Punch Therapy

Aria Blaze is a very angry individual. She normally took that anger out on the bags at her favorite gym, where she could be alone. Sunset Shimmer decides to give her a bit of company.

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Jlargent

Jlargent #1 · Jan 19th, 2017 · · ·

Cue the music:

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #2 · Jan 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Pretty good story, I like this Punch therapy thing. (sadly I have no profound critique to offer aside from "i liked it")

7879466 Dang, so close to being first

Blazeblast4

Blazeblast4 #3 · Jan 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Really liked this one. I don't often see bratty Aria used dramatically, especially this well. There was a nice smooth curve to the ending, not feeling rushed. Not too big of a fan of Adagio in this, though the Sonata was a pleasant surprise, with a bit of decent world building here as well (though I'm not sure if they're breaking into the gym every night, or just going in after everyone else left). I'd say the star of the show was Sunset, and I haven't seen one like this before. It was a very nice darker take on her, with her still maintaining a bit of her manipulative side and more pragmatic. The two of them work really well off each other. The only particularly weak part was the writing to Princess Twilight, as it felt way too on the nose, clunky, and out of character for Twilight and this version of Sunset. Overall a great story.

Dustchu

Dustchu #4 · Jan 19th, 2017 · · ·

Ahhh I love these kinda stories, nicely done!
Quite the read

Miss_Rare_Maiden

Miss_Rare_Maiden #5 · Jan 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Very good story, the part where Sunset Shimmer describes how she still has a bit of hate for Princess Twilight was a brilliant point to add, it made Sunset look more relatable, flawed, and showed how a lot of us still have some inner demons that just refuse to go away, however we don't let them control us. Aria was amazing as well, I feel like you were able to fully capture her characteristics with just the little snipets we got of her from Rainbow Rocks, there wasn't any point in the story where I felt as though I had to stop and question my self if that was something the character would do. Very good tittle and description as well, I was submerged to both these traits on account that this was a very good scenario to put these two characters together where they would most likely interact. I don't imagine them talking like in the story at a park, but at a boxing gym, now that makes sense. Very nice work and I hope to continue reading more from you

MrAskAPirate

MrAskAPirate #6 · Jan 19th, 2017 · · ·

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9/10, needs more Dempsey Roll.

chillbook1

chillbook1 #7 · Jan 19th, 2017 · · ·

7879466 That's a good track. I wouldn't say it's especially appropriate for this story, but it's quite nice.

chillbook1

chillbook1 #8 · Jan 19th, 2017 · · ·

7879569 Yeah, that ending was hard for me to do. It didn't help that I had already canned the story and given up all hope on completing it. I'm glad my friend talked me out of it.

Thanks for reading.

chillbook1