On a simple walk through the town of Canterlot, the good Doctor Whooves caught the eye of a strange mare. Only her eyes and her cutie mark really stood out, but it was more about WHY they stood out; they were the same. He'd seen other ponies like this, but they always turned out to be twins, and this was most certainly NOT a twin of his. Who was this mare?
My first one shot and, as a result, my first finished shipfic!
Contains: unpopular shipping, backstory, and my own little humor at the end poking fun at my own ship. Enjoy!
Edit - 1/18/17 - And apparently with my first one shot comes my first time on the popular list! Thanks, everyone. Couldn't have done it without ya!
Chapters (1)
Hey, you should add this to some groups.
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Oh, thanks for adding it to some more groups for me! The only one I'm gonna remove is the Texan one. Proud Michigander here.
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Shame. I'm a Texan.
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Oh, I assumed that. I just don't want users thinking I'm Texan when I'm not. Still, thank you.
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No problem. If it's not there, I'll just put it back in the "Your FELLOW Texans Recommend" folder.
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Be my guest.
Weird. But cool!
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'Tis the life of such a doctor!
It feels incomplete... with it's a shame because I wanted more... other than that, it's a good story.
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Like I said, I might make a sequel someday. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though!
The Doctor's end question is perfect.
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I was just trying to add my little dose of humor while keeping his over-rational thinking in check.
Might be considered narcissism. ...The Doctor may not realize it, but he's probably fulfilling one of Captain Jack's fantasies' right about now. Personally I think you should have made Minutte/Colgate into the Rani, Missy or Romana, less weird that way.
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I'm happy you enjoyed this and added it to your liked stories, but I will now proceed to tell you-
I have no idea what that comment means.
Interesting. Very interesting. Me want more.
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Oh, I may have a little something in mind. Something a bit more... adventurous (in more ways than one, perhaps.)
Glad you enjoyed reading!
Not bad. A tad strange for my tastes, but I feel like you could go somewhere with this. It wouldn't be terrible if this continued, I would give it a read. (view from a lonely Nebraskan, and no we aren't all farmers, just a lot of us) ~
This story is weird but I have a weirder idea.
You said next story Will be a clopfic so why not make a threesome with 2 doctors and Derpy (wow this sounds even weirder when I say it like that) :D
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I'll make it separate from the sequel I had in mind though. 
Huh. Not the worst idea in the world... I'll consider it.
Oh, and thanks for the follow!
8064012 Thank you and you're welcome :)
Ich will mehr
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Ich werde versuchen, daran zu arbeiten!
Vielen Dank für den Liebling!
This review is brought to you by the group, "A for Effort".
Name of Story: Special Appointment
Total Score out of 10: 7
Pros: Character interaction feels genuine. nothing out-of-character and nothing really out of place as far as characterization. Visualization and imagery are solid, especially when describing the interior of the TARDIS.
Cons: The character you described to be as Colgate is actually Minuette from the show, and while I understand that's what the fans called her for some time (Fanon), it's still a little confusing and out of place. The dialogue also felt a little rushed at times.
Additional Notes: It was cute, but even though it was a romance story, it still felt a little too fast for my liking. I like the idea that you've made, and I'd be happy to read more about what you do with these characters in the future.
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Happy to hear you liked it!
Just to comment quickly on the "Colgate" topic, I want to say that "Colgate" seems to be what MOST people call her, even if her canon name is Minuette. (Kinda like how "Derpy" has the real name "Muffin" but NO ONE calls her that.) And I personally feel that readers can infer from the cover art that the character that Doc will meet is going to be Minuette/Colgate.
But that's just my opinion! And I think you'll be happy to hear that I have a good idea of how to lay out the next fic: as a longer story with multiple chapters about them in the world of Subnautica!
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Let me know when your story comes to fruition.
...and now we know the 13th Doctor will be female!
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Glad to see my story predicts the future.