The girls are back at Canterlot High ready to take on anything with their new powers they got from Camp Everfree. However can they help another school that is filled with negativity and hate. Can Sunset help this school, with an old friend who is at the root of the problem? Can she stop this familiar foe or fall into negativity herself?
Some grammatical errors, but overall it looks interesting!
This is pretty good in my opinion, even if there were some rather ruff areas and stuff that interrupts the flow at some points. Either way I can't wait for the next part.
Also, have you considered mentioning this being a sequel or something to A Betrayed Dazzling Rises?