Carina and Jon

TCarina and Jon: Rule Never Changes
MLP: FiM
Mystery
Sad
Tragedy
One night, Carina doesn't return home after a visit to Headrest Center, making it very hard for investigation around the mall, as she wakes up in some far away crazy land with a structure that seems alive.
Human
OC
Chrysalis
Changelings
Josh Crapo · 6.4k words · 345 views

Jonathan Vibe is a filming urban explorer in the state of Minnesota. After filming in an empty mall, Jon goes outside one day to see what looks like a meteor. After arriving where the "meteor" crashed, he finds what looks like a mix between a bug and a pony. The only thing is, it doesn't remember its past.

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JazzyWaffles #1 · Apr 17th, 2019 · · ·

But then, there are times I get caught. Usually, I don’t get punished, and I don’t even get caught too often. But when I do get caught, the worst I get is a fine hefty enough to erase my salary from the past few videos at the time. Every video, I earn about ten to twenty dollars within the first week, only slipping downhill very slightly. So, I guess I should be fine as long as any fine doesn’t exceed its current maximum.

I probably shouldn't be jealous about $20 for a vid in its first week. But dang I'm jealous. It took me from 2013 to 2018 to make $100, the payment threshold for adsense.

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JazzyWaffles #2 · Apr 17th, 2019 · · ·

In fact, I don’t know what this thing is. At first I thought the legs ended with paws, but no, they’re hooves. So this thing may be some kind of alicorn. I don’t know though. What do I do? It’s not moving, so it must be unconscious.

I'm fairly certain alicorn was only used to mean winged pegasus in a single obscure source prior to MLP. Why do fics do this to me?

Finally, I turn off the camera and tuck it back between the seats my friend and I sit on. After my message, I hear some chirping and a few buzzes from behind me. Uh oh. I never knew there were crickets and bees in here.

His friend seems barely extant. Does he have a voice? Opinions? Reactions?

“What thing?”

Oh. He's just oblivious. Fair.

After five hours, we finally arrive at Jon’s target place. It’s a rickety looking house that has two levels and a porch, and all of it is a mix of white and brown. Whoever this Roman is, that human’s house doesn’t look or feel like a place I should be in.

Of course not, it's a liminal space!

I say “no wonder” because, correct me if I’m wrong, but Carina just might be a changeling. Whoever abandoned the house must’ve had a hard knock life at the time of moving out.

Oh? One who bears forbidden knowledge.

“Huh. This is quite the peculiar pal you have with you. She has four legs, a pair of wings, two fangs and a horn. What other features does she have?”

Nobody in this story reacts like a real person.

When I open the door, appearing in behind it is one huge creature that has five look-alikes of Carina behind it.

Oh shoot it's Chrysalis. Hide your kid, hide your... kid? Just hide your kid tbh.

...

Oh that was mildly disappointing

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