Wow.....that was pretty good, Beside some errors in language,i can see this is going to be a good story. Can't wait to see more of this.

Take a like and keep writin' and readin'

>>844158844158 I can only recommend you to listen to the song, if you havne't done so already. just search it on youtube. Would have the same picture as my storie, if FiM wouldn't be making trouble at the moment.

>>844189844189 I have listened to the song, several times this morning actually, but wat does that have to do with you story. If your making it the same as the song that story has already been done. Make it different, but have fun writing it.

Keep readin'

>>844287844287 Well, I read Awoken already. BUT I have a totally other interpretation of it than the author of Awoken.

>>844294844294then thus should turn into a very good story now shouldn't it...

As always, keep readin'

>>844313844313 Let's say, you will (hopefully) read the ending twice in non-believeableness. (MADE A NEW WORD )

>>844326844326

Okie dokie lokie...I can't talk anymore. I must go train one of ma friends in basketball. I'll be back online later today...

Keep readin'

>>844326844326I love Awoken as in the song.You need to continue .

>>847927847927 Oh, that's great. So you like ma story? I will continue writing today. If there won't be a new chapter till the end of the week, I'm obviously dead don't worry. This is the last week of school for me. Then I have holidays. And since I'm not moving anywhere (WAAAAAAY TO LAZY) I will HAVE to continue this New chapter will already be up in 1 week.

I look that I can make it today.

>>849591849591

Cool...can't wait for the next chapter

Keep readin'

>>851134851134 I reallyreally tried. But I couldn't write today. Sorry.

>>851142851142

Its all good...just make sure it tries to gets done

I want to see how this turns out.

Keep writin' and readin'

An interesting interpretation... one that accommodate's an equally interesting structure.

So far, it's sounding good!

~Syn3rgy

>>853205853205

Till now, ther isn't really a point in saying that my interpretation is interesting, since this was more of  a introduction chapter for the characters (59; 204; 296; 325 i think) At the moment theres no point in doing more, since I'm really inn a lack of inspiration. i wil write on it, but  it could last a week.

You commented on my storie..... AWESOME I'm so proud now...

A little late, there's already an awoken fanfic xD jeeze!

>>906975906975

I know that. It's also in my favorites. But I have another interpretation of it. So why shouldn't I write one myself?

I am really sorry about the lack of updates. I try to write the new chapters, but I just don't get farther. For my own sake because I feel so bad about this I corrected two errors.

>>10411031041103

I feel your pain

>>21380722138072

Heh, thanks, but at least I am working on something again, though it's not this story. But maybe, just maybe I'll get through my writer's block when I finish something. Oh, also, since I started this story my grammar and my overall knowledge about the english language including vocabulary improved greatly, means if I write a next chapter it'll look a bit better, probably.

>>21402582140258

then good luck

>>21406772140677

Thank you kindly ^w^

>>21406792140679

your welcome

Hey man, u should keep thos goin...... or is ur witers block still killin ya

>>25302002530200

I've pretty much changed from writer to artist ^^;

>>25302092530209 really? wow, didnt see dat comin' oh well, hows it been

>>25302152530215

Pretty good, I guess. and for you?

>>25302202530220 pretty good, cant really complain

>>25395162539516

That's nice.