Spare Me

ERather Fetching, Don't You Think?
Equestria Girls
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The good news? Someone has finally volunteered to help out at the animal shelter with Fluttershy! The bad news? It's an ex-conman who was just let out of prison... Wish her luck.
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Fluttershy (EqG)
Fangren · 3.9k words · 41 1 · 1.7k views

Tartarus State Penitentiary, home to some of the most dangerous criminals the Canterlot City metropolitan area has ever seen.

Some of them have been in there for a long time, and most never make it out.

Most.

The first SYNCHRONY oneshot in the same continuity as Synchrony and Oathmaker.

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Blizzard mauve #1 · Jan 26th, 2017 · 2 · ·

I'm so happy someone has written discord into the equestrian girls realm as an adult. The idea of him causing Chao there always interested me ,but I'm not that good of a writer. I tried to read the other stories with him at CHS ,but everyone seems to make him a teen. He should at the less be as old as if not older then Celestia. Personally I've always pictured him in his 50s and a lot like how you've written him. I hope you write more but I'm happy just to have this.

Fangren

Fangren #2 · Jan 26th, 2017 · 2 · ·

7897944 I'm glad I could make you happy with my portrayal of Discord! I actually haven't read any teen Discord stories, but I completely agree that he needs to be an old man in the Equestria Girls world. It just fits his character so, so much better. And while this particular story is complete...well, I may just write more of my version of human Discord in the future.

Loganberry

Loganberry #3 · Mar 1st, 2017 · 1 · ·

Full review here, but in brief: a nice concept, decently executed. The ending is a little uninteresting, but Discord works well and I like the dialogue. Have an upvote.

Fangren

Fangren #4 · Mar 1st, 2017 · · ·

7989802 Thanks for the review! Yeah lol the ending isn't really much, I knew I wanted it to end with something like that, but I suppose I should've waited a bit longer until Discord was actually outside or something. Well, my endings are a work in progress I guess.