[ Belongs in the Kilala97's Universe with Anthea, Starburst, and Turquoise] [Fluff story of Anthea n Turquose ^-^] [Nothing belongs to me, just wanted to write a ship fanfic of my favorite couple within Kilala97's OCs.]
Anthea notices Star's discomfort over the fact that besides a special breakfast made for her, can't connect with her on a deeper level like her brother, Nightlight, can. Being Twilight's apprentice, she has learned enough to make her own spell that can trade her horn for Star's wings for an entire day.
But, of course, there's the issue of being blind. Anthea's unicorn horn was the closest thing to sight for Anthea. Without it, her blobs of color becomes an infinite black. Without her blobs, Anthea can't even hope to fly without the fear of crashing into something. Will her coltfriend, T (short for 'Turquoise') be able to guide his marefriend for an entire day as she tries to maneuver around her black world?
Don't use spaces in between periods when you're doing "..."
That's a sentence fragment. Did you mean "But before he could put it in his mouth, Twilight cleared her throat at him."?
Redundant, basically this is redundant.
Wording on this is kind of weird.
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oops, yeah. I'm still fairly new to fimfiction. Working on it is new considering how I'm used to other fanfic sites like fanfiction.net
Imma edit that right now.
I liked the story
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