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ShadowSteed


I Am ShadowSteed! I Hope To Read Your Fanfics & Even Write One Of My Own! ^ _ ^

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A ex-patient from ponyville hospital thought he had seen it all until one day a head injury causes him to be sent to the renowned Ponyville Hospital where he meets the loving Nurse Redheart who tends to his every need and is happy to do so. He is happy with everything she is doing..... That is, until she decides to do what she can to extend his stay. He will soon figure out why she is being so nice and will either be in for the night of his life, or his final stand.

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Comments ( 30 )

:flutterrage: MOAR!!!

*cough* first *cough*

This sounds... actually really interesting! I'll read later.

will read later when a little more substance is added; I like the idea behind the story though, should be interesting :raritywink:

This, to me, seems like a perfect cross between "One who Flew Over the Cukoo's Nest" and Stephen King's "Misery"..... anyway, you might want to do a spell-check over this including the story's description. Good Story, though!:pinkiehappy:

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when you know you're boned and there's not a gawd damn thing you
can do about it

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calling it now, trace amounts of poison in the pancakes to keep him from leaving the hospital

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You are a genius!

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Are you by any chance related to Sherlock Holmes?

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There is a distinct possibility. Whether the possibility is a true or a false one, I do not know. But I do know it's a distinct one.

Well, I'll admit, if more nurse's started having sex with me at random times, I would make the hospital my new god dam home. Anyway, pretty good story so far, interested to see what will happen. :twilightsmile:

Hmmm.......why the doctor, though? I mean the other nurse I could understand because she wouldn't let Redheart take care of him. So why?

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The doctor knew that his sudden illness was because of poisoning, not something related to his head wound.
With the doctor gone, she can know make up some other reason too keep him there longer and through suspicion off herself.

well that was a strange turn of events

soon the gears in his head will get moving.

are you still working on it
Good story though :twilightsmile:

1088971 Yup. It's going along as inspiration hits me. Updated every week. ^ _ ^

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNN!

I shall now scream like ACRacebest in his reaction to the season 2 finale
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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I took a long gaze at Nurse Redheart for she looked absolutely beautiful in her gown, but than I took a look at the stallion. I was stunned when I came to the realization of where I had seen him before.

He bore..... an exact likeness..... of ME!

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well this can go realy bad or realy realy bad

How i met my twin brother...

well holy flying ass monkeys shits getting super cereal:rainbowlaugh:

I shall now scream

There is many small mistakes here and there. Some issues with formatting. I suggest finding an editor. Interesting concept.

only thing i have to say is FUCK YES now beat the living shit out of the fuck nut :flutterrage:

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