This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls 3: Carrie Sparkle
In-between the final 2 chapters of 'Equestria Girls 3: Carrie Sparkle', Rough Rider is summoned to court for all the crimes he committed. Trixie is asked to be a witness, but she is reluctant to talk about her rape in front of an entire courthouse. But when she meets Rough Rider's past victims and hears their stories about him, she learns that she does not have to go through this alone. Can the girls bring Rough Rider to justice?
Rated T for rape and swearing.
Also, if you know someone who is going through what Trixie is going through, here is the phone number for RAINN: 1-800-656-HOPE
Chapters (6)
Interesting start so far. If I could make one suggestion for you, even though this takes place between the last two chapters of your Carrie Sparkle story, maybe you'll want to set this story as a sequel to that story to help it get a little more attention.
i'm quite immature so i at first got a bit of a giggle out of the fact the rapist's name was Rough Rider. But after that i took it much more seriously because i don't like rapists. i'd throw a rapist into a cell full of them and see how they like it.
Friendly word of advice, link to Equestria Girls 3: Carrie Sparkle.
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This will get a lot darker as the story goes on. Trust me.
Here is a link to Equestria Girl 3: Carrie Sparkle for those who haven't read it yet:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/352571/equestria-girls-3-carrie-sparkle
7763752 Not that much darker. I know dark themes, and I am sorry, but I don't think you will be able to write anything too dark.
I've seen some dark shit. My great great grandfather was a friend of Hitler when he first became Fuhrer. That is not a joke, and it is a terrible fact of life I've had to live with, knowing someone in my family knew and befriended an evil man. That's not the darkest thing about my family tree either, but you really wouldn't want to know that stuff. Especially the tortures one of my ancestors endured during the Witch Hunts of old.
Thinking about it now makes me realize there might be a reason after all as to why I'm so messed up in the head.
Still, I'll keep an eye out for your story. Who knows? You might be able to write something interesting. Dark? I am sorry but I don't think so. Years of secrets unearthed and being on the internet have shown me true dark themes. But something interesting? Yes...yes, I think you might manage to do that, and a good story is always one that is interesting to read. You have my attention so far, so let us see if you can keep it up.
By the way, my great great grandfather actually left Germany a day BEFORE the first Jews were executed as part of Hitler's evil plans. I can't imagine how he must have felt when he inevitably heard the news...I mean, what does one even think of that?
7763752 You know what? I'll give you a follow, just to track the story. I'll give the story a watch if the next chapter proves intriguing. Deal? Also, if you are willing to look past the fact I have a pretty dark family tree, would you like to be friends?
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You've got a deal! Prepare for some PG-13 stories in the next few chapters.
7763802 I actually worried you'd be awkward after I revealed that bit of my family history to be honest. You have no idea what a reflief that is. You can have a follow not just for the story tracking, but because you've earned it.
Trixie probably deserves harsh punishment for this, but she has already been punished enough. Far more than she deserved. Far more than anyone deserves.
That means four in total, correct? If five you meant to say only four other victims, besides you,
Wow.
Just... wow.
Coco's the fourth victim, isn't she?
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Yep.
I was waiting for this chapter. Her best friend didn't believe her? Well, I hope Suri attends the trial, even if they aren't besties anymore.
This is so amazing I have no words.
I HOPE Rough Rider GETS HANGED
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HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!
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amen
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i hope goldberg, big e, The Big Show, and edge spears Rough Rider, and then stone cold dose the stunner on him, and then the undertaker can do the last ride on him.
I Hope You Gonna Back, And Finished This Story
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I think Suri’s already in jail by this point…