Slow down, you're doing fine, you can't be everything you want to be, before your time... -Vienna, The Stranger: Billy Joel. (Any Pronouns)
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Rainbow Dash has a question, a burning, nagging question, and there's really only one way to answer it. The question? Does her marefriend really smell like apples? Trouble is, the way to answering that question could potentially ruin her reputation as Ponyville's most awesome mare and make her... (Gasp) 20% less cooler. But will an unexpected late night flight lead to an answer?
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But what about in Sonic Rainboom where she seemed fine in Cloudsdale?
7881236 Yeah, that is a conundrum. My guess being is that because she had so many other things to focus on, Applejack was far too distracted to worry about her fear of heights. That's usually how it is with me. (Long as I don't look down of course.)
I liked this story a lot, keep up the good work, I will tag along and read more stories you put out! ~
This story's chapter title instantly reminded me of the old classic Just Quit Yer Fussin' and Snuggle Up, Sugarcube! by shortskirtsandexplosions. Your story is totally different in style, setting, and content, so the comparison is quite weak, but it's AppleDash and it was the first thing I thought of when I saw this story.
I have a soft spot for AppleDash fluff, so thanks for writing this, and now I'm going to go read shortskirtsandexplosions' story again.
7881690 Ya know, funnily enough, I was thinking of that exact same story when I wrote the chapter title...
I always love a good AppleDash story this was pretty good.
I may not be an AppleDash shipper, but this was a good fic! There are only two problems I really came across.
I assume you meant "idiot"?
The other problem was that the transition between snuggling and not snuggling is just a bit too sudden and lacking a good transition. A couple more than three or four sentences should probably be used. What I'm saying is that I can point out the exact paragraph where it has a subtle change. It should have just a little more flow.
Like I said, it was good, and I think you've actually inspired me to write a snugglefic. Didn't know it was a thing until now.
7908084 For the record, idjit has actually been southern slang for a while now and Applejack's accent does draw from pretty much every point in the south so I figured it'd pass without much notice. But you're right, the skip to not cuddling to cuddling was pretty quick, but I was going for something short and cute. And actually yeah, snugglefics are a thing. There's even a whole group dedicated to it, which you can find in the list of groups this fic is in,
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Haha, I had no idea about idjit being a word. I just assumed it was a typo from J being so close to I on the keyboard. I will most certainly be joining that snugglefic group. Happy writing!
Maybe you could look at something I made?
7908965 Maybe I will.
This was very cute! I'm not always the biggest fan of Appledash, but I loved them here, they were so adorable, well done!
7953227 Well, that was the intention...
7953259 Well, it was a well-executed intention!
i looking for my first fanflic to read for my first youtube video and i like to read this story if you like and if it ok can i use the art work if it ok with you?
8013643 Yeah, you can do a reading of this, in fact I'd be honored. About the art, I don't know as I didn't draw it, but if you can find the original artist and give him credit then it should be okay.
That was so soft and adorable! <3