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I suddenly have this urge to have Daring Do tie me up. I wonder why
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OH DEAR GOD. You actually decided to go into detail of that night.
Coming back Saturday mornin'. Then i shall... Go to my death in this.
Who knows if Twilight has this boos in her Daring Do collection...
849223 That gif made me laugh way harder than it should.
Anyway, this was pretty damn nice.
You should replace some words however, in the beginning you write Expanse instead of Expense and tights instead of thighs.
Near the very end there's a spend instead of spent, but that's all. I think I'm gonna pick up reading the griffons goblet
BWAH HA HA HA HA!!
Evil influence is fun!
The END has SOME clop??? ARE YOU CRAZY???
Thanks everypony!
This is my first clopfic, so I'm glad so many readers liked it.
849223 that gif......was similar to my reaction of reading this.....
Okay now got the chance to read it. Despite me me *cough* not really reading these *cough* it was actually really good! Found some mistakes in the grammar but nothing major.
Now, Sebbaa, you're obligated to do Bulwark and the two Zebra twins.
873977 I agree. Also, I kind of want to see if Daring could talk Bulwark into a bit of, let's say "experimenting" after that Poison-Joke-incident...
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At first I was like
But then I was like
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I SHOULDA KNOWN YOU WERE SKULKING AROUND HERE! TIME TO MEET YOUR MAKER! As in, you're roadkill. as in you're dead...
Whatever, Come at meh bro!
Nice story, but there's a fair bit you may want to edit.
That should be "her".
That should be "her".
That should be "thigh".
That should be "predator's".
I think that should just be "beside".
"predator's".
This is a recurring error, you wrote "tights" instead of "thighs".
"thigh".
That should be "lover's".
"thighs".
You should move that comma back a space.
That should be "companion's".
"lover's".
That should be "sent".
That should be "spent".
And I suggest deleting the commas and replacing "did have" with "had".
so basically, she's the mlp version of captain kirk