You forgot to capitalize the letter i a few times, but otherwise, I enjoyed this.

reading this out loud was a blast

For some reason I read the voices in Discord's head as the Personality cores from Portal 2....

Damn I know how Disord feels. Near the end of the school year is was in my P.E.class and the seniors were taking the exam because they got off a week earlier than everyone else. I sat there alone with my own thoughts for an hour and a half, no reading, drawing, talking to myself, just nothing. IT DROVE ME FUCKING INSANE!

Nice. Work a bit on your grammar and you've got some pretty good material here.

I was a little worried when I saw this. I have a plan down in the same vein, but yours is much, much lighter than I was thinking. Whew Entertaining stuff. Quick and to the point.

Pretty good, except for some grammar issues. Otherwise, I will...

Not troll you since November, 1987.

Okay so this one is off the scale random, i couldn't help myself!

See if you can spot all the meme references

A little short but i'm firing off idea's at the moment

....I so want to play a game of Chaos Tennis right now... Seriously, I'm loving this story.

DISHHARMONY LOLOLOLOLOL

(at teh end)

This is very interesting and well written

Is this going to eventually form an overall plot, or this going to be series of oneshots starring Luna & my favorite elder god?

Speaking of Luna, is her season two persona part of your headcanon? 'Cause the dialogue is one caps lock short of the Royal Canterlot Voice.

Third question: Am I making sense right now? Reply if you need explaining.

Someone does it right!!!! We are disharmony!!!

From being the writer of this story, you have earned:

>>853100853100

still not sure exactly about the plot, just writing as it comes to me

Yeah, this is at least past season 2 episode, she's a little..cheeky in this

More or less

>>852729852729

Love your story 'believing stories'

If anyone has any more questions or ideas on how to improve etc feel free to comment!

>>854903854903 Thank you

This grade of random/chaos actually works perfectly for Discord it just fits.

Keep up the good work and que to the chaos. (insert Discord emoticon) (seriously this site needs Discord emoticons, at least one)

This is awsome but near the middle you wrote that Luna threw up her arms

Everything is going to plan? Oh, boy, things are about to get very interesting.

Discord... being discord.

Perfect story.

Hey, watch out for capitalization. There was more than a few times you forgot to capitalize I. Also, a chapter should never be under 1000 words.

Oh Discord, you so silly. and in response I declare MOUSTACHES FOR EVERYONE!

ok nice

i want thier to be a scene where everyone meets bob and how Discord is slowly lossing his mind to the others until one wins

Bob....WILL DESTROY US!!!!!!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was hilarious! You should continue this story sometime. I really like it how the chapters are so short, it's a good break from the 5k words stories I usually read

First, I liked it. These stories are marvelous

Discord is best Psychopath

Can't wait to see where this goes.

Oooh, I wonder what Discord's planning.

I never left.

Good to see your back in the game.

>>11563931156393 Why thank you

>>11565451156545>>11565921156592 All in good time

>>11572871157287 Good to see some people might still have faith in me

If any noticed the change in tense in the last speech, that wasn't a mistake

not bad only complaint is its too short XD

still hope to read more!

The hell of stone.