It has been centuries since the slender ponies murdered his ponies. now he finally has a chance to get his revenge, and not even the two princesses can stop him.
This is my first story so criticism is welcomed.
I like what you have here. just a very major tip. its spelt "Prologue"
Im guessing the black ponies are along the lines of a large force of slenderman ponies?
>>832737832737 Thanks for that, and yes those are slenderman ponies.
By any chance, would you be in need of a pre-reader?
>>832834832834 Not right now, but if I need one in the future I'll let you know.
>>832853832853 okie dokie lokie
Hi there!
Haven't read it yet, but you should know you used the wrong "its" in the description.
>>832963832963 Thanks for telling me.
This has potential! Tracking!
>>833311833311>>832983832983>>832858832858>>832963832963 Duuuuuuuude........
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