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    • Alternative Harmony
      Twilight Sparkle must find the Elements of Harmony and stop the evil rising in Equestria.

      2,287 words · 239 views · 9 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Infection
      A regular everyday blank flank earth pony, that’s you, forgets to read the newspaper and ends up in an insane asylum after a misunderstandin
      1,200 words · 252 views · 7 likes · 7 dislikes

    Princess Celestia and Princess Luna died after turning Discord into stone. Their deaths sent the Elements of Harmony to who knows where and the land of Equestria divided into 6 states. A thousand years later, Twilight Sparkle is the princess of Equestria and resides in Canterlot with her family. She possesses one of the Elements of Harmony, the Element of Magic, and is perfectly content in her posh castle. But then, tragedy strikes as Twilight is framed for the murder of her father. To prove she is innocent, Twilight and her trusty servant, Spike, must gather the other Elements of Harmony and banish the evil that has begun to take over Equestria.

    Artwork by my best friend! Will update genre and characters as story progresses.

    First Published
    12th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    12th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You caught my attention.  Please, do go on.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    short prologue has whetted my appetite for more, i'd like to see where this is going. for now i am reserving judgement, though. :ajbemused:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    major ass questions. why the hell would the six elements of harmony (themes of which obviously mean they work in unison) be split into six states of government?

    2nd why would anyone doubt the element of magic? she's an element of harmony! a living saint for all intents and purposes.

    3rd the elements of harmony wouldnt have taken form without the spark to begin with! hence the 6 nations would have needed to already be friends to hold the elements. hence, the six nation shouldnt actually exist as they arent rivaling nations but rather a common wealth.

    4th lets not mention that countries ruled by the mane 6 is a disaster waiting to happen, seeing as only twilight is the only character archetype fitting the leader role.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>900146

    The 6th elements are scattered into different areas of Equestria and no one knows where they had gone, so it's just coincidental that they split it up into different states.

    I'm not quite sure what you mean, but they have a little doubt for the Elements because they have never been infused with them before.

    Equestria hasn't split up yet, but they do after the Elements are used and the Princess turn to stone.

    The mane 6 do not rule  the different countries of Equestria. Twilight happens to be the princess whose father does in fact rule Equestria alongside five other ponies.

    Overall this story is AU and therefore does not completely follow the laws of pony Psychics and Magic.

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The story is a little slow here but will pick up in the next chapter. And yes. Flitter Heart and Sweet Plum are actually based off of those toy ponies. Although I can't remember Sweet Plums' actual name.... Perhaps it is Sweet Plum. I don't no.

    :derpytongue2:

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