This is another of my stories. And I know the first chapter is short and maybe a little rushed and possibly some grammer errors.

>>847480847480 All may be true, but that doesn't mean it isn't worth my like.

Scootaloo views Rainbow Dash as more than just a friend, oh boy!

Applejack and Fluttershy are pregnant, wow dosen't take much apperantly for these mares to get laid.

Sorry if this is short, but I'm just showing them getting close for a surprise later on in the story.

Yet another story where Scootaloo is an orphan, seriously Hasbro can you please tell us the TRUTH?! (Genie reference)

And to think I'm going to a wedding in a couple of days.

Applebloom: Hey Soarin where do babies come from?

Soarin: (Thinking) Oh geez not now, come on think, think, think (Saying) Well you see when a mare and a stallion love each other very much they ask the stork for a baby, (Thinking) The Stork excuse always works.

Please reread your chapters, there are a few spelling errors that you will catch but the one that

you really need to fix is this one.

["Why don't I get you a dress for it.  I still have that dress you   ( whore )   at Shinings wedding."]

you really need to change that to (wore).  Good story will be watching for the rest of it.

>>884560884560 Thank you, that really helped.

Sorry for the delay, trying to figure out what goes into this chapter.

This was random but I liked it

You could improve on your punctuation and sentence breaks though. Some grammar mistakes here and there, but should be fine.

The people that takes care of this website should add a spell check button.

What Spitfire and Scootaloo are siblings? That has to be the most orginal plot twist I have ever seen!

Wow that's quite the family tree there.

Eh… This chapter made not much sense… And your spelling and grammer. Past tense for found is found. Founded has a different meaning than found. You spelt near and neer. You have quite a lot of punctuation errors though…

>>850051850051 maybe a sister?

>>Starrat the part where Scootaloo admits she's an orphan is a bit rushed

I was a bit rushed here I know. But I wanted to get to my other story.

And then everything you-know-what-ual actually happened THE END!

By the way do you ever plan on making a sequl to this, maybe one where Twilight, Rarity, or Pinkie Pie gets hitched, or maybe one where Applejack and FLutterhsy give birth to their foals, or perhaps even one where Rainbow Dash finds out she's pregnant?

>>955146955146I guess I could.  Even if I have another story that does not have any relation to this.  And I'm doing this on a iPad.

>>955186955186 Really I had no idea.

If you were to have of the three remaining single mares of the mane six what ships would you use for Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and possibly Rarity if you don't support SpikexRarity shipping?

>>955212955212 I'm thinking of PokeyPie, TwiBurn, and actually I don't mind SpikexRarity.

>>957158957158 Is Pokey refering to Pokey Pierce cause I don't think he's appeared in the show except as a brief background pony, guess I'll have to check the wiki, one person actually said that one of the ships they like is TwilightxFilm or Flam which in my book would never work.

TwilightxBraeburn well that's original I wonder how Applejack and Big Macintosh would react to thier new cousin-in-law if the two ever got married.

The only reason why I would ever suspect you or anyone else wouldn't support SpikexRarity shipping is because of the age difference which is why some fans have recently starting becoming obessed with SpikexSweetie Belle shipping which still works.

and then they had sex... the end

nice story! It must have been very effective because as i was re-reading the part with Macintosh falling over my brother fell over too thinking i was practicing telling him I was pregnant COLTS!(or men)

Haha! I love Big mac's reaction

Wait, woah woah woah, she just forgot about Jet? Just like that?

[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GhMvKv4GX5U] Yeah.... it kinda fits in the part where Scootaloo tells Rainbow that shes an orphan...

Ok.... i think this needs a sequal... i mean.... i would fit in so purrrfectly :) you could make a whole series based on this!!!