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This story is a sequel to What if: Rarity from The Three Sisters met with Chrysalis

Choosing whether or not to visit Chrysalis has been bugging Rarity for a week since receiving an invitation to do so. But there seems to be trouble brewing in the Hive and Rarity now has little time to act. Either way, her family's future rests in her hooves.

Now with a TV Tropes page! Warning: Will Contain spoilers.

First Published
1st Sep 2012
Last Modified
9th Apr 2014
#1 · 138w, 20h ago · 3 · · Chapter 1 ·

Is it my birthday or something?

#2 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1197465 I'd say it was mine, but that was a few months ago. I know I did something of a cross between this: :raritystarry: and a silent sqee though.

Edit: Well, that escalated quickly. I can't wait to see where this goes... Twilight's reaction should be interesting when Sweetie goes running to her though. I do feel sorry for the filly though. Having her view of her sister shattered like that all at once, but, what can you do?

#3 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Awesome.  Can't wait to see more.

#4 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1197465 If it was, I would kindly wish you happy birthday, but....your profile image scares the shit out of me...:applejackconfused:

#5 · 138w, 20h ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh, hello thing that I'm going to read so hard.

#6 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

2 views, 5 comments and 7 ratings.

D, are you a wizard?

ISS
#7 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

insta-faved!

#8 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I can't wait to see this continue.

#9 · 138w, 20h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

A chapter fic? WE ARE ALL DOOMED!!!

#10 · 138w, 20h ago · 7 · 2 · Chapter 1 ·

By Celestia's wavy pubic hair, Yes!

#11 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Sweet a new story.:raritystarry:

Whoa!:rainbowderp: It's more than a one-shot.

#12 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1197510

Stop. Changing. Your. Avatar.

>>1197595

So.

...wavy...

#13 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1197668 NEVAH! IT'S HOW I EXPRESS MYSELF! I AM A BEAUTIFUL SNOWFLAKE STEALING OTHERS ARTINGS! MY CAPS-LOCK APPEARS TO BE STuck-- nevermind, figured it out. (also, fun how almost none of these comments seem to be post-reading, right?)

>>1197491 Try seeing it as Happy Rainbow Rabbit. It helps somewhat.

#14 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1197668

Waaaaaavvvvvyyyyyy!

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:trollestia:

#15 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1197674

How is read I when 2 drunk Derp.

#16 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I was hoping one day we would get a continuation of this little universe. Great to see it happen. Really looking forward to see where this ends up. Entertaining as always WandererD. :twilightsmile:

#17 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

If this is the quality we get from a quick ob of writing WD, i'm okay with this.

Also, this storyline is very interesting. Please, keep going.

#18 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

You know, this story is really scratching an itch I didn't even know I had!

Changeling Rarity makes for good story telling.

But the plot thickens! How will Sweetie Bell handle the revelation!? :pinkiegasp:

#19 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Liked and fav'd with the force of a thousand suns! :pinkiehappy:

#20 · 138w, 19h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

“Probably not,” she snorted, then lied down next to Sweetie Belle.

lied=lay (I think. Can never be sure...)

And I swear to pupating Chrysalis that if Sweetie Chronicles doesn't visit this dimension, even unofficially, I will cry so much and whine like a bitch.

So appropriate that the songs I keep listening to tonight are "Ultimate Sweetie Belle by AlexS" and "Witchcraft by Pendulum".

#21 · 138w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

See what I meant, Wanderer? You can't write a one-shot, get a billion ratings, follow it up with another one-shot, and expect it to end there. Peer pressure at its best.

Now, It's time to read this story and drink whiskey, and Blackjack stole all of my drinks!

Wait, what?

#22 · 138w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This is starting to come off as a TV series!

When is the next episode? I know I haven't read this one but damn it, it's good to read more of Purity!

Seriously though, props on the idea and execution in your Three Sisters (mini-series? Episodic/dlc content?) story. And may have missed saying it last time bro, but glad to have you back and sharing more stories :heart::heart::heart:

#23 · 138w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Okie dokie, read it finally... should probably just edit a comment, but eh, might as well add to the growing horde.

Well, you've got one of the scenes I was definitely hoping for (Sweetie finding out... may the panicked shenans be exquisite) and some fun set up with trouble at the hive. Still some rough edges to this. Liked the flashback scene as well. Made for a nice intro of the situation between Sweetie and Rarity... good fodder for Sweetie remembering her sis being a bit off as a foal and proving that this isn't a recent substitution.

Honestly, I'm sorta 50/50 on this with some of its roughness, but I'm still enjoying the core of it.

~Lammy

#24 · 138w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This is wonderful. I am dying to see how it turns out.

#25 · 138w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Uh-oh. I wonder how Sweetie handles the knowledge that her sister is actually a shapeshifting insect pony with a literally multi-faceted personality. :unsuresweetie:

a3V
#26 · 138w, 18h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh, WD.

:rainbowkiss:

#28 · 138w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

YES, yes there is MORE:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Great to see continuing happen.

#29 · 138w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Hell yeah! I'm glad to see you continuing this series.

#30 · 138w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

It's only 2:32 AM right now. No matter what happens, I'll still say that today was A GREAT DAY!

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Aaaand, I came.

#31 · 138w, 16h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

"Don't worry, Sweetie. I've been a changeling since before you were born."

#32 · 138w, 16h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

The comments are almost as entertaining as the chapter.:rainbowlaugh:

And the chapter is good, real good.:ajsmug:

#33 · 138w, 16h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I was hoping for this. Good on ya 'D.

Also do you plan to send in this continuation and update the Equestria Daily page? Because you should.

#34 · 138w, 15h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

GOD DAMN IT! Now i gotta wipe this "White stuff" off my lap top *Grrrrr*

#35 · 138w, 15h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Adorable Changeling as your cover? THATS MY TERRITORY!

seriously though im loving these stories.

#36 · 138w, 15h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Insta faved because of the previous two stories. Thumbed up because it's just good writing.

#37 · 138w, 14h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

What is this I don't even, is this related to that "Who we are" story? Because I thought I read through the comments and someone said Rarity was the changeling but then it turns out you don't find out. But anyway, my head-canon has Rarity labeled as a Changeling.

Edit: What the hay! There were other series related to this and I didn't know about them?! This story is just so good! I must read the others!

#38 · 138w, 14h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

"maybe i should go to b... a new three sisters! who needs sleep anyway."

#39 · 138w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Dude anything you write is gold and I pretty much think that you made DIAMONDS!!! :pinkiehappy:

#40 · 138w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

And then Sweetie belle will run for it to the library, interupting Twilight Sparkle's reading by screaming "I NEED AN ADULT" before trying to hide  between her desk

oviously will come the explaination of what she saw

>>1198216 Where did you got that emoticon?

#41 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Run, Sweetie Belle, run! Get Twilight and the princesses.

They will tell you that everything is ok because your sister had her soul merged with an escaped changeling princess back when she was your age.

Really, robots today... so sensitive...:trollestia:

#42 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

why are goddamn dictionaries so sensitive today?

#43 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Well this day just got a lot better....

#44 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1198345 You eat Hershey's Cookies and Creame bars when you read fanfics? Me too! Who knew?

>>1198870 Well, it COULD be that kids today don't appreciate them, so they're feeling sensitive already...

And Deleteh?

#45 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I wonder what would happen if Wanderer D managed to write something that wasn't good. Would it be popular anyway? Hrrrm... probably.

#46 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>1198895 about cookies and creme.,.,

id like to eat them but im too young to work and my mom is stingy with allowence:pinkiesad2:

#47 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Ahh yes. Another Three Sisters story from Wanderer D. Time for some very early morning reading! Changling Rarity is best hybrid!

#48 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Hey, I like this. May I have another?

#49 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

So next we get 'Cutie Mark Crusaders Changling Exterminators! Yay!'?

:unsuresweetie::scootangel::applecry:

I love the Three Sisters stories.

#50 · 138w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I'm so happy.

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