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Chancegunnett
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Lol
Interesting read, I'll wait for more
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It's supposed to be cliche, Kinda a cringy humor thing
I mean I enjoy the steamy talk , it's nice to seeing it not just being " flirt then fuck "
Also I welcome our new nightmare "Mooncake" overlord
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Praise The Moon!!
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*Rolls on the floor laughing* By Faust was the dialogue steamy
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Ha ha ha I've always been a sucker for puns and word play and teasing , and this "steamy goodness " Sure fits that bill
Now time to spread the word that maybeeee Nightmare Mooncake isn't soooo bad
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Wow, I'm the first to comment this chapter. YAY
Anyways, good job. I loved reading this chapter, I'm looking forward to the next part of this story
Yes to mature
YYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!..........
...........uuhhh..I-I mean, uhm... yes, that would be nice.
Just had to throw the cliche in there didn't ya
8056640 I changed it up a bit, usually it's the guy that's smoking, in this case it was a smexy lunar goddess
But yeah, of course I did
True, still it was funny having that image in my head.
Great story so far. Only issues I can really see are the occasional missed letter, and many the pacing. Though this is just my opinion, it's fine as is. But you do have the potential to add more scenes between the big moments. More, "everyday moments" for lack of a better term. As I said before, this was just my opinion, and I look foward to the next installment.
Do you think Nightmare Rarity would sound like normal Rarity, or would she get a new voice? What do you think this new voice would sound like?
Welp, she's been smitten.
Mooncakes! They're great!
Hah, they are worth each other.
This can only end well.
Supreme ruler of Equestria, everyone.
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Thank you very much for your input, I'm sorry it took so long to reply, and I promise to take your advice into consideration in future chapters.
Why does the term Space Ghost come to mind?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zorak
8126902 *facepalm* oh for fucks sake
Don't you dare judge me, this song is good and fitting.
Wees zijn ziel genadig...
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.... I don't speak dutch?
Wait won't the child be half human?
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Yep
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You crazy Dutch basterd?
Guzma?
One ‘‘the’’ too many.
Guess you may as well call it a legrest.
‘‘ado’’
The ‘M’ should be capitalized.
Damn.
More .
Expect?
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DAMN IT TYPOS
Cute
1) N'awwww.
2) Had a few laughs.
3) Read title in Super Kami Guru's voice (Super Mega Hyper Alpha... He will be at this for a while...)
Now for an error I found:
Forgot the closing quotation mark.
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Zegen zijn ziel ooh heilige geest
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An echo-y Rarity? That's how I picture her at least.
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NIEN¡
Adorbs!