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ReikoRye 127

Joined May 2012
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    ReikoRye's Stories (1)


    I'm Twilight Sparkle and I've got a story for you if you want to hear it. Its a story of how Ponyville was blown up by one mare and her cupcakes. The reasons why and even a little bit of story about myself. I don't get a lot of time to tell you the story so it will take a few visits, but trust me it will be worth it.

    First Published
    4th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    24th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 14h ago · · ·
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    o.o

    oh pooey pinkies blowin up stuff:twilightoops:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 10h ago · · ·
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    "Tick. Tock. That was the sound the little clock made"

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 8h ago · · ·
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    :yay: i like the idea of exploding cupcakes!! I want to read more of this story!! Definitively i am going to track it :twilightsmile:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Wow! No sooner than I submit it and go to bed come back and people are already reading it!:yay:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This story is really great!! No, wait... It's fantastic!! I love the way the story is told, that makes it 20% cooler! :rainbowkiss:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh Celestia, this IS fantastic!

    I love the way Twilight is speaking to the reader as if she and him/her were sitting and having an afternoon tea. I also like the bits of comedic jabs at her friend's characteristics (loved AJ's reminding to buy milk!). Aside from a few spelling errors, I'd say this is one of the more interesting fics I've seens that doesn't take itself seriously, even though the premise can become one. It's like watching an episode of Seinfeld.

    Great work and I hope you continue it soon :raritywink:

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