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A frustrated writer who just wants people to like their stories.

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All Vapor Trail wanted to do was ask Sky Stinger on a date. But as it turns out, Sky Stinger has a reason why the two of them can't go out.

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Comments ( 23 )

What a troll.:facehoof:

Kinda hilarious short story though.:rainbowlaugh:

I think this was very well excecuted story. You made me feel all the genres of this story. The characters and dialogue I think were excellent. I found it funny, I was sure what to make of the story reading through it, but in the end it turned out romantic, but mostly funny. I liked that about this story. Now there was one or two errors are found throughout the story, but nothing too jarring at all. Good story.

If someone asked Luan from the Loud house on a date they would get the same reaction Luaggie 4 life

Totally adorable. The more stories about these two, the better.

7876299 Thanks! :twilightsmile:


7876349 Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :pinkiehappy:

7876925 Agreed! :raritywink:

He can be glad that his joke didn’t back fired

So cute! Vapor/Sky best couple 20forever

Only one word for this-adorkable :rainbowkiss:

That was pretty cute, but damn what a dick.

That arrogant son of a...........!!!!!!!

Sky Stinger, that was a dick move. You're lucky Vapor listened to you when you called that it was a joke.

It's always fun to read a fun story :)

At first I was like: :fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::fluttercry:
And then I was like: :rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh:

Hahahahhahahaha!!!! :rainbowlaugh: Hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

7891014 Glad to see you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:


7894318 :pinkiehappy:

7923590 Just coincidence I guess. :moustache:

Such a plothole

Ha! Hilarious!

I mean, it was mean, but also funny...?

That was brilliant. :rainbowlaugh:

DF

. . . what a fucking asshole. She should have fed him his teeth.

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