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wolfgirl66
Hi bronies, and pegasisters. Luna is best pony.
wolfgirl66
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........... Ok?
ponies dont wear gloves.
Not bad. A few grammar and punctual fixes could be made, along with more spacing of paragraphs; though that last is more for ease-of-reading. Don't see how this got such a low score when there are far, far worse abominations out there. Your first ponyfic?
59796 Yes, it is.
61548 Good show. Just keep working at it, you've got the potential. Anything else in the works?
And if you ever want/need help, just send me a message
61673 I'm actually starting a new story.
It'll be longer.
62071 Cool! Can't wait.
I really think you should have a description. The readers have to know.
is not amazed.