Who am I? Just another guy who likes games, cartoons and cookies.
A long time ago, after an eventful day with Twilight and Celestia, Spike would get illusions of Twilight every day. As time passed, those illusions eventually disappeared, but every birthday, Twilight appears again. But Spike's 1200th birthday is going to be an interesting one.
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I'm cancer :P Nice story by the way.
It should be "which"
The story is written in 1st person, so it should be "the room itself.... It wasn't a mess as I expected it to be, as Luna spent so much time inside her bedroom" or something similar.
I liked the story, although I don't think that Twilight would kill Spike to save the princess but it's an alternative universe after all, and I even kind of like that dark Twilight.
I expected this to be lame... I was wrong. Congrats sir, you've earned a favorite for this story.
It's sad but happy in a way. I actually can't imagine Equestria ruled by Luna and Cadance alone. But then again, Celestia ruled it by herself for nearly a thousand years. (until Cadance, I don't know when that was) That ending though... I like it. 
7875819 oops, I'll get to that, thanks for reading my story!
Starlight would have have to of been one of the ponies killed, or she'd have used time travel to try and fix it.
7875843 Why would you think that it was lame in the first place? lol
Anyways, I'm glad that you enjoyed my story!
7875903 I guess I just think most dark stories are. Most of the ones I have read before were pretty bad. Ones where the world ends or someone goes crazy, that sort of thing. It just didn't seem like the thing I'd like, but I was wrong. Don't get me wrong, I still don't like the genre any more than I used to, but there are good stories in it such as this one. I hope I didn't offend you with calling your story lame, I do that sometimes. Usually my instincts are right though. But not today.
7876005 Nope, you didn't offend me, I was just curious. Again, thanks for reading my story and thanks for the follow!
7876031 No problem!
Thanks for the follow back!
This is a very good one-shot.
7877337 Really? Thanks!
What an incredible read!
7899620 I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.