or she came across?
I'd even tell the troped Story of the Scorpian and the Insert Symbolically Appropriate Animal Here, just for the extra Renegade Points.
Just saying if he joined the Army he wouldn't call an NCO (CPL-SGM) Sir, he'd call them by rank. Even in the Marines you only call an NCO Sir when hes your'e Drill Instructor. And the Army you call them Drill Sergeants.
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Damn you, did you get in my notes? How did you figure out the story so quick?
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This I did not know. As we advance the story I hope to find a way to turn the oversights into assets.
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Thank you for the heads up. I appreciate the information immensely and may just change it up a bit there.
8051925 "A Magician never reveals their (singular, inoffensive, gender-neutral pronoun) secrets..."?
8052061 I won't be surprised if one day someone sees a person walking a dog, goes, "Oh, can I pet your dog?" And the other person goes "Did you just assume my pet's species?"
8052130 You know, as much as I'd like to hope that humanity isn't that batshit insane, there is simply too much evidence to the contrary...
Thank Azathoth's Hundred Screaming Maws for Omniverse Theory!
Great chapter.
Hopp your friends dad make it i pray for him now.
7909332 grammar man grammar.
8166493 ?
8008645 oh great this one has arachnophobia
7933011 and don't forget the fourth wall
Well she's definitely not going to be getting out of this one
WTF A short chapter that is only five words
8183419 Get it? To make a long story short? Because... because it's only a few words!