Unique, interesting, and moving. I like it a lot.

Pretty good, my only gripe is that the inserts were misaligned, and that made it difficult to find were they belonged. Also, near the end, you may want to clear up the issues with Tank's health. I can't understand a word of it besides "I will outlive Tank."

Other than that, good story!

Cool story!

Nice work! I liked how you put lines through sentences and such

And you made it sound just like Rainbow Dash, so that was pretty cool.

You have earned yourself a like, well done. Picture didn't go through. Still awesome though!

I liked it can't say ill favorate it though but I will give you a thumbs up and a moustache

This sounds enough like Dash that I now fear someone will attempt Pinkie Pie's diary.  

Still, I love the premise: they'd already made a reader out of her, so why not a writer?   And, subtly enough, she shifts from merely recounting events to addressing more personal matters.   It's almost too bad this is a one-shot.

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The lines might be miss aligned because you're reading on the 'normal' or 'big' text setting. I'll make the health stuff a little clearer and keep it as Rainbow Dash-ish as possible, which might take a while because once I change something everything will become out of place and the lines and blah blah blah blah blah .

hmmm. Sometimes a bit confusing, but overall it was okay.