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Wanderer D 18335153

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    Choosing whether or not to visit Chrysalis has been bugging Rarity for a week since receiving an invitation to do so. But there seems to be trouble brewing in the Hive and Rarity now has little time to act. Either way, her family's future rests in her hooves.

    First Published
    1st Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    1st Apr 2013

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    #1 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Is it my birthday or something?

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1197465 I'd say it was mine, but that was a few months ago. I know I did something of a cross between this: :raritystarry: and a silent sqee though.

    Edit: Well, that escalated quickly. I can't wait to see where this goes... Twilight's reaction should be interesting when Sweetie goes running to her though. I do feel sorry for the filly though. Having her view of her sister shattered like that all at once, but, what can you do?

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Awesome.  Can't wait to see more.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1197465 If it was, I would kindly wish you happy birthday, but....your profile image scares the shit out of me...:applejackconfused:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh, hello thing that I'm going to read so hard.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    2 views, 5 comments and 7 ratings.

    D, are you a wizard?

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    insta-faved!

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I can't wait to see this continue.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A chapter fic? WE ARE ALL DOOMED!!!

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    By Celestia's wavy pubic hair, Yes!

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Sweet a new story.:raritystarry:

    Whoa!:rainbowderp: It's more than a one-shot.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1197510

    Stop. Changing. Your. Avatar.

    >>1197595

    So.

    ...wavy...

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1197668 NEVAH! IT'S HOW I EXPRESS MYSELF! I AM A BEAUTIFUL SNOWFLAKE STEALING OTHERS ARTINGS! MY CAPS-LOCK APPEARS TO BE STuck-- nevermind, figured it out. (also, fun how almost none of these comments seem to be post-reading, right?)

    >>1197491 Try seeing it as Happy Rainbow Rabbit. It helps somewhat.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1197668

    Waaaaaavvvvvyyyyyy!

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    :trollestia:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1197674

    How is read I when 2 drunk Derp.

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I was hoping one day we would get a continuation of this little universe. Great to see it happen. Really looking forward to see where this ends up. Entertaining as always WandererD. :twilightsmile:

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    If this is the quality we get from a quick ob of writing WD, i'm okay with this.

    Also, this storyline is very interesting. Please, keep going.

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You know, this story is really scratching an itch I didn't even know I had!

    Changeling Rarity makes for good story telling.

    But the plot thickens! How will Sweetie Bell handle the revelation!? :pinkiegasp:

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Liked and fav'd with the force of a thousand suns! :pinkiehappy:

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    “Probably not,” she snorted, then lied down next to Sweetie Belle.

    lied=lay (I think. Can never be sure...)

    And I swear to pupating Chrysalis that if Sweetie Chronicles doesn't visit this dimension, even unofficially, I will cry so much and whine like a bitch.

    So appropriate that the songs I keep listening to tonight are "Ultimate Sweetie Belle by AlexS" and "Witchcraft by Pendulum".

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    See what I meant, Wanderer? You can't write a one-shot, get a billion ratings, follow it up with another one-shot, and expect it to end there. Peer pressure at its best.

    Now, It's time to read this story and drink whiskey, and Blackjack stole all of my drinks!

    Wait, what?

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is starting to come off as a TV series!

    When is the next episode? I know I haven't read this one but damn it, it's good to read more of Purity!

    Seriously though, props on the idea and execution in your Three Sisters (mini-series? Episodic/dlc content?) story. And may have missed saying it last time bro, but glad to have you back and sharing more stories :heart::heart::heart:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Okie dokie, read it finally... should probably just edit a comment, but eh, might as well add to the growing horde.

    Well, you've got one of the scenes I was definitely hoping for (Sweetie finding out... may the panicked shenans be exquisite) and some fun set up with trouble at the hive. Still some rough edges to this. Liked the flashback scene as well. Made for a nice intro of the situation between Sweetie and Rarity... good fodder for Sweetie remembering her sis being a bit off as a foal and proving that this isn't a recent substitution.

    Honestly, I'm sorta 50/50 on this with some of its roughness, but I'm still enjoying the core of it.

    ~Lammy

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is wonderful. I am dying to see how it turns out.

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Uh-oh. I wonder how Sweetie handles the knowledge that her sister is actually a shapeshifting insect pony with a literally multi-faceted personality. :unsuresweetie:

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh, WD.

    :rainbowkiss:

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #28 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    YES, yes there is MORE:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    Great to see continuing happen.

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hell yeah! I'm glad to see you continuing this series.

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It's only 2:32 AM right now. No matter what happens, I'll still say that today was A GREAT DAY!

    THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU

    Aaaand, I came.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Don't worry, Sweetie. I've been a changeling since before you were born."

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The comments are almost as entertaining as the chapter.:rainbowlaugh:

    And the chapter is good, real good.:ajsmug:

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I was hoping for this. Good on ya 'D.

    Also do you plan to send in this continuation and update the Equestria Daily page? Because you should.

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    GOD DAMN IT! Now i gotta wipe this "White stuff" off my lap top *Grrrrr*

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Adorable Changeling as your cover? THATS MY TERRITORY!

    seriously though im loving these stories.

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Insta faved because of the previous two stories. Thumbed up because it's just good writing.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    What is this I don't even, is this related to that "Who we are" story? Because I thought I read through the comments and someone said Rarity was the changeling but then it turns out you don't find out. But anyway, my head-canon has Rarity labeled as a Changeling.

    Edit: What the hay! There were other series related to this and I didn't know about them?! This story is just so good! I must read the others!

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "maybe i should go to b... a new three sisters! who needs sleep anyway."

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dude anything you write is gold and I pretty much think that you made DIAMONDS!!! :pinkiehappy:

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    And then Sweetie belle will run for it to the library, interupting Twilight Sparkle's reading by screaming "I NEED AN ADULT" before trying to hide  between her desk

    oviously will come the explaination of what she saw

    >>1198216 Where did you got that emoticon?

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Run, Sweetie Belle, run! Get Twilight and the princesses.

    They will tell you that everything is ok because your sister had her soul merged with an escaped changeling princess back when she was your age.

    Really, robots today... so sensitive...:trollestia:

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    why are goddamn dictionaries so sensitive today?

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well this day just got a lot better....

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1198345 You eat Hershey's Cookies and Creame bars when you read fanfics? Me too! Who knew?

    >>1198870 Well, it COULD be that kids today don't appreciate them, so they're feeling sensitive already...

    And Deleteh?

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I wonder what would happen if Wanderer D managed to write something that wasn't good. Would it be popular anyway? Hrrrm... probably.

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1198895 about cookies and creme.,.,

    id like to eat them but im too young to work and my mom is stingy with allowence:pinkiesad2:

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ahh yes. Another Three Sisters story from Wanderer D. Time for some very early morning reading! Changling Rarity is best hybrid!

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hey, I like this. May I have another?

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    So next we get 'Cutie Mark Crusaders Changling Exterminators! Yay!'?

    :unsuresweetie::scootangel::applecry:

    I love the Three Sisters stories.

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm so happy.

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I expected it to be great... :trixieshiftright:

    Instead it is AWESOME! :pinkiehappy:

    It is good beyond expectations. And it went 40 likes up while I was reading it. :rainbowhuh:

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    AWESOME:rainbowkiss:

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I don't know quite why it is, but I think you've hit on a very intriguing premise with these changeling Rarity stories (I'm sorry, but I just didn't like the changeling Twilight story nearly as much as these). I'm glad to see that your giving the topic the further development it deserves.

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Eeee! You continued this? Awesome :rainbowkiss:

    I'm busy expanding Flitter to a full story too now, btw... but I'm not posting it until it's further done :twilightsmile:

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oooooooooooooooh, dear...

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1198732 I have a better awesome face. Robo-Lyra

    #57 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Thank Celestia you continued this! I was dying for more!

    :pinkiehappy:

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowkiss: HOLY FUCKBALLS YES! I LOVE YOU WANDERER!

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    well.. didnt even think about reading this or not.. was more like 'wake up, get a smoke, check fimfiction, choke on the cigarette, read, thumbs-up, faved'..

    i love the universe you created here and looked forward to seeing more of it ever since reading the three sisters

    #60 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    THERE IS MORE?

    YAY

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    oh yeah... I can TOTALLY get behind this! *happy squee*

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "The squelching sounds were a bit distracting, but not by much. It sort of reminded her of the drone chambers where little drones would burst out of their sacks, jelly splattering all over the place... their cute little faces straining as they fought for the very first time to stand up; it was disgusting, by pony standards. She had to remember that."

    That mental image...

    So very cute... :pinkiehappy:

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yaaaaaay!Finally the sequel!

    #64 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    First time fav/liking a story before reading it! Then I read it. I wish I could like again.

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Simply awesome!

    #66 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Me last night before going to bed:

    Me just now when I wake up and find this in my Notifications:

    #67 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    After reading:

    Dammit WD, you don't NEED editing.

    #68 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    What's this? Is it Christmas and noody told me!? Well, Fine, I'll go hang out with Waddle Dee! He wouldn't leave me out of this-


    Never mind....

    #70 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    So much bucking YES!!! I LOVE the Three Sisters world! To quote Twilight: Yesyesyesyesyes!!!

    :raritystarry: :yay: :pinkiehappy:

    #71 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Please let this be a long one!

    Flutters and Thysa will get on so well, eventually.

    #72 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    XD WandererD nunca dejas de sorprenderme con tus historias =)

    #73 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I am happy you decided to write this. The last ones seemed well written to me and had a very intriguing premise.  I want "moar" as the internet says.  :raritystarry:

    #74 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Yeah, I can tell this is gonna get real good.

    #75 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ugh I hate the CMC so much sometimes. Do as you're told, not what you want to do. "Go get Twilight, it's obviously important! I'll tell you when you get back!" lol no I'm gonna sit here and spy on you cuz I can't wait herpderp

    #76 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1198001 Sweetie Bot: You're the best sister ever, and a shapeshifter?

    #77 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    My reaction upon seeing this:

    Hm, so far I can't say much other than I'm looking forward to how Sweetie Belle handles all of this. No doubt she knows about Changelings, or at least the danger the pose to ponies. Not to mention the fact that Sweetie's going to feel betrayed in some sense, or perhaps not even trust Rarity, thinking her to be an impostor.

    Well, aside from that, I'm curious to see what this trouble in the Hive is all about. Looking forward to the updates on this, whenever they may be.

    #79 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Choosing whether or not to visit Chrysalis has been bugging Rarity for a week
    That's not the only thing that's been 'bugging' her:trollestia:

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Fav'd and I haven't even read it yet.

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I was already elastic when I saw this fic pop up in my notifications, and I nearly died when I saw my fan art up there!  I think you're really trying to kill me with happiness here.  Holy smackerdoodles, I couldn't be anymore honored!  :pinkiehappy:

    Though I wish you'd told me that you're going to use that sketch as a cover so that I could have polished it up a bit.  She looks much more fabulous with a little color, no? :raritywink:

    Anyway, I really like where this is going.  Sweetie Belle is going to be so traumatized!   Read, liked, faved, and followed all the way! :twilightsmile:

    #82 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    A-an update!? I'm so happy I could just...

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wanderer D is at it again.  but why did Sweetie Belle come back?

    #84 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Man, when I saw this pop up in the features box, I squee'd SO hard. :D Ever since the "what if", I've wanted to see a follow-up and this is just. Plain. COOL. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

    #85 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1200380 She looks wonderful! :raritystarry: Which is why she's up there now as the new cover art! :raritywink:

    >>1200460 Well, here it is! :pinkiecrazy:

    >>1200434 :pinkiehappy:

    >>1200184 You got it! YES! Have a moustache! :moustache:

    >>1200044 Sweetie, always getting into trouble. Next thing you know she'll be replaced by her inter-dimensional doppelganger.

    >>1199828 Mientras tenga lectores, hare lo posible! :twilightsmile:

    >>1199023 It was a combination of peer pressure and inspiration. Oh. And fan art. Fan art reeeally triggered my mind.

    >>1198895 Not as much as it did with Past Sins!

    >>1198355 Glad you're liking it! :twilightsmile:

    >>1198321 Yes, I did! Thank you for reminding me!

    >>1197891 Oh, you so critical, Lammy! :heart:

    >>1197805 Well... she ran away screaming...

    >>1197465 Not exactly, but I guess you get an early/late present? :twilightblush: Also, checked and corrected the typo. "Laid" :raritystarry:

    #86 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #87 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hurrah! Purity is back.

    #88 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1200572

    Glad to be of service.

    #89 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1200572 Hey, it's in the second slot, isn't it? That should be good enough! XD

    #90 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #91 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I wonder how long it will be between the chapters. No offense, but while you write great storys, The Empty Room had breaks of months. :twilightblush:

    Be that as it may, I look forward to the next chapters.

    #92 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    New Wanderer D story? Guess I have to put off whatever else I was doing...

    #93 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Some stories are so good, even the author can't put them down.

    This is one of those stories.:moustache:

    #94 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YES, this is high quality story.  Please continue.

    #95 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    And NOW its colored? This cannot stand!

    #96 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1200796

    Well you'll just have to post some more chapters of The Spoken Word then?

    #97 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1200825

    Check your Favorites in 20 minutes.

    #98 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    nice. I read the other two stories and really liked them, so i'm certainly looking forward to seeing what will happen next

    #100 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm... Going to die. I'm actually going to freaking die now. that was just amazing! and only first chapter! MOOOOAR... ? :fluttershysad:

    ps, instafav'd. before even finishing the chapter. :pinkiehappy:

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